Rebirth in the Leisurely Life of the Red Age

"Rebirth in the Leisurely Life in the Red Age" - Xiancao (Note: The following content is suspected of spoilers, please read with caution. Also, the evaluation is highly subjective. If you have any objections, you can discuss it. Relatives are not guilty. Diankou De) Excellent: 1. The writing style of an old author may not be good, but the writing style of an author who writes Red Mansions fan fiction and gets good grades is really good in writing other books! It's super fun to watch! 2. The characters are too vivid and vivid, including the various forms of living beings in the courtyard and the warmth and warmth of the people; the gentleness, laughter and curses of the several heroines; and the nine children, all of whom are like dragons (the eighth child is almost). Especially the nine children, each of them is a protagonist template. To borrow the words of a book friend, they are: "The boss is stable, the second is a monster, the thirty thousand cannons are blasting and thundering, the fourth and fifth are enjoying themselves in the mountains and flowing water, the sixth is as I wish. The sky sits on the golden throne, Lao Qi is a hard-working protagonist, a solid stone ground by sweat. Lao Ba feels like a painting saint, and every painting in the later period is a secret book. Lao Jiu is Tang Zichen's template + Wang Chao's understanding + Ba Liming's realm +. God's pursuit of truth." 3. Blessed are those who like to look at the shortcomings of parents. Siheyuan fans are reading a plan, and this article is particularly sour. Fighting with others is endless fun! 4. The God who educates children! I was really mesmerized by the part where the male protagonist traveled all over the country with his nine children. As a father, it is really awesome to be able to reason with your children from a peer perspective and respect them. 5. The hooks in this book are just right, two hooks (negative emotion value collection system) and (infinite progress). It may seem too wide at first glance, but it looks great from the book. The first third is about the plot of the courtyard, so the system plays the main role, relying on some things from the previous life to save the family. After entering Hong Kong Island in the middle and late stages, the (progress) hook comes into play, and the plot direction has even begun to become fantasy. But the two complement each other and continue to play a role as the plot unfolds. Unlike other novels, the plot is very abrupt. Missing: 1. The protagonist's portrayal is somewhat fragmented. ① In the early stage, from the reader's perspective, everything the protagonist does has a purpose and is very utilitarian, but the author keeps writing about feelings about family and country. The two combined, it looks slightly uncomfortable; ② In terms of the protagonist's emotions, about 80% of the full text , and inexplicably accepted Gao Weihong (the author said it was an open-ended result, but judging from the description, it was basically done. The extra story didn't even cover it up). The problem was that he had promised his second son that he would only have four women, and now he accepted another one. Even in the later part (about 90% of the full text), the author's feelings about the Red Mansion got the better of him and he also accepted the actors who played Lin Daiyu and Xue Baochai. Well... The author settled the matter through the words of the four heroines and an apology to the second son, but it seems awkward no matter how you look at it. 2. Some of the author's settings are a bit problematic. ① The system setting is that the things produced by the system cannot change the historical process, but this kind of thing cannot be changed if the author says it will not be changed; ② Some people have died and come back to life. What impressed me deeply was Lou Xiu's ex-husband's father. In the first part, he seemed to have died due to an explosion, but in the second part, he was alive and was killed by the protagonist. 3. Description of Qin Daxue and Li Zhiguo. The images of the two characters in the author's writings, the first and middle period, of serving the country and the people, and sacrificing their small family for everyone, are very wonderful under the author's exquisite writing style. Although no matter how you look at the emotional line, it is all about the protagonist's lust and the needs of the plot (Master River Crab). But things got worse and worse later on. (Chapter 392, Three-year Agreement) At that time, it was said that he would retire at the age of 50, and then in later chapters, when he said that he was worried and could not retire, the character of Qin Daxue was already a bit broken. A heroine loves the country more than the protagonist. From a God's perspective, without the help of the protagonist, this heroine would have died long ago. After all this calculation, the book friend was very dissatisfied with Qin Daxue. The same principle applies to governing a country. There is a section in the article where the protagonist and the eldest brother even complained a little because they did not help the people in the country. Of course it would be nice to be the people under Qin Daxue's rule. It's not too late to be grateful to such parents and officials. But book friends are all ordinary people, and they usually just read for fun, and the protagonists are usually the protagonists (This sentence only represents me), so, alas. Summary: Rating 9 out of 10. Looking at the book as a whole, there is nothing wrong with it. These shortcomings are just for me personally. Just read it, it's a really good book. Supplementary 1: I encountered something unlucky while reading. You said it doesn't matter what water or ink stains are. Even if you say that the protagonist is disgusting, I pretend I didn't see it. After all, the protagonist is indeed a bit utilitarian. But did the author write too well or did some book lovers eat too much? Have you begun to sympathize, empathize, and even take on the role of the great masters Jia Dongxu and Jia Zhang? Make the protagonist the villain? I'm really convinced. Supplement 2: After reading this book, I understand a truth, that is, the author should rely on the subscription results to write the book, rather than the comments. The author's book "Spring in Red Mansions" contains Empress Yin. I hate that the protagonist accepts this character, but many people like it, so I get good results. The parents in this book are short-lived, and some people don't like to write too much about it, but the author's average subscription is rising, so I'll keep writing. Supplementary 3: There are 7 people who have a relationship with the protagonist in the book, four heroines, one beauty, and two of the author's feelings about the Red Mansion. Qin Huairu and Chen Xueru, one is a needle practitioner and the other is a business tool. Supplement 4: You can watch the extras, but I didn't include them in the evaluation. Because this is no longer a fantasy, reversing time and space, "Resurrection, my love" really made me happy, haha. Just watch it for fun. After all, the finale is considered BE. It would also be nice to resurrect them all for a happy ending in the extra episode.

This book is interspersed from a TV series. From the perspective of a commoner with a small character, he participated in New China's ignorance from a young age, looking at the world with raised eyebrows and seeing how the friends around him lived. There was some envy, some disgust, and some learning. He held up the light and felt the stones to cross the river in the dark..., And our protagonist Yuanzi is a golden-fingered man who is majestic but also true to his feelings!                                                                            This is: It's all up to you to laugh, yell, and curse, Let the friendship and justice enter the Tao and talk about eternal life!

This book was born out of Siheyuan. In fact, it is not about those trivial things, but a serious period article. It is meant to be fun to attract readers in the early stage. After all, the humorous dialogues, distinct characters, and silky plot grab people's hearts from the beginning. There are few books that can make me continue to follow them. Even the water chapter that some readers think is very interesting to me. The author's writing style is sophisticated. Even if he is not a great master, you can tell at a glance that there must be articles submitted or things related to the pen at work. He must have read a lot of books. He loves history, geography, literature, etc., And he has never accumulated it over time. I'm tired of experience and don't have such strong writing skills. However, the title of the book does not mention "Siheyuan", so it can indeed go in this direction. The chronology must look at those historical figures, regional customs, etc. This latest copy is very good, leaving out some romances and big bosses. It's very interesting. The protagonist's character and personality are very upright, with 70% orthodoxy and 30% evil. His personality is clear about love and hate. It's not white and white but a normal person's thinking. He doesn't lick a dog and has a touch of aloofness. I have an INTJ personality and I really like the way this protagonist behaves                 ，，，， It would be great to read books that are meaningful and not boring to life earlier. At least they will have more guiding significance for me in reality, instead of reading some books that waste my time and meaning. I have read the ordinary world, and I really like Sun Shaoping's character and the discussion of fate in the book. Struggle and the impact of changing times on people provide a positive motivation when life is unsatisfactory, so I really like period literature. My new home has 1,000 books, including Chinese and foreign classics, novels, philosophy, economics, history and humanities. I just want to read more meaningful books. The book is not only for oneself, but also for the next generation. In the growth of one generation, family atmosphere education is the first teacher. Because I have gone through the wrong path and suffered too many mistakes, I can learn lessons and avoid the next generation from taking the same path. Therefore, when I read the characters in the book, they attach great importance to family atmosphere and education. I really feel that the five brothers in my father's family are not united and have not interacted with each other for a long time. It is a lot of mess. Education is really important. I have never seen a family like ours in the whole city. Fortunately, the next generation are all normal people. I have always thought about how great it would be if I could be reborn and re-plan my life. Of course, even if I am reborn, I will be a little better than ordinary people, because your actual ability determines your upper limit. I have also thought about reading so many books and reading one when I am in a good mood. After all, who doesn't have a dream to be a writer, but reality always slaps you in the face, let's just read books and pictures to have fun The author's thinking is really rigorous, After all, it is very normal for Shuangwen to open a golden finger in this era. There are many restrictions and conditions. You can have a romantic relationship without being obscene. You will never retaliate with kindness but you have the bottom line principle. The historical features and humanities of that era are just described in this way. I admire it very much. I am convinced of the author's skills, and I am currently reading "Miscellaneous Memories of the Cowshed, Ten Years of One Hundred People, 1966-1976, yesterday's China, yesterday's youth. I really feel good about it, and I feel sad about the ten years I wasted. It would be great if I didn't step into any pitfalls at every step of my life." Read it in one go and wait for updates. A small reward is not respectful

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ This book is too particular about words and sentences, the tone of address, the surrounding environment, the dialogue, and the inner activities. Anything less would lack the flavor With better management, this book cannot be buried. There are too many poisonous weeds at the starting point, and not many can calm down and write seriously

Personally, I feel that this kind of period writing is a fairy tale. It has shortcomings, but the flaws cannot be concealed: 1. "Enter the city without changing history." The separation of the basic settings can be regarded as some kind of statement on the safety of the universe, although it is selling dog meat on the head of a sheep; 2. The stitching monster that the basic values ​​of the prosperous era are in line with the mainstream conclusion of the past thirty years is hard to reconcile, but that's it, it can't make the author unable to write a book;

"Wandering, wandering, the boat swims quietly in front of the door..." Just like a time-honored brand has a facade, and an old neighborhood has a sign, this old courtyard also has its songs. This song flows quietly in the streets and alleys, in twists and turns, in the wind and rain, and in the fantasy of the years. This is the best of times, and people here are on fire. There are the trumpets and sparks of the steel factory, the ringing of bicycle bells under the bright light, the whispers of parents, the cheers of tomorrow's vitality, and too many surging voices. This is the worst of times, and people here are terrible. There are the snickering of thieves and pickpockets, the misfortune of the nooks and crannies, the swaying of a single wanderer, the crazy screams of fate, and too many nondescript prayers Only this courtyard, following the children's songs, is slow and quiet. No matter how many disputes and troubles there are, it is just a snapshot of the courtyard house. Laughter, laughter, and lamentations passed over its brick walls, and were scattered in the air and pecked by birds. When the birds were shot down by slingshots, the sky lost a flying shadow. This is the most serious blow to the Siheyuan. It never cares about the shortcomings of the family. It only cares about the age and years The Siheyuan does not care about the people living there. It thinks that when people are trapped, it feels like home, and leaving the cage feels like a struggle. For a long time, Siheyuan has been secretly observing. (To be continued?)

There really isn't much you can see if you book the entire courtyard.

It's still pretty good, I don't have a harem for the time being, and the more I get behind the scenes, the more I have the appetite.

It's so well written, there aren't many books I can read from Qidian. Come on✊

I started reading Qidian Novels in 2008. I have read many novels by great writers, but I have never paid to read them. This is the only novel I have fully subscribed to. I hope there will be a second one.

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After reading it, I personally feel that this is the best Siheyuan novel. The life in the Siheyuan in the early stage is very interesting, and the chapters about the death of my family and my mother in the later stage were really touching and moved me to tears. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

I have written more than ten million words outside the house, and the results of several works except for The Longest One, Dreaming of Pulling the Crotch Point, are all very good. Why is it not platinum, a master level? How do Qidian author ratings come from?

The front part of this book is quite good. I have seen the best courtyard house in it, really. But I got bored after I went to Hong Kong. I don't know about others. Anyway, I couldn't watch anymore even though I was dancing.

In reality, the old man did not survive the return. I hope the author can let Li Yuan help him set foot on Hong Kong Island to witness the return. That is not only his personal wish, but also the wish of all Chinese people. The writing is very good and it is very comfortable to read.

The more I write about it, the more in-depth it becomes. The author should also be a remarkable person in real life.

Seeing this, I will also say: the dragon gave birth to nine sons, each with his own magical power! Just like the author said that there is no facial expression, it must have distinctive characteristics. Fellow Taoists, take a look and see if the nine children of Yuanzi are an extension of the nine ideas he wants to achieve. The word "source" is also the beginning of supernatural power! The eldest brother is loyal and filial, the second child is both righteous and evil, the third child is fierce and powerful, the fourth and fifth child are transparent and elf-like, and the sixth child is courageous enough to overcome obstacles! Lao Qi's forbearance and open-mindedness, Lao Ba's true temperament, a fairy figure! Laojiu's clear and elegant sky! You can take on some of the pig's trotters' roles, but don't be too controlling. Every road has its own pits and pits, and you should live a wonderful life of your own!

I remember reading the part where the pig's trotter jumps from the mainland to the Xiangjiang River. It was very uncomfortable to read. But at that time, there were no other good books to read, so I continued to read a few chapters and found that it got better and better in the later chapters. The whole book has been sublimated since then, and the pattern of the pig's trotter has become bigger. The whole plot jumps out of the small courtyard, and the appearance of other characters makes the book's sense of age even richer. Especially now, the growth of the descendants of pig's feet is not inferior to pig's feet at all. The development of the entire Li family is very practical and has correct views. I like this book very much. At the same time The previous foreshadowing allowed me to see the background of the big family, and this kind of background is not like the empty feeling of big families in other novels. It is a feeling that the whole family can survive only by the merits of the ancestors. I am very much looking forward to the Li family after the reform and opening up. Of course, it would be better if the book can be written by that time. Finally, the author's writing style is indeed very good. I won't compare it with other great books here. There is no point in reading it. I can only say that this book is not a god and it is unreasonable. I also hope to finish it later and write more things.

It's well written, and the plot and characters are very reasonable. The only thing is that the protagonist is too self-sufficient, not lustful, a man is reborn, what's the point if he doesn't pursue some power, wealth and sex, he can't even dream of something good?

? ? ? Not a single heroine? Author, do you want the protagonist to have a dream of bringing everyone together? How many lives does the protagonist have? You let the protagonist mess around in that era. It's not that you can't accept multiple heroines, but you are in this sensitive age and you step on a few boats and act like an octopus. Is this really a man? I'm so excited. I was really optimistic about this book. The author has a lot of experience in writing and works hard. He's almost beginning to take shape as a male video star... I won't say anymore. I really like this book. I wish the author a huge sales of this book! Goodbye Jianghu.

Putting Qin Daxue on too high a pedestal makes it feel like she doesn't really match up with Yuanzi, and it feels like she wasn't put together by a group of people, which changes the quality of the theme of leisurely life. Yuanzi has been living a very tired life. He doesn't owe anyone and has been carrying the burden forward. I feel that Qin Daxue is the one who feels sorry for him the most, and is the one who burdens Yuanzi the most. I don't know what the author's purpose was in designing this character. Anyway, I think Qin Daxue deducted one point from this article. It's not that the writing is not good, but that it doesn't match Yuanzi, which makes the theme of leisure go away.

When I went to Hong Kong, I felt like I started reading fantasy novels.

This book is all about the helmsman. It is not all about the helmsman and below. I don't understand those above the helmsman and I haven't tried it.

I have been following the author's books since the trilogy "Outside the Red Mansion", and the progress has been very obvious with each book. By this one, it is almost complete. How do you describe this progress? Outside the house is not a talented and perverted author like Mao Ni or Squid. Looking at their first novel, I know that these two guys can at least become masters of online writing. When I first started writing "Outside the House", I was still very young. I remember the bandit book the most. I couldn't control the writing and became whiter and whiter. At that time, I wondered if this guy would be useless. But I was surprised that "Outside the House" was able to learn lessons. He returned to Red Mansion, which he is good at, and slowly accumulated it. I don't know when the writing style, characters, and plot became more and more stable, and he gradually became more proficient. I've only read half of this book, but it's very well written, but due to the subject matter restrictions, it's probably difficult to become a hit. But as long as you maintain this mentality and rhythm, and think about the next book well, you'll hopefully become a god!

Although I have read more than a hundred books at Qidian, there are not many I want to comment on after reading them. In the first book, I was so angry at Chen Zhagu that I felt a lot of emotions. This is the second book, and I was moved by it. I really like this eloquent writing style, and I excerpted a lot of golden quotes. Many authors of online articles have fantastic ideas, but few have solid writing skills, and they tend to be timid when writing. But this one is completely different. There are almost no nonsense moments, especially the dialogues, which completely fit the environment and show a strong ability to control language. I like the wit and humor of the Siheyuan, the strong family ties of the old Li family, and every supporting character who appears has flesh and blood. I read it heartily. It is really a good book that was misled by the title!

Speaking of Li Yuan, the world of mortals washed away his heart for two months. He gave away four wives, two younger wives, and then sent away several children one after another. His dusty heart finally washed away all the fetters. Guided by a little inspiration, he traveled to all parts of the earth. , I finally found the last magical opportunity left by my predecessors at the top of the Himalayas, finally broke through the barriers, took the last step in the world, and followed the guidance of my predecessors... (A new chapter is about to begin, and the story is to be continued...)

It is definitely a masterpiece among the Siheyuan type chronicle novels.

This is a touching book. Thank you to the author for his hard work. Although it is a refreshing article, it makes me laugh and cry. As for the extras, you can read them or not, and it does not affect the superiority of the main text.