Luotian Divine Mansion for Mortals: Starting Heavenly Spiritual Root

I have read a lot of it among ordinary people. This one is not poisonous, but I can't understand it. It feels a bit like it was written by AI.

Don't write if you can't get the Zhangtian Bottle, it's just bad luck 😅

This kind of eunuch training does not involve women. You only need to open a harem in the early stage. Nangong Wanzhou, Nichang, Zhao Yuping, Hongfu, Nie Ying, Dong Xuaner, etc. Are all fine. What is the point of writing now? Who among the readers of harem will read your work where women are given away at the beginning?

Nangong Wan also confiscated it, why are there always common mortals who don't accept Nangong Wan.

This book is full of narrations and inner activities. At first glance, it seems that it was written by a new author, full of his own desire for expression, and the author is very good.

Gee, pig's feet are just plain scary. You don't have to worry about someone taking over your body even though you have spiritual roots.

Introduction, I have read Sanqing, a saint who was born a saint!

It looks very good. There are no poisonous points, funny points, and refreshing points. The protagonist is a brainy person, unlike those brainless novels. There are just a few updates. Please give the author a big boost.

First of all, the clone is based on the swallowing starry sky. The clone and the original are indistinguishable from each other. Secondly, a woman and her avatar can practice dual cultivation, but they will never have a bridal chamber. The bridal chamber must have the original deity. After all, the avatar's soul consciousness is the same, but the physical body is different, so there are naturally different places.

The male protagonist takes it too much for granted. Not everyone will follow your ideas. The male protagonist completely treats the monks as puppets and changes the pattern of the world of cultivation.

He reached the 4th level of Qi training in one day, and dared to bring a bunch of pills to the market to sell them. After practicing in the market for more than ten days, he reached the 10th level of Qi training. It's really outrageous.

All I can say is that it is difficult to adapt to everyone's tastes. I can only write according to the ideas of most people in a uniform way. So, if I can make it without any poisonous points, and can make up for some of the pitfalls and regrets of the original work, I think it is enough. After all, even if it is a platinum master. , It is impossible for me to reach this point. At that time, I was writing my own work and updating the original work at the same time. My understanding of mortals is no less than that of everyone sitting here. I cannot guarantee anything else, but I can guarantee that it can surpass the vast majority of mortal fan fiction. Please believe me on this point. As a spoiler, in addition to Chaos Xinghai, Dajin, Spirit World, and Immortal World, there are also higher planes in the follow-up. Of course, I will try to be as brief as possible in the subsequent plot, with less nonsense, so that everyone can enjoy watching it.

Let me once again express my thoughts on this book. The author's writing is really good. Both the writing style and writing style are not weaker than the original work, and the logical chain is also very deep. But most of the geniuses in the comment area are primary school students, and they are really mindless. But what surprised me was that the author did not delete the post. He was really generous. If I had scolded him and deleted the post, he would have deleted it.

This golden finger is a space magic weapon. It can definitely open a harem, right?

Chaos Star Sea is fun! The folk customs are fierce! It's worth a visit for all fellow Taoists!

In addition to more narration, the plot is quite compact and worth watching. At least it is better than most other mortals.

How many chapters have been written about snatching a bottle? It doesn't matter a lot. Water gets a B

I have a question. The introduction seems to be about a clone flow, and the clones are paired with girls. I hope the author can answer it. If you don't reply, it will be a trap.

The author is stubborn and self-righteous, a bit

The monthly ticket was given to 👍

You've written a million words of fan fiction and haven't updated it to the spirit world chapter? How much water do you have?

The writing is not solid enough, and I still take it for granted.

A newbie here to learn from the well-written Mortal fanfic.

I'm speechless. Every time the author can't convince himself, he just writes a bunch of narrations to explain. In that case, why do you write so much to make people angry? For example: When I entered the Yellow Maple Valley, I suddenly had a flashback writing method. When I asked about the source of the exercises, the author wrote that the protagonist's exercises came from Yu Zitong. I was wondering if you could just write that they came from Mo Juren. Later, there was a lot of verbosity about whether the sect would send people to verify it. Don't you think there is something wrong with your logic? ! Yu Zitong, you haven't finished it at all. Why did you write this inexplicably? He couldn't find Mo Juren on his body? Why don't you check if Lao Mo is not on the mountain? What are you writing about in these twenty-six chapters? There are so many flaws at the beginning that I really can't stand it anymore. I'm afraid I won't even be able to hold on to the free chapters. You yourself think there is something wrong with your logic. Otherwise, if you spend a lot of time explaining what you are doing, you won't be able to count words. No, it doesn't make sense if you haven't charged for water.

There are indeed only five in the original work, and this is because they were suppressed by the other six factions.

It's really good. It's really good.

Most of the time I just talk to myself and have various narrations. In the original work, there are no useless passerby characters. The protagonist is a disciple, and he is taken as a subordinate and teaches this and that. He is given various resources just to cultivate his own power. Isn't that what you want to do? You know all the plots of the original book. If you don't improve your strength quickly, strength is everything, and you will do all kinds of tricks, it's really hard to understand. You are no longer an ordinary nanny, you are the best among nannies.

The writing is immature and makes me feel jerky when reading it.

No more writing? Don't have to watch anymore? So long

It's been a month and it's still not out yet?