The Dawn of a Dynasty

I don't know how to put it, but the more I watch, the angrier I get.

Is the author still a student? Has he never entered the workforce?

This book has a great premise: Heroes of Might and Magic combined with the Republican era. This is the first time I've seen anything like it. Are there any other books in this genre? One important point: the author updates too slowly!

The writing is alright, but every time he kills someone, he spouts a bunch of nonsense, and every time he takes off his mask, why not just kill them with a single blow? Taking off the mask makes it seem like he's afraid people won't know it was you who killed them.

The premise is good, but the plot is a bit hard to watch; it's not enjoyable at all.

The later stages might not hold up; there are too many stitched-together elements. The power system, using Heroes of Might and Magic as an example, needs to be expanded to include different races, unit types, and so on. What are the characteristics that led to the defeat of ancient civilizations by modern civilizations? Why was China invaded?

The protagonist has a really bizarre quirk. He doesn't just kill people, he makes sure they see his face before he does. What kind of twisted killer hobby is that? Having the ability to read souls after death would just expose him.

The subject matter is good, but some parts feel like they were written by a woman, focusing on mundane family matters.

The book is good, but why did the author have to write so much about romance? My assessment is that there should be less emphasis on family ethics. Given the late Qing Dynasty and early Republic of China setting, focusing on national salvation would have been sufficient. Why write so much about romantic love? The title and synopsis definitely won't attract readers who enjoy family dramas.

To be honest, this synopsis, which portrays the Azure Dragon, Fire Phoenix, and the Ten Kings of Hell like this, makes me lose all desire to read it.