Warhammer: The Beginning of the Horus Heresy

The author asks the protagonist to learn something that is not as good as the Riddler. He is so nervous.

I have read Chapter 62 so far, and there are many poisonous points. Here are just a few: 1. The protagonist is very poorly created. The Riddler's work has attracted the attention of the Chaos Power, but he still hides it from all our personnel; he is timid, careless, and wants to change, but does not take action 2. He always reveals the outcome of the incident in advance, such as "From the perspective of hindsight, Rowan at this time should..." This kind of affects the perception 3. According to the post below, I learned that the protagonist in "The Orc Chapter" is a rapist

Destined to drown on the roadside of subspace

Brother, big demon, Slaanesh's artifact was specially designed to target the Children of the Empire. How could you have snatched it away so easily? Point

I wanted to write a change, but I was afraid of changing it and I didn't know how to follow the plot. After writing it, nothing was changed until it was released. It was the same as the original plot. One moment I was writing and refused to reveal anything, and the next moment I revealed many key plots. There are so many stories about Warhammer changing the future. Since I am writing this type of book, I just changed it to the end. No matter what the results are, at least the writing is not frustrating and the readers will not feel uncomfortable watching it. What is the point of wanting to change but not dare to change it?

It was well written. I liked the dialogue between the protagonist and the Emperor and the Primarchs. Although it was not very active, it satisfied my general fantasy about the Primarchs. The Fulgrim chapter was very good. Although the storyline seemed ordinary, it made me deeply feel the fear and despair of the planet environment. The sense of urgency was very strong. Fulgrim was wandering on the edge of going crazy. The concept was very good. Even if he casually chatted about art and the like on Fulgrim's ship, it was not boring. On the contrary, it enriched the whole chapter and was very beautiful. When it comes to the orc chapter, personally, it kind of drags down the overall height of the novel. It can drop from 9.8 Points to 2.0 Points (limited to this chapter), because as for the freshness of the orcs, anyone who is a hammer friend will find it boring. How lacking is it, no less than the second year of Yuan He of Saber Ya

I feel like the protagonist is completely useless and completely useless.

To be fair, Warhammer is nothing like what an interstellar civilization exhibits. It is to cram the most backward, feudal, and repressive systems in mankind into one political body, and to suppress combat effectiveness. Even if the genetic modification failure rate is 50%, there should not be only so many interstellar warriors. For example, Guilliman, who has the most, 250,000, is too few. On an interstellar scale,

The protagonist just knows but doesn't say anything, just like the emperor

There are some poisonous points, but there is nothing you can do about it. Few of the articles you have hammered through are non-toxic, but overall they are still good-looking. They can be counted in the T1 echelon of hammering through.