Leisurely Life in the World of Cultivating Immortals

After Chapter 130, it was a complete mess, the classic started high and then went low.

The author's writing style in the first two Red Mansions is sophisticated and natural. Because the female characters have the foreshadowing of Red Mansions, each character is very clear. As a result, the urban part of this book was childish and awkward at the beginning. It got much better later when it focused on the world of martial arts. However, I felt that because I was anxious to change the map and advance the plot quickly, all the characters were made up with facial makeup and their personalities were vague. When I entered the world of cultivating immortals, I turned it into a low-level novel, and I couldn't keep up with it until today.

I still feel comfortable watching Yuanzi's laughter and cursing.

It's great, and he's an experienced author.

Speechless......

I only have one doubt. How can a loser who can't live happily in today's society become eloquent, unrestrained and unrestrained, able to lick and warm, and his IQ suddenly increased several times? If you have this ability, you can live well without time traveling.

Pig's feet enter the sect. . . In the last major sect, for example, the sect was in decline. The sect leader was injured in the Nascent Soul stage, and his wife was in the Golden Core stage. After accepting five disciples in the Qi training period, the sect was so poor that even spiritual rice could not be eaten dry. Wang Jianlin sells Wanda online every day, but his net worth is at least tens of billions even though he is down and out. Even if a sect in the Nascent Soul stage is in such dire straits, it is impossible for it to be so bad that it can't even afford to eat. Even if you pluck a leg hair during the Nascent Soul stage, it will be enough for you to eat during the Qi Refining stage. You said that you are down and out and don't have the resources to cultivate the golden elixir and Yuanying. That's just an excuse. After five Qi refining periods, I had no resources and couldn't even afford to have enough to eat. . . This is cultivating immortality. It's not a time of famine. . .

Cultivation is for longevity, strength is for self-preservation, and longevity is for desire. It is not because of the desire to live forever that we have the desire. It is because of the desire that we want to live forever. I hope everyone will realize that desire is the prerequisite for longevity, and longevity is a means, not an end. The immortality in the eighteen levels of hell is nothing but torture, no one wants it. Many authors treat immortality as their goal when they write, putting the cart before the horse, and finally write that they are neither humans nor ghosts. Don't talk about how to fight for immortality. Three days of confinement can make people go crazy. Immortality that cannot satisfy desires will only make people want to die.

Have you ever practiced immortality? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

I had already spoken about it and it started to collapse when I left the county. At that time, someone had to argue with me. Of course, this collapse is compared to the beginning. At the beginning, I would like to call it a fairy seedling. The expectations were too high and the later part was particularly bad. Otherwise, it's pretty good without thinking, at least it's more fluent than the similar sentences on most rankings.

What are you writing about, the obscene thoughts of diaosi? Isn't this a more appropriate name?

Have you passed each other? You just write randomly, taking it for granted

In fact, the author is short-sighted and just writes about a world. There is no need to write about the spiritual world or the fairy world. Or start from the spirit world at the beginning and then ascend to the fairy world at the end. Human world - spiritual world - fairy world This kind of writing is only suitable for matryoshka dolls. In the later stage, we need to continue to add settings. There will be more and more characters appearing. If the writing is not good, it will become a cliché.

Why do so many authors, after a book has achieved very good results, switch to Xianxia 😅 and the results are basically unsatisfactory. Cousin, Liu Ting, and many more. I liked their previous works, but after changing to Xianxia, ​​there was no improvement. Of course I still hope that the author can write better and better 😆

No matter how many likes and how many days, I believe it won't be too long ୧₍˄·͈༝·͈˄₎୨

The old problem is that the novice village collapses when it comes out, and there is no plot design at all.

I just went to see the manifestations of the Holy Spirit in modern times. Cultivating immortality in a different world, can't I go to fantasy to see it? Thousands and thousands of copies. As much as you want. But two or three books about traveling between two realms that are well written and can be talked about would be good.

If you write about the city, just write about the city. Every time you write, you have to say in advance that you can write well because of your coy attitude.

Why is traveling between worlds so popular now? This thing is old.

Isn't this just like the harem novels from the past few years? They say they are so fresh and refined, but in the end they are still the same routine of a stallion starting a harem.

Your Siheyuan is the best of its kind that I have seen.

The heroine tag?

This book has become a romance novel.

I started reading this book in June. As of now, I have cast a total of 91 monthly votes. Let me share my thoughts I started reading it from the author's The Longest Dream. At that time, I felt that the author's writing, plot and ideas were very suitable for my appetite, but I didn't buy the whole book. Later, I read the previous few Red Mansions. The word count was too long and I couldn't bear to order them. They were pirated copies. I had never read the original Red Mansions and related works before. After reading the author's books, I got a preliminary understanding of Red Mansions. Thank you to the author, and then I ordered them all. They are very interesting As an ordinary reader who has already established trust with the author, I was very happy to learn that the author had published a new book, and it was still a fairy tale. I read it excitedly, and I was not disappointed. The series of stories in the mortal world had ups and downs, and the protagonists and supporting characters all had their own character arcs. With the author's strong writing skills and thousands of words a day, I listened to the latest chapter every morning while driving to work, and I began to enjoy the half-hour commute every day until the plot reached the spiritual world In fact, I felt that something was wrong from the coup in the mortal world. It was not until I entered the spiritual world that I realized that the author was becoming more and more perfunctory, or that I could not feel the author's sincerity. The plot began to have no structure, and the characters appeared were even more superficial. The oppressive feeling given to me by so many criminal masters and strong sects was not even as good as the Seventh Realm Martial Saint whom the protagonist ambushed in Shenji Valley at the beginning (I can't remember the realm, it was the protagonist's uncle who brought loyal servants to support the protagonist). The time when they were preparing to die together), several confidants have completely become decorations, their only function is to gather people for each mountain of Five Elements Peak, especially in the recent battles, just like playing house, the enemy comes, the protagonist draws his sword, and the enemy is killed. There is no foreshadowing, no turning point, and no one even knows why they are fighting. The so-called conspiracy is that the sinners sent three masters to sneak attack, and then they were killed, and it was tasteless Then there is the text description after entering the spirit world. I have never understood why metal, wood, water, fire, and earth must be described one by one every time when fighting or practicing. Then when the six sects come to the Five Elements Sect to worship the mountain, the six sect leaders must speak one by one for every dialogue. Until today, in the latest chapter, the protagonist arrives on the moon. I started to describe the stars in the solar system one by one. I think this is a kind of slackness in writing, or water. Sometimes I think that when the protagonist arrives at the Five Elements Sect, if he enters some Bagua sect at that time, wouldn't he have to write the same thing eight times every time In short, at present, I am gradually disappointed with the senses of this book. I have started to read it slowly, and I have also started to switch my listening time on my daily commute to other novels. From the author's chapter, I learned that this is the first time for the author to write about this kind of subject, and that he has recently been uneasy at home, personally. In other words, I am willing to continue to support the author. I spend about 100 yuan on Qidian subscriptions every month to comment, and I get about 20 monthly tickets on average every month. Starting from June, all the monthly tickets are given to this book. I hope the author can read these words of mine I have always felt that there is a bond between the author and the reader. Whenever I see a piece of text, the resonance will bring the author and the reader together regardless of the time distance. I will continue to support the author in the future. I also hope that the author can adjust his status in time and bring better works

It's a big house. If you want to challenge new themes, read the whole Korean entertainment industry. There are several girls in a girl group, and there are nine girls in a Girls' Generation group. Nine people and nine colors. It's a natural soil for harem literature. It would be a pity not to have a harem.

I seriously suspect that the author has changed his vest or gone to another platform 🙂🙂

Most people have been screened out from the beginning

Housegirls are some of my favorite authors, so it doesn't matter if I can't continue writing, just come out and say you're safe.

No new books are published. They are all on sick leave. New authors can't stand the novels anymore. Old authors have stopped updating 😭

Wu Liang, please hurry up and open a new book, whether it's a period novel or a novel about Red Mansions! I came out to earn money for milk powder for my children 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡[f n=47]😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡