Chinese Showbiz: I’m 18 This Year, and the 85 Flowers Are by My Side

After reading it, here are a few suggestions. First, the main character's personality needs improvement. Avoid making jokes and flirting everywhere; it's a bit awkward and easily gives off a frivolous vibe. Second, don't incorporate too many references. References are meant to serve and enrich the plot, not to be used to create a separate storyline. I hope this can be improved in the future.

The first line of the main text reads: Yang Mi advises against leaving. Just seeing this person annoys me.

Author, please stop sending songs. Most readers can't accept it.

There were too many comedic interludes, making it feel like there was no main plot and it was just filler. And doesn't the author sing himself? Singing is a much faster way to make money. Only with initial capital and fame can one build capital!

Too many jokes make it useless.

The discussion forum after 110,000 words is full of pictures. Author, you should probably check where you wrote it wrong.

Still calling her "Little Flower"? She's almost 40!

The first few chapters were quite funny, but after a few chapters, the sheer number of jokes in each chapter got annoying.

If this book had half the number of plot points and the protagonist had less flirting, it would have performed much better!

The first three chapters are discouraging; please consider this carefully.