The King Ordered Me to Patrol the Mountain

The early part of this book was pretty good, but when the pig's feet got involved in the grassland, it made people want to give up the book. Do you want to write about martial arts, or do you want to write about fighting for world hegemony? The writing is getting more and more biased, making people all over the world look like fools. It's floating

I didn't want to be verbose at first, but after reading the update at noon, I felt restless all afternoon. Thinking that I am not the kind of good person who likes to hold things back, I still came here to complain. First of all, I do not object to the protagonist having a harem. After all, it is an ancient setting, and it is normal for a man to have three wives and four concubines. What's more, the women around men can indeed reflect their abilities and charm. Of course, it's not that men have to rely on the number of women to express their abilities. Forcibly adding a harem here is putting the cart before the horse. As for Zhou Nini, I mainly thought Deng Xueniang's reaction was very interesting. Zhou Nini herself actually had no sense of existence, and she was completely ignored in order to save others, so it didn't matter if she was taken away. However, the Demon Sect Saint also appears. Hey, I don't say anything. She has a young background and will definitely have a great effect on the protagonist. The past two days have come. I skipped two chapters, and then read the last two chapters. Well, another weird family of three appeared. It's interesting. The setting of the family of three in Monk and Nun Dao is very interesting. It's really interesting. I thought it would reflect the brotherhood? After all, Zhou Xiaoshan's blind mind could see it, and the result, tsk, can't be regarded as robbing his brother and his wife, but it's almost the same? I clearly know that people like her, and I obviously said it was for Zhou Xiaoshan's sake at first, but with this development, I can only say that I am disgusted. What is the use of this little Taoist nun? I know that the protagonist is short of people, and his parents are good at martial arts and have a good background, but even if you get a little boy, and then see that the child is pitiful, well-behaved and sensible, wouldn't it be good to find a playmate for Jiuniang? Does it have to be a young girl? Oh, maybe later it will be discovered that this girl is very talented in medicine or martial arts, and is a master of martial arts theory like Wang Yuyan... But I still want to say, wouldn't the effect be the same if it were a little boy? I don't know why, but nowadays historical novels, especially fictional ones, have to deliberately give women to the protagonist in order to build a harem. The key is that the routines are exactly the same! It was clear that the saintly girl hadn't been written yet, but suddenly another one came out. As long as the protagonist continues like this, there is obviously something wrong with Zuoyi, and then he still doesn't have a long memory like this? Is it really so charming that no one feels uncomfortable with it? Okay, the protagonist has a great halo and the protagonist is cool. If you write like this, why don't you write romance? Well, I remember that I also laid the foundation for a woman from Hei Bingtai, and then she treated illnesses and saved people and brought her into the harem? Tsk. The layout and structure are very good, I have specially moved them from the grouped bookshelf to the ungrouped ones. The results made me sick today. Personal opinion only. I just posted it to vent my frustration. Don't take anyone seriously. I thought this book needed to be read with a little bit of thinking. After all, a historical novel cannot be said to be a novice novel without thinking, right? Oh, why am I so naive?

The author writes very well! I stopped reading after reading a few chapters. . There are a lot of uncomfortable points. But then I accidentally saw the second book written by the author, which is the concubine's romance. It is really good. It doesn't matter if you have a harem or not. What really matters is the highlight of the plot and the progress of the writing. In the final analysis, writing is the ability to write a story so that readers can understand it clearly. If it is smooth, it is qualified. If it can make some readers feel involved, it is a good article. If it can satisfy most readers, it is excellent. The first half of The Concubine's Romance, I personally felt that the writing was too sad, and the plot twists were too dramatic, but it was still readable. Later, the author insisted on his own outline and conception, boldly wrote the story, and came up with the whole story. He truly wrote my story in the Red Mansion. The characters and plots in it gave me a pleasure in reading and a strong sense of immersion. There were also some pornographic jokes that were very useful haha. There has been no news about the new work since then, so I haven't paid much attention to it. It wasn't until the Qin official next door recommended it and read the review that it was very good, that I came to read it and found out that it was a new book by the author of Shuzi Fengliu. I just finished reading 33 chapters in one go. The progress in writing is really gratifying, and the reading feels very comfortable and smooth. I hope the author will persevere and tell the story he wants to tell well. Looking forward to it!

The name is tacky, and the plot content and language are high-level. At first, I just wanted to take a look, and then I was pleasantly surprised to find that it was a good book 😄

Not bad, a rare good book.

I just read Chapter 45 today. I will reward you with 500 coins for the plot of Chapter 45. This is well written!

I still like to read Red Mansions written by the author, and I look forward to you reading the new Red Mansions book.

The dirty girl's method of dividing lines and making mistakes seems to have improved again!

I also want to read The Red Mansion written by the author 😭

I've read three books about Dirty Mother, and I can't stand it anymore. Mainly, I feel that the behavior and other shaping core of the protagonists in the three books are similar. In some aspects, they feel like the same person, which is a bit boring. Finally, I wish Er Niang to continue to break through herself. I also wish Er Niang this book to achieve better results and have a good time together. I will wait for you in the next book.

I feel that many plots have a familiar feel. For example, the protagonist returns to his hometown to pretend to be cool. The book is quite interesting, but I just wish there were less clichés.

After reading two chapters, I will comment. The author writes well at the beginning, and his writing style is concise and experienced. There is no introduction to the world except for the world view. I hope you won't write too much. There are really not many good books.

#One. . , I? 1

Chapter 136 Express Delivery It is said that Qingyun Mountain is famous and attracts the attention of interested people! One day, a slovenly old man quietly followed the refugees up the mountain, but he really planned to steal the first half of the Baicao Jing... Lin Ning took Jiang Taixu and Wu Yuan to wander in the village. Suddenly, he felt a chill running down his back. He turned around and found a pair of malicious eyes staring at him in the corner. Before Lin Ning could ask, Jiang Taixu and Wu Yuan had already pounced on the old man like evil tigers. They fought two against one and took down the old man with more than a hundred moves. However, the old man had a iron mouth and said nothing. Lin Ning didn't ask, just stared at the old man and silently recited the law of heaven in his heart. The law of heaven popped up a prompt and found the second half of the Baicao Jing. Do you want to learn... How to grow dragon marrow rice?

Why do I feel like a happy little scholar?

This book is quite nice, the writing and the plot are okay, but I feel that the fighting scenes are not exciting enough and the passion is not enough I hope the author will not write a stallion novel (that is, the kind of female characters who have no emotional line and have no big role. Do not accept female characters, such as Zhou Nini, the little Taoist nun, etc.? Nowadays, there are too many female supporting characters, I am a bit worried)

The novel written by the author is very interesting, keep up the good work

Currently reading Chapter 4, I think the book is okay. But I advise you not to comment on it. The woods are getting bigger these days and there are all kinds of birds.

After playing, the number of investments has been exhausted.

I don't understand what's wrong with having a harem? If I have the ability to travel through time, I will do it. Are you happy if you insist on giving me a daughter? When did those girls from the female channel come to the male channel?

Alas, it's slow, pp coolness is gone for the first time😏

Congratulations on getting it on the shelves, no more words. Not much of a reward, but a true book fan.

I have a monthly ticket. Can I add fines to it?

Another 5 pushes, the monthly ticket is exceeded, please give it to me next month, dirty bitch, I will try my best to give you all the chicken blood!

I counted on my fingers and found that I have been chasing this book for several months, and I have given no less than three monthly tickets. Isn't it too much to be careful?

If you think it looks good, give it a like and leave.

My sperm? Not given? What a loss, your monthly vote is in vain

The first recharge of my life is dedicated to you. I like your style very much. I am not used to the Red Mansion series! So pretty! Can it be refined?

It's a very good book, but everyone pushes me away when I see it, even the maids. It's so disgusting.

😥I originally wanted to keep watching! But I really can't stand it anymore! A master of martial arts and a scholar at the same time! There is a system on one side and nothing on the other! Author, why don't you just change the name of the Ming and Qing dynasties and write about bringing a system to cultivate the land and raise people, train the army, and charge for occupying mountains. It should look better! You have no sense of immersion at all. After writing for a long time, you didn't go anywhere in detail. Instead, you got the flying sword out again! It's so confusing... I don't even know what you want to do! I'm not a troll, and I'm not trolling anyone! Anyway, I've read almost 200 chapters and I still don't understand what you want to do? Of course you can't do it either! Can I earn words by spelling them together? Then just copy it from the dictionary and save yourself using your brain!