The Romance of the Concubine in the Red Mansion

Lin Daiyu/Xue Baochai: It's a pity that the virtue of stopping is pity for Yongxu's talent. Jade belts hang in the forest, gold hairpins are buried in the snow. Qin Keqing: Love in the sky, love in the sea, and love in the body are illusory. When love meets, it will lead to lust. It's honor to speak unkindly, but it's really peaceful to start a fight. Jia Tanchun: Talent comes from being shrewd and ambitious, and he was born in the last days when his luck has declined. I shed tears on the Qingming Festival and look out to the riverside. The east wind thousands of miles away is just a dream away. Jia Yuanchun: Twenty years of distinguishing between right and wrong, the pomegranate blossoms illuminate the palace. The three springs are competing for the first spring scene, and the tiger and the tiger meet and return to the big dream. Shi Xiangyun: What's the point of wealth and honor? Parents disobey them when they are still young. Open your eyes and hang the slanting light, the water of Xiangjiang River passes by and Chu Yunfei flies away. Miaoyu: If you want to be clean, how can you ever be clean? The clouds may not be empty. Poor gold and jade, eventually sinking into the mud. Wang Xifeng: All birds come from the end of the world, and they all know how to admire this talent. One follower and two people make three people dead, crying to Jinling is even more sad. Jia Xichun: It has been discovered that the spring scenery does not last long, and the pure clothes suddenly change from those of the past. Poor embroidered household girl, lying alone next to the ancient Buddha with a green lantern. Jia Yingchun: His son is a Zhongshan wolf, and he will run rampant when he succeeds. The golden boudoir flower and willow quality will last for a long time. Li Wan: After the spring breeze of peaches and plums bears fruit, they will be like a pot of orchids in the end. Like ice water, it is empty and jealous, and it is useless to joke with others. Sister Qiao: If things go wrong, leave Yungui. If the family dies, don't talk about relatives. Occasionally, I met a benefactor due to the help of the Liu family.

I have read a few Red Mansion novels from Qidian, including Drunk in Red Mansions, Detective in the Red Mansions, Struggle in the Red Mansions, and this one. I am not very impressed with the other books. I probably haven't finished them yet. I just remember that the detective drove like crazy while driving. Although there are some uncomfortable parts, overall this book gave me the best feeling, and I was still unsatisfied after reading it. In terms of emotional description and characterization, there were several places that made me want to cry. The poems were copied just right. The possible reasons for quitting are: first, the strategy depends on one's logical acceptance; second, the abuse of the master in the early stage, which I actually think is okay; and third, the harem, but the Red Mansion is not a harem, emmm. There is also a personality setting for the protagonist who likes to do things to perfection and test human nature. I personally don't like it and always wants to antagonize Jia's mother. Let's focus on the emotional line, which is also the source of my anger. There are a lot of female characters in this book, and I have written four of them: Ye Qing, Ping'er, Baochai, and Daiyu. Ye Qing's original character, the only remaining grandniece of the Queen Mother, is set up as a strange woman with great personal charm, respected by the second generation of the country, strong behavior, and because of her status, she is not bound by ethics. A lot of effort was put into planning the protagonist's throne. In the middle period, because he acted without telling the protagonist, and there was help that was good but unnecessary and might affect the protagonist's own plan, the protagonist was disgusted, and it might also disgust the readers. After taking the initiative to devote myself, the look and feel of the characters is much better. After all, there are many writings, and the characters in the later period are still relatively full. Ping'er, whom I met in Weimo, is considered to be the representative of the harem characters such as Qingwen Chunyan and other maids in this book. He has always placed his position very low. Because Ping'er took the initiative to help the protagonist when he was in trouble, his status in the protagonist's heart was different, and in the end he took a position second only to Daiyu. However, such characters often have their identities determined very early, and have a lower status and mentality. Therefore, although Ping'erhua writes a lot, except for the good old guy who cares for the protagonist, the characters do not feel three-dimensional. Baochai, the source of my resentment, has a lot of ink in the early and middle stages. Apart from Ping'er and other low-status characters, he is the first to express his feelings to the protagonist and confirm the relationship. After many twists and turns, the author still insists on keeping the rules, allowing Daiyu to come up from behind. First of all, in terms of expressing his feelings, Baochai is deeply bound by etiquette, but he openly expresses his love in front of his sisters. However, the author barely depicts Baochai's inner struggle in the article. And until the later period, spanning so much space, the two people experienced so many hardships, at many points, the author could try to write Baochai more brilliantly, such as the decision that night when his identity was revealed, such as Baochai's first time ( The author really understates how someone like Baochai surrendered his body so easily), but in the end, he used it to describe his guilt and the conflict with Ye Qing, and then it dissipated when he said it was gone, and it was gone when he said it was gone. From the beginning, the author writes about Baochai in the direction of breaking through the constraints of ethics. The whole relationship has twists and turns, but it seems to be spinning in circles. Finally, it ends with the plot of mother killing daughter. Is it to express the tricks of fate? I won't say much about Daiyu. On the whole, it writes about her own exquisiteness, her growth after being relied on, and her dependence on the protagonist's life and death. In fact, a character like Bao Dai has the original bonus, but the author is too partial to Dai Yu. Finally, several times in the article, Emperor Chongkang lamented how poorly Heaven treated him. I also want to sigh, how poorly the author treated Baochai!

Come on, after all the hard work, how can I not enjoy a few hundred chapters?

For me, I read the ending first before reading the article. The main purpose of the online article is to have fun, and I can't accept the incomplete ending. This finale is quite supportive. From the finale to the postscript, the writing is wonderful. And it's rare for me to see "parents" and "depends" used correctly. But why did copying Xin Qiji's "The Case of the Blue Jade" make me want to vomit? Although it was appropriate for the occasion, it was played out instantly. Isn't it good to use the Qing Dynasty and the Republic of China?

Sure enough, all Confucian scholars like whoring

The writing is too cruel, and the protagonist's halo is too great, which is a bit discouraging.

I really hope that the author will write a Red Mansions fanfic about traveling through time to become Baoyu. The biggest regret after watching Dream of Red Mansions is that Bao Dai's love did not start well and end well. The author is so talented, can you use your pen and story to rewrite this ending?

My aunt's operation is as good as ever, but the tiger's poison cannot eat its seeds. The consequences of drowning are very serious. In ancient times, aspiration pneumonia would definitely lead to death. It can also easily cause symptoms such as uterine cold and infertility. Auntie, this is the rhythm of GG! 😎😎😎

Queen: Sister Lin Defei: Ye Qing Xianfei: Xue Baochai Shufei: Ping'er

After reading it for several days, I found this book to be really good.

As a fan of Red Mansions, I have only read two volumes of The Concubine's Romance and Dreaming into the Red Mansions, and I have read a hundred or so chapters of Zuifan and Struggle. Comparatively speaking, the worst one is a drunkard, who intensifies conflicts at the beginning, quarrels and abuses, which is a bit boring. Struggle is interesting, but after watching The Bastard, I no longer want to watch how a Bastard breaks away from the shackles of his family. I feel that the Bastard has already handled the family relationship very well. He does not bow his head, nor does he rely on going through many tough situations, bowing his head and forbearing, and letting the conflicts accumulate and suddenly explode. Although it is indeed as the old lady said, a little less humane, it is understandable. The main thing I think about Meng enter is that it is based on integrating into the family system. In fact, I think it is more interesting. After all, it is a family. Although it cannot eliminate the struggle, I think there is no need to make it too intense. But dreaming about the back of the red building sucks 😂

Hurry up and open a new book or I'll send you the razor blade.

There are too few updates, but the content is really exciting! However, I clearly feel that the author's current plot has entered a shallow water area. The time has come to test the author's creative skills. Make good use of it and strive to start well and end well. Although as a reader with very little energy, it doesn't have much effect, but I still have to support the author! Great book!

The main book of the Twelve Hairpins of Jinling: Lin Daiyu (love), Xue Baochai (ruthless), Jia Yuanchun (love), Jia Tanchun (love), Shi Xiangyun (love), Miaoyu (love), Jia Yingchun (coward), Jia Xichun (love), Wang Xifeng (love), Qiao Jie (love), Li Wan (love), Qin Keqing (love). The secondary book of Jinling's Twelve Hairpins: Xiangling (loveless), Xue Baoqin (love strong), You Erjie (love regret), You Sanjie (love strong), Xing Xiuyan (love poor), Li Wen (lovely), Li Qi (love smart), Baozhu (love tired), Baochan (love charm), Ping'er (love proper), Jiao Xing (love), Ruizhu (love disaster). The Twelve Hairpins of Jinling also have sub-books: Qingwen (love and courage), Xiren (love and advice), Xiaohong (love and resignation), Jinchuan (love and fierceness), Zijuan (love and wisdom), Ying'er (love), Sheyue (love and defense), Yuanyang (love and trouble), Siqi (private relationship), Yuchai (love and resentment), Xianxue (compassion and understanding), and Liu Wu'er (love and compromise). [Three copies of Jinling's Twelve Hairpins: Baoqin, Shishu, Painting, Caiyun, Cuixiang, Snow Goose, Autumn Pattern, Bihen, Chunyan, Xiuju, Yanhong, Jiahui. There are four volumes of the Twelve Hairpins in Jinling: Cuimo, Zhuo'er, Feng'er, Lotus, Sister Chan, Sister Shan, Amber, Qixi, Yindie, Xiaoque, Qiutong and Si'er.

Ye Qing's self-narration: I am an inconspicuous person living in modern society, with an ordinary wife and a child. Suddenly one day I traveled through time and transformed into a girl. I found that I was still a child in a big family in ancient times. I thought that in the future I could only marry when I reach my age, but suddenly one day I discovered that this is actually the world of Dream of Red Mansions, hahaha God help me, I have watched Dream of Red Mansions no less than 10 times. I want to cause trouble, I want to be the emperor, and I want to build a big harem. But what the hell is this Jia Cong who appears out of nowhere? Slowly I discovered that he was also a time traveler. I have to hide myself so that he doesn't discover my true identity, get closer to him slowly, use him, instigate him to rebel, or at worst sell my body, become his main palace first, then kill him when the time comes, pick peaches and become the queen directly, his harem will take advantage of me, I'm so smart.

I have only read the first two hundred and twenty chapters. I have never read a book so slowly at the starting point. It took me three days to read this small part. Not to mention the characterization of the characters in the book, the author's control of the rhythm alone is impressive. The book is not a brain that exposes all the background foreshadowing, but like a gurgling stream of water. It's so eloquent that it's very comfortable to read. The purpose of writing a book is to have a balance between hardness and softness. It's unreal to be tough all the way to the end. It's written like a running account. It's also the first time I've read a Red Mansions novel for so long. To be honest, I'm from the Northeast, and I'm somewhat of a northern chauvinist. Prejudice, as the saying goes, I am a straight man. I have never seen Dream of Red Mansions before. I feel that it is not as good as Three Kingdoms, not as good as Water Margin, not as good as Journey to the West to Conquer Demons and the Righteous Path. I just wanted to find an aesthetic novel after work to relieve my boredom. I didn't expect to see The New World. The character portrayal, analysis, and plot foreshadowing are all wonderful. Maybe I'm short-sighted. I haven't read any other books in Red Mansions. It's an aesthetic novel. But just speaking of the ones I've read, the writing style of this book is not inferior to that of The Butcher of the Song Dynasty. The plot trend is indeed more ups and downs than The Butcher of the Song Dynasty. Of course, that's not to say that the other book is worse. The book of The Song Dynasty is more like home. National sentiments, fighting in battle, and passionate men are different from the purpose of Red Mansions. Most of the authors who write fan fiction of classics will also write their own opinions. It can be seen that the author has carefully analyzed Red Mansions. Unlike the characters of the Three Kingdoms, they have already been determined at the starting point. Most of them are like that, Water Margin fan fiction. Nowadays, most of them are similar to The Butcher of the Song Dynasty. It can be seen that the author inevitably neglected the characterization of the characters while laying out the plot. I wrote wherever I thought. The author did not change a single bit of Red Mansions but turned a desolate and heartless book into a refreshing article. It just made me feel like, if I really traveled through time, It is precisely the feeling of such a scene and the various forms of living beings in Dream of Red Mansions that the author really imitated. This is the most difficult part. I have never written a book, but I have written high school compositions. I also know the difficulty of characterization. The newly added main characters are not portrayed as the original ones, such as Ye The young master and the great scholar of the Song Dynasty are all rare talents in the author's writing. This barely outlines the dynasty changes outside the Jia family, and it also highlights the decline of the Rongguo family. After reading this, I feel that although the story line of the Tian family is a bit ridiculous, it is still a good book so far. The protagonist's life experience is even more wonderful. It is said that no book can be written without coincidence, but the protagonist's life experience is really coincidental. The descendants of the previous dynasty are his mother, and the abandoned prince of the current dynasty is his father. However, in the Jia family, he is regarded as a prostitute and is not allowed to see him. It has to make people sigh and look forward to what will happen when his life experience is revealed. I have written so much here and there in order to express my feelings in order to avoid having a bad night's sleep. Haha, if you want to read it or not, you can save yourself the trouble of criticizing me. The book is a good book, and the strategies are also good strategies, but it lacks a strong air. I hope to give more roles to the military in the future. I don't know what the follow-up will be, so I will read the book.

​ ​Thanks to the author for his careful creation and bringing a good reading experience to us readers. Today, when Internet literature is gradually saturated, Internet literature has gradually become a pool of stagnant water. However, I saw a "retro" atmosphere in this novel. Since the development of online novels, a new subject will appear every once in a while, driving a new wave. Martial arts, fairy tales, fantasy, fantasy, history, urban... Each of them was once popular on the Internet, and even dominated online literature. The author wants to write and the readers want to read. Today, almost no new themes have emerged, so some people think that online literature is about to decline, but I don't think so. I think online literature has always been like this. The popularity of every genre is because the author of the work is an excellent author. There are always only bad authors, not bad subjects. For a composition, some people can get seventy points, while some people can only get forty points. The same subject matter and the same events, some make readers feel comfortable and some make them feel uncomfortable. So the decline of the subject matter is because there are no writers who can hold the title anymore, and there are no works that can spark heated discussions again. What does a good writer need? The writing, the imagination, the passion. Writing style is not about gorgeous words. It is the portrayal of characters, the grasp of the development of things, and the description of the environment. This is part of the reason why Dream of Red Mansions can be hailed as the first masterpiece, and this book happens to inherit part of it. There is no discussion, only natural plot development. It does not tell the reader what to do at this moment, but the reader lets the reader feel how he feels after reading it. Imagination is the ability to construct plots and backgrounds. Stories are always the core of novels. The author may be a little weaker in this aspect. After all, he is not a professional and it is difficult to imagine what it would have been like at that time. The most obvious thing is the description of the Jin Yiwei who went south. The author's strategy seems a bit intellectual. However, this does not affect the reading experience. As long as you are not familiar with history, you can accept it, because the author's good writing style saved him. Perhaps the author also knows that these strategies are not very good, so he deliberately reduced the pen and ink when describing it, but made the plot less dry through some other events. This is the quality of a good writer. Of course, the author may not realize it himself, but almost 80% of authors don't know the detailed advantages of their works. Because this is all determined by literary literacy. A sentence may seem ordinary to you, but some people may find it very reasonable and innovative. The original intention may just be to make the work richer, but unexpectedly the strengths are used to offset the weaknesses.                                                                                                                                                                                More than half of the reason for Kavin comes from the incompatibility between the author's mentality and the work. Those who write humorous articles are in a bad mood and cannot write good jokes, so it becomes difficult for them to write. The work "The Wind Blowing Cool Outside the House" is one of the few excellent works I have published on the Internet in recent years. In my mind, it is no worse than the works of those platinum writers. It has gradually moved closer to traditional literature, because the author writes the work with a creative mentality, and his own excellent writing style makes this work much more mature than the previous books. I read half of the last book, but I couldn't insist on it. I'm sorry, although I know it's good, but because I read this one first, the shortcomings of that one are obvious. The characterization is a bit stiff, and the handling of emotional scenes can even be called rough. This is not because of the author himself, but because most of the works on the Internet are written in this way. The original intention of online literature is to provide others with a platform to express their feelings and a stage for eclectic imagination. For example, "Zhu Xian" would be difficult to publish if it were traditional literature, because the cost of publishing it is too high, and the writer himself cannot predict the future, so he will not create it. In fact, if you think about it carefully, those writers who became famous on the Internet are gradually moving closer to the traditional literary world. It is not that traditional literature is so noble, but that the readers themselves are moving towards tradition. Online novels were good at first, but the more I read them, the more I liked those works that the authors carefully created. One of the characteristics of traditional literature is that those works entrust the author's thoughts. It's not the so-called society, boring or anything like that. Therefore, traditional literature is constantly changing, but only one core remains unchanged, which is the author's thoughts. Online literature pays more attention to the smoothness of the text and the readability of the story. This is an advantage, but the author must be careful when writing. This is tradition. You may not gain much from reading a book of online literature, but you need to let others feel that this is a work, not just an online novel. From this point of view, the four major classics can also be called "online novels". They did not convey value through discussion, but just told stories. Many of the meanings were added by later generations. The authors themselves must have had the intention, because that was their reason for writing the book, but it was certainly not that much, and perhaps not that noble. It's easy to tell whether a work is created with care. Good work may not be created if you put your heart into it, and it will definitely not work if you don't. I think the most taboo thing in a novel is the word "discussion". This is a common problem in novels. No matter what you do, you always have to say it through the mouth of the protagonist, and express it through the character's thoughts. It may not matter when you first read it, but it will be very depressing after reading too much. This is why people pay so much attention to expression description. Psychological description is the psychology of the character, not the psychology of the author. Always remind readers by telling them simply and straightforwardly. So I am really happy to come across this book, which has the readability of online novels and the rigor of traditional literature. Nowadays, most online novels are popular because of their novel themes. If you don't believe it, read it for yourself. No popular novel can last more than a year, because apart from the story, there is no readability. Nowadays, there are very few online novels that can be called classics, and they are still supported by a group of veteran writers. The subject matter is not the most important, but whether it can support the story is important. I have said so many digressions because I think the author can continue writing, and at the same time, I hope that the author can continue to inherit the advantages of this book. The purpose of a novel is to control the reader's emotions through characters and stories, but not to allow the reader to discover anything or anything unexpected. In that case, the author has lost. The reason why I say so much is because I found that the author's recent descriptions are really amazing to me. I didn't feel it at first, but now the writing style really has the flavor of a writer, and it is more and more like a Dream of Red Mansions. I hope the author can work hard, and I hope the author can continue. Thank you to the author for bringing us an excellent work. Thank you. PS: Has the author thought about the theme of his next book? I think your book has almost written Red Mansions well enough... At the same time, I would like to mention some of the shortcomings of the author that I think are not listed above because I don't want to damage his integrity. At the same time, they are not shortcomings. They are just personal disdain.                                                               but Wu Liang's handling of the emotional drama between the protagonist and the heroine was not very good in the last book, and this one is not very good at the beginning, but it is very good later on. The most fearful thing about feelings is abruptness and boredom. The previous book was really boring, so be aware that it's better to do more than you can do. Secondly, Wuliang, your ability to write stories needs to be strengthened. Although it is interesting to read, it also blocks your path to becoming a god. But take your time. I would rather you never become a god than give up what you are good at for the sake of stories.         ，

Why do I have this question? Because I feel like this book has a female flavor from beginning to end, especially the setting of the protagonist's life experience. The following contains serious spoilers, read with caution! The protagonist is Jia Zong, and the current background setting is that his mother, an oiran, died young. His father, Jia She, treated the protagonist very badly for some reason and wanted to beat him to death. In short, the protagonist is very miserable. The first 100 or so chapters basically show how miserable the protagonist is and how he struggles to survive. To be honest, it feels like a bit of abuse. But the writing is indeed pretty good But at the end of the writing, the protagonist's life experience has a big secret. Her mother is a princess of the former dynasty, and her father is a powerful prince. Here comes the key point. In terms of setting, the biological father of the protagonist was the most powerful person during the mutiny. The kind who directly led his troops into the palace and could immediately take the throne if he wanted to. But because he thought that the protagonist's mother was dead, he was so frustrated that he finally gave up the throne that was within his reach. After choosing to vent his anger on a killing spree, he imprisoned himself. (This plot setting is really full of female characters. Especially when the protagonist's life experience is compared with the protagonist's current situation, this conflict becomes more obvious.) This is one of the reasons why I suspect that the author is a woman. The second reason is that this book is full of intrigues between women, which are not as direct as those of ordinary men. It's a kind of pleasure similar to self-abuse. I have read a Red Mansion fanfic before, by Regan. The focus of his plot is how the protagonist climbs from bottom to top step by step. Although there is also a plot between the harem, it is a supplement. The female characters and the harem are more displayed as fun points, and the focus is still on the improvement of their own rights and power. To describe it in one sentence, he wakes up and holds the power of the world, but he lies drunk in the lap of a beautiful woman! But in this book, I feel that the main plot is about falling in love, which also promotes the plot. And in the early stage, most of the cool display methods were through how the protagonist was hurt, and then the protagonist tried to find a way to make a misfortune. The onlookers looked at it and thought, Oh my God, how could you do this? So people like Jia Mu felt guilty and temporarily helped the male protagonist for the sake of their own reputation. This kind of cool thing is not like that of a boy. If you look down upon me today, I will make you unable to reach your level tomorrow. It's the way girls force the other person to feel guilty by showing how powerful I am but how unreasonable and unfair the treatment is, making you feel that you are sorry for me and you shouldn't treat me like this. The only most enjoyable part is probably the part where the protagonists design Jia She and Mrs. Xing. But later on, there was a plot where Wang Xifeng felt offended by the protagonist and had a conflict of interest, so he began to design and suppress the protagonist to get rid of him. And it has already begun to hurt the protagonist, and the protagonist also begins to fight back, and then takes down Wang Xifeng first, but he refuses to kill him. In the end, he had to come forward to save Wang Xifeng. The reason given is that the protagonist's refusal to save him will affect other people's opinions of him, and the so-called method of maximizing interests. What else is there? Wang Xifeng is actually just suppressing the protagonist, and does not really want to get rid of the protagonist, so the protagonist cannot go so far. Hehe. I understand that Wang Xifeng cannot be written off. After all, one of the important protagonists of Red Mansion is dead. What will happen if you kill him? But this plot conflict setting is really petty. It is not as generous, direct and enjoyable as the cool point conflict designed for men.

Jia is always a warm man. Get up in the morning, let my concubine continue to sleep, tuck in the quilt, and get dressed yourself. Not picky about food. When making love, it's one-on-one, and you don't need a maid to help you, or a maid to fetch water for cleaning. When taking a shower, do not push or rub your back with the maid. Don't ride in a sedan when you go out riding a horse. The modern concept of equality for all. Equality between wives and concubines, equal exposure to rain and dew, impartiality... When will these bad habits be changed? We want to see the corrupt life of the ancient great masters! In all aspects of food, clothing, housing and transportation, I beg you, dirty mother, to help you!

I am happy to have a difficult life and struggle to catch the first cry of the phoenix. I am surprised to ride a white horse in Wujiang and ride on a hidden dragon. I admire both civil and military officials and finally return to my heart with a gold hairpin. I lament the ups and downs of the concubine of the Jia family and his romantic life.

A Qingwen held her to the sky and quarreled with Daiyu every day. I scolded and cried Daiyu several times, but nothing happened. He even called the royal family shameless and so on. Anyway, the male protagonist loves and spoils her. I can't stand it anymore.

The previous episode was too cruel. When someone is angry, his liver hurts and his head hurts. He finally freed himself from Dongkuayuan, and was abused by Mrs. Shi in all kinds of ways. He scolded the protagonist when nothing happened, and even scolded the protagonist when something happened. After all, he is a time traveler, so why can't he be tougher and use some tricks? If you can't find a reason to hide, let's see what they do. Keep talking about filial piety, why not poke a few soft nails into her? Fuck, I'm a bitch too. I was so angry when I saw it, but I wanted to continue reading. Fuck.

This is the most uncomfortable Red Mansions novel I have ever read. The characters in it are all pretentious. Some conflicts are obviously avoidable, but they are intensified. It gave me a headache. The relationship between some characters and the protagonist is also very confusing, like Sister Feng. At first, she felt that the protagonist's life was too tough and it was better not to mess with it. Later, she suddenly started to fight for death, and it was the kind of death in other novels, but she still survived. After that, it was as if the previous things had not happened, and the same goes for the protagonist.

It turns out that you are not only biased against Baochai, but also against Xiren. Why can Qingwen be like this too? I didn't realize at first that your "heart is higher than the sky" turns out to be that you want to reach a high branch. Isn't it because you have a noble character and don't feel inferior because of your humble background?

A handsome and handsome young man, wealth and fame always come easily. You have ruined a good Qingchengongzi. Being a scholar is not enough, but he wants to become a military commander. It's not like there are no literati who lead the army. Wouldn't it be better to imitate Chen Qingzhi, but I chose to imitate Huo Qubing. Fortunately, he knew that he was not good at martial arts and didn't force his writing. You can never forget that martial arts dream in your heart. You have to be a spymaster in every book. If you still mix it up with the emperor wearing a pair of trousers, you are treating everyone as a fool. What is the relationship between Lu Bing and the emperor, and what is the relationship between the protagonist and the emperor. In the end, there is only one way to rebel. This book is easy for the prince. What will you do with the next book? The image of such a good young master in troubled times, who emerges from the mire without staining, and washes the lotus without being evil, is not easy to write, so I have to rely on the cruel official hawk and dog. You always turn into a personal show of your own strong style from the time you go to Jiangnan, especially in the next book. It makes the protagonist Han Chuang's academic achievements after studying hard for several years become a joke. It is also difficult for you to let the protagonist study for several years. After all, you are not good at this. Haofeng relies on his strength to send me to Qingyun, which is more suitable for your style. You still always bully Baochai. You were born ten years too late. If you were born ten years earlier, you would probably be on par with Yue Guan in terms of imagination. It's just a pity Jia Cong, it's rare for you to have a protagonist who is brilliant, profound and restrained. Although he becomes as sharp as others in the end, fortunately, he still has something to hide. Those who stand out will either ride to the end or be remembered until death. Huo Qubing was to Wei Qing, and Han Xin was to Xiao He.

A good article, but it makes the author very uncomfortable having a harem

In fact, when everyone watches Dream of Red Mansions, it is either a TV series (TV series, many approvals were not found when filming), or fan fiction. If you really read it many times, you will understand why Daiyu is the first heroine of Dream of Red Mansions. It can be said that Daiyu condenses 70% to 80% of the aura of the entire Red Mansions. So how did a person who is petty, tearful and sour in the eyes of the public become the first heroine of a book that can be called a god? Is Dream of Red Mansions really just about romance? Is it necessary for a romance novel to use the technique of "snake in grass, snakes behind the thread, dust spreads thousands of miles" (I won't discuss the deeper implications of Red Mansions here. Friends who are interested can read online the allusion of Dream of Red Mansions to the Ming Dynasty)? It can be said that "Dream of Red Mansions" is full of spoilers, every paragraph is foreshadowed, not a single sentence is redundant, and every word is full of blood and tears. So this way of writing also gives people the possibility to infer the subsequent plot, which is also the charm. Many people think that Baochai is a good wife and Daiyu can only fall in love, but this is not the case. Looking at the comments about Baochai, "No matter how ruthless it is, it is touching", "The good wind will send me to the blue sky with its strength" and the plot hints, it is not difficult to see Baochai's character. She is thoughtful, generous but also ruthless. She stayed behind closed doors when the house was raided in the Grand View Garden. And, many plots suggest that what Baochai needs is a good relationship, and what he needs is Qingfeng's help, rather than love for Jia Baoyu. She is not jealous from beginning to end, because there is no love. What Baochai needs are "conditions" rather than people. As for Daiyu's petty temper, improper actions are more real and contain emotions, while Baochai is always thinking about whether it is suitable and not comprehensive. Think about it, Daiyu, as the Fairy Jiangzhu, came to repay her kindness, but she didn't appear in the first 80 chapters. She even made Jia Baoyu angry. Is this a way to repay her kindness? I think it is very likely that after the Jia family fell into disrepair in Chapter 40, Daiyu married Jia Baoyu and supported the whole family until the blood and tears dried up (there are many spoiler hints in the review). The poem "Burying Flowers" also says that it was Daiyu who buried all the flowers, but she didn't know who would bury her in the future. Therefore, Daiyu should have died very far back, burying all the poor sisters. Gao E's version is not true at first glance. Daiyu, as the first heroine of the whole Red Mansion, died with 40 chapters left? It's impossible even to think about. As for Jia Baoyu, a person should be viewed under the historical conditions at that time! Baoyu has many shortcomings, but Baoyu loves Daiyu from beginning to end. After the Jia family is destroyed, Daiyu will definitely live and die with the Jia family, but Baochai will definitely abandon her because of her character! But look for Qingfeng again! So I have always liked Daiyu for her truthfulness and kindness. Isn't she smart? Don't you know how to learn from Baochai to protect yourself wisely? No, she's just not heartless! When I was a child, I fell in love with Daiyu. Later, when I got older, I thought Baochai was perfect and very suitable to be a wife. Later, when I have more experience, I can see the true feelings contained in Daiyu's every move!

The character of Qin Keqing disgusted me so much. When I saw the protagonist became a prince, I crawled into bed. The protagonist was immediately possessed by a lecher and took away everything that smelled good and smelly. They also brought two widows into the palace. It is really one of the most poisonous things in the whole book. It was originally a great book, but this poisonous point makes me sick to death.

Can you please stop writing b original characters? I don't know how to grasp it well. I feed someone's tmd💩I think it's self-righteous and I'm moved. I even drugged and raped the protagonist. God man.

How to put it this way, I always feel that the history written by the author is a bit too small, and the family affairs are very delicate. However, when it comes to national affairs, this delicateness gives people a feeling of being petty and petty, always trying to "win with wonder", but can't see "using righteousness and harmony".