As a Mortal, at the Beginning, He Was Recruited by the Hidden Moon Sect as His Son-In-Law.

Overall, the writing is poor. Why did you divide it into so many paragraphs? Other people have dozens of words lined up together, but you have a few words lined up together. Do you really think the more segments the better?

I saw that book friends said it was very poisonous, so I read it with the mentality of testing the poison. Looking at the first few pictures, there are three poisonous points. First, there is the problem of setting at the beginning. My parents were plotted to death by the foundation-building monks in the sect, and their death resulted in the Order of Immortality. The Qi-refining monk who was returned to the protagonist by the pair of foundation-building monks was still the only seedling. As a result, the two foundations did not dare to snatch it openly, and were still watching secretly. Excuse me, what's the point? Don't you have to get it in the end? As a result, the protagonist ran away. Are you writing this as a low-end martial arts? Isn't it funny? Robbing by force, buying and selling by force, pretending to be a robber cultivator, spending money to buy murderers, catching a few qi refining robber cultivators to make gloves, poisoning and assassinating, beauty traps, beautiful poison traps, what kind of things can't be done? So, I was mentally retarded at the beginning. Second, go to Fangshi, fake the power of the tiger, make things out of thin air, deceive people to help yourself, it seems that there is nothing wrong! But, is it possible that people won't check your background? Even if people don't want to offend you, what kind of character did you write for the protagonist? If there is an ancestor of Jindan in the family, there must be a family that cultivates immortality, and there are more than a few foundation-building families. How can you steal something as important as the Immortal Ascension Order? As a result, when encountering other foundation builders, he acted like a cheerful, pug-like person. Is this ridiculous? I can't stand it anymore! Can't recognize the reality!

The novel is too calculating, always engaging in intrigues. High-level monks don't conspire with you, they use their strength to convince others. The fact that you are trapped in a strange circle is nothing like a novel about cultivating immortals or a novel about palace fighting.

I have read so many Black Mortal fanfics, even those without Goldfinger, but you are the first author to make the protagonist so frustrated like this. Is there something serious wrong with you?

These urban novels about the son-in-law, Dragon King, Shenhao and the like have finally begun to harm fairy tales and historical novels. I just read a book about traveling through the Three Kingdoms and being abandoned by Xiao Qiao. I chose Diao Chan. Why are you crying 😄

The previous ones were written in a mess, but I can only read the last few, which at least have the flavor of using the weak to win over the strong. I just don't know how long it will take for this golden finger to be used if it is so powerful.

I can't understand it, I don't even know what the hell it is. If you want to become an immortal, you can become an immortal. There are so many conspiracies and tricks. Who do you think you are? Calculation and elixir formation during a Qi training period will be like the set in the business world in modern society. If this is really the case, you will not survive for more than a minute. There is no need to form elixirs and build a foundation. Knowing that you do this, your bones will be gone in a matter of minutes, and you will not have the chance to reincarnate.

Ten years ago, Shennong passed by and spat.

Just read the latest chapter. The author is equivalent to traveling through the Three Kingdoms, then recognizing Liu Zhang as the lord, and preparing to help him revive the Han Dynasty. My evaluation is that mud cannot hold up a wall.

A fool who feels too good about himself. He didn't even read the Mortal Cultivation Biography carefully. Do you know what kind of person Han Li is? Not to mention reincarnation, Han Li is the Han Li who has not yet established his foundation. Whenever you know that he has a vial, he will look for opportunities to kill you. If he doesn't kill you or give you hundreds of kilograms of Wangyou Dan, will he let you go? Not to mention snatching his vial and trying to win over him. What are you daydreaming about? According to the setting of the Immortal World chapter, I guess you can't take the bottle even if Han Li in Samsara doesn't shoot you to death.

After looking at Golden Finger, I felt like a demented god spending money to pick up girls. Looking at the words and deeds of the protagonist as well as the protagonist's setting, there is no match at all. The elite character setting has always been compromised by the bitter hatred, loves to engage in small tricks, and is naive to the working people. It can be said that it is a perfect match. Finally, let's take a look at the worldview and setting of the worldview. There is intrigue, conspiracy, power play, clinging to the powerful, snobbery, and false love that only exist in the real world. In an extraordinary world, the strong are respected, and everything focuses on improving one's own strength. All dissatisfaction is a hatred of one's own strength. The only pursuit is strength. With strength, there is time, and then there is everything. Machiavellian tactics? Love? Get out of here. The three major problems are already a death sentence for me.

It's both awkward and upright, forget it's awkward, it's so disgusting.

Can his turtle-like Moon-covering Sect take a fancy to him?

It was written earlier that a business tycoon was reborn, was forced to visit by a robber, and fled to the town of Xiu Xian. The author originally wanted to write that the protagonist escaped by relying on his wisdom, but he ran out of ideas and could not continue writing. Suddenly the protagonist told the innkeeper that demons would invade in two years, and the shopkeeper did not confirm it, so he recognized the protagonist as his brother, sent the protagonist an immortal order and spiritual stone back, and sent a master to send the protagonist to worship the sect and cultivate immortality.

The protagonist seems to be cultivating immortality without even a trace of autonomy, which makes people angry.

Is it no brainer to write a villain? Is this the world of mortals cultivating immortality or the world of kindergarten? It is much worse than Scientific Cultivation of Immortality and Luotian Divine Mansion.

The author has been in YY all day, and I am really convinced. The characters in the original work have been changed in a mess. Do you really take yourself seriously? Don't you think you can convince others with just one mouth? What benefits can you give others? Are you so beautiful that you can buy your body so that others can have fun, or can you directly provide others with cultivation resources? You didn't say anything, did you? I'll kill you once and take away everything you have. What can you do the same? You start YY without even understanding the most basic things about Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. It makes no sense.

It's a bit silly, why was Nascent Soul eavesdropping? Very poisonous

Ye Tian, ​​Ye Feng, Lin Feng and the like 😅

Author, your system is hooked on the harem cool novel route that you should follow. What I have seen so far is business calculations and humiliation. My Tianling Gai is about to fly! At the beginning, all the base-building enemies were forced to rub against Nangong Wan. You said she was still attractive before she even lost a single blood, but they lost everything. Even if she didn't want the heroine Tian Nan, she was not dead and had to rub against her. I don't understand! I don't want to rub against Old Demon Han but his mother-in-law, right? He's such a great nephew.

Author, is it too late for you to write the timeline like this?

New book, please support, recommend, invest! I also wish the author of this book to make his work even better!

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