Mortal Zhang Tie: I Have a Chensong Pot

After reading the 18 chapters you wrote, I decided to cut it off immediately. What kind of immortality can you cultivate if you have no brains?

I can't write much, I look full of self-righteousness. I feel like I'm a fool because I'm so awesome

The function of the golden finger is not explained clearly. On the first level of Qi training, he takes the thousand-year elixir to trade, and after finishing it, he sets up a stall on the spot.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, the author is not good at writing novels. Let's find a factory to drive screws

You are so arrogant. You are always asking for a thousand-year elixir. You also lured foundation-building monks to Caixia Mountain. If they don't keep an eye on them for decades, how can you let Han Li do it? A book of exercises only requires 2 spirit stones and 4 hundred-year elixir is enough. What's the use of a golden finger? It's just a waste.

Studying medicine can't save the starting point, even mental illness can be coded.

The writing is not bad, and the plot deserves further consideration. With an adult's mind, it is unreasonable to go to the market with a thousand-year-old elixir at the first level of qi refining, just like a child carrying money in a busy city. It would be better to go to Huangfenggufang City and go straight to Wanbaolu, which has been cultivated for six to seven hundred years, and ask the shopkeeper to contact Li Huayuan to become a disciple. Li was looking for medicine everywhere at this time, so it was a two-way trip. And although Li was stingy, his character was not bad.

The writing is so difficult to understand In the first chapter, how did the pig's feet escape the corpse refining situation? After reading it twice, I realized that the physical body can also enter the pot. Then, Doctor Mo was helpless and he couldn't see the pot? The first three chapters of the fight with Doctor Mo were confusing and I couldn't understand what was written.

If you write fan fiction, just write fan fiction. If you get together and dress up like a gangster, you will be ruined. It's just to save trouble and don't have to design the background of the characters and the acquaintance process with Han Li.

The book reviews are all bad. I read a few chapters before deleting them. I came across this book by chance but forgot all about it.

Your Chensong Pot has a low development level. It is only equivalent to a portable space warehouse, emergency shelter, and teleportation transfer station. Then, what about other functions?

You are the first one whose writing is not as good as al's. Al's writing can only read a few chapters, but you haven't even made it out of the chapter.

If the 12 fields of Chensong Pot can have a more powerful effect than the Heaven Palm Bottle, it will mature in 2 days and 22 hours after planting. Applying the spiritual grass in the world of cultivation, if no matter what spiritual grass is planted, it can mature in 2 days and 22 hours.

The anger is too strong, the writing is too depressing, it seems like there are no good people in the world, and they are all targeting you, thinking you are the center of the world? Is it normal for everyone to step on you?

Why did Han Laomo help Li Feiyu but not Zhang Tie?

I accidentally brushed it and sprayed the author all over my body. I have no desire to see it.

It is already very dangerous for a person who is on the first level of Qi Refining to sell elixirs for a hundred years. But if he sells elixirs for a thousand years at the first level, do you still want to listen to your explanation of the structure of the mortal world? It's just a one-stop search for mixed souls.

Recently, it seems that there is another mortal who writes about the Dust Song Pot. Did you secretly reincarnate the one who told me that I have a Dust Song Pot?

Just the part about beating Han Li was fun to watch, the rest was inexplicable.

Although the writing is not great, there is still some useful information, such as how to prevent jade from touching porcelain.