Warhammer: The Beginning of the Horus Heresy

The author asks the protagonist to learn something that is not as good as the Riddler. He is so nervous.

I have read Chapter 62 so far, and there are many poisonous points. Here are just a few: 1. The protagonist is very poorly created. The Riddler's work has attracted the attention of the Chaos Power, but he still hides it from all our personnel; he is timid, careless, and wants to change, but does not take action

Destined to drown on the roadside in the warp.

Dude, Great Demon, how could you so easily steal the artifact Slaanesh specifically designed to target the Sons of the Empire?

He wanted to write about change, but he was afraid that if he changed it, he wouldn't know how to continue the story. So when he wrote it, he didn't change anything and it was the same as the original story. Sometimes he wouldn't reveal anything, and sometimes he would reveal a lot of key plot points. There are so many people who write about Warhammer changing the future.

To be fair, Warhammer is nothing like what an interstellar civilization exhibits. It is to cram the most backward, feudal, and repressive systems in mankind into one political body, and to suppress combat effectiveness. Even if the genetic modification failure rate is 50%, there should not be only so many interstellar warriors. For example, Guilliman, who has the most, 250,000, is too few. On an interstellar scale,

It was well written. I liked the dialogue between the protagonist and the Emperor and the Primarchs. Although it was not very active, it satisfied my general fantasy about the Primarchs. The Fulgrim chapter was very good. Although the storyline seemed ordinary, it made me deeply feel the fear and despair of the planet environment. The sense of urgency was very strong.

When I saw Chapter 30, I just wanted to say that the original 40K was because of the tragedy of the Riddler. Now the protagonist is still the Riddler. I am speechless. I really can't stand it anymore. I just want to ask, will I die if I explain it?

The main character seems completely useless, just a roadside character.

The protagonist knows everything but says nothing, just like the emperor.