The Sword That Swallows the Stars Cuts Through Reincarnation

It's such a long story, there's almost no progress, and it's gone in a few sentences. It's all about how many years have passed, how many people have been killed, how many military industries have been obtained, how many layers of Tongtian Bridge have been passed, how many years have passed, and how many years have passed, the clone has been conceived, the immortal has been broken, and the slave has been enslaved. A bunch of kings, how many years passed, I went to the primitive star to purchase a batch of heavy treasures, treasures, exchanged money, exchanged treasures, it kept repeating, how many years passed, I broke through the venerable, how many years passed and created some secret method, there was no process, and there was not even a name for the secret method. Where did the fire clone go? I really just keep eating, eating, eating, I even forgot my name, why don't I just take it out for a walk? Enter the primitive star palace to compete for the treasure, kill a venerable with one blow, and then start to break through the level. In the end, the Dafa is blurred as always. How many years have passed, the treasure has been obtained, how many venerables have died, how many lords of the universe have died. There is no process, only the result. What is this if not a running account? In addition, the author always seems to like to create some inexplicable suspense. The clone at the beginning has been hidden and tucked away. What is the use of the cloud crystal inherited by the god? No beginning or end, and what kind of knife handle is there? There is no movement in the breakthrough of immortality, and there is still no movement in breakthrough of the venerable. What is your purpose of leaving these suspenses?

I read other reviews that it was quite watery, but after reading it I found that it is indeed quite watery. Retiring from the battlefield outside the territory - Ganwu Universe Kingdom - Taking a spaceship to Chaos City - Looking at the monuments and crossing the bridge in Chaos City, you wrote more than thirty chapters

The author's family sells aquatic products. Your water level is mediocre. There is a small rhythm in three chapters and a big rhythm in five chapters. If you reach ten chapters, it will be a battle that ends with one sword. Water King, capitalized service.

A protagonist with the power of the Lord of the Universe took a female disciple and stood in his residence for seven days. The entire original universe knew about it. Not only did he say that the price dropped, but he also said how much the enemy wanted to assassinate her.

It's hard to describe in one sentence. The protagonist's background is quite good, but the plot content is a mess 1. Don't force yourself to do things that you don't have or cannot do, and don't force unnecessary opportunities. There is no need to write the plot of Locke Divine Water. This plot is of no use to the development of the subsequent storyline. After reading dozens of chapters, it is of no use at all. Instead, it has an objectionable point of plagiarizing the original plot. 2. The problem of secret method setting. There is no such thing as feudal level secret method in the original world view. There are only divisions such as non-stream, mainstream, ordinary and so on. 3. The problem of human beings in the secret realm is the size of their potential. The starry sky in the universe is greater than the secret realm, and the secret realm is greater than the Kingdom of God. It is just a question of the size of the potential. There is no such thing as a broken soul, and it is not difficult to break through immortality in the secret realm. The difficulty is to break through the Lord of the Universe. The most difficult thing to break through is the human beings in the Kingdom of God. 4. A lot of nonsense.

The protagonist is considered a human in the secret realm, right? There is no future for humans in the secret realm.

Crazy, The clone is really a piece of cake. A person swallows treasures and becomes stronger. It's amazing. Anyone who can come up with this thing needs to hire an expert. I'm thinking that if you don't swallow treasures, and you spend resources to upgrade after cultivating to the master of the universe, is the cost much smaller than the multiplier of your treasure-swallowing genes? How much do you have to swallow? A star tower with 100,000 times the genes cannot hold it. It is estimated that it will take two or three, not to mention the important treasures and treasures in the mid-term. The point of increasing the gene multiplier conflicts with the function of the blood sea clone. How did you design it? The second Qing Yuzhu is Tuo Zhongtuo. This clone has gone from the secret realm to almost two hundred chapters. It is really inexplicable. A group of venerables do not want to snatch the treasure of an immortal protagonist, but they still consider the protagonist as their master. Are you serious? ? ? ? Treating readers as mentally retarded? ? ? ? And this clone conflicts with the Blood Sea clone to a certain extent The third Blood Sea, this is really the only one that can make people think it is reasonable. After all, whether it is a huge divine body or a creation with divine power, it is a god, but this is in the original work, And! ! ! With Li Yan's ability to increase gene multipliers and Qing Yuzhu's huge divine body, there is really no need for this blood sea clone to exist. It's all conflict! ! ! What do you want? The fourth Sujue, this is really the only normal original clone, but the writing is slightly worse. Such an awesome clone gives me a feeling that it is not even as good as the original Demon Killer. The fifth one is Qingshou, this clone is written as a pure hook, and it really becomes a soy sauce character. I just remembered it and pulled it out to show the name to the readers, telling the readers that there is this clone. I don't know why you created so many clones? I can't write it down, and it seems like this clone has no effect. It even feels to me that the clones bring negative improvement to the protagonist. If two or three clones are cut off, the protagonist will advance faster. The clone has become a burden and the author is awesome. The second question is about slavery, I think the most intriguing thing in Devour is the secret method of slavery, Spending space writing about these things. After being enslaved for two days, I couldn't keep up with the progress, and then I disappeared. What improvement was there? It is not even as interesting as breaking through the Venerable and then collecting some kings. At least you can train your subordinates. These things of enslavement are really useless in the later stage! ! ! It just so happens that you guys love to write this stuff. The third question is about the heavy treasures and supreme treasures, and the complaints about the treatment of ethnic issues At present, I have read about 180 chapters, The protagonist has contributed about 150,000 heavy treasures and more than 2,000 treasures to the ethnic groups. Is this a plot that anyone can conceive of? ? ? Contributed 150,000 pieces of heavy treasures. The Lord of Chaos City did not question it, and the lords of the ethnic group were not surprised. You can say that the treasure house has blocked most of the heavy treasures. This means that even the Lord of Chaos City has blocked it, right? Your harvest alone is tens or hundreds of times more than the contribution of the entire ethnic group, and no one asks? ? ? Then there is the attitude towards the ethnic group. What is the protagonist's mentality? Is he threatening the ethnic group? ? ? Does this mean that if I don't give you the top palace treasure, you will defect? At this point, the Lord of Chaos City smiled with satisfaction. What was he laughing at? Ah? What are you laughing at? An immortal threatens the human race, the Lord of Chaos City still laughs? I can't tell the difference between the protagonist and Emperor Yan at all! ! ! ! Your early resources are provided by the ethnic group, the arcane group is provided, and everything is provided by the ethnic group. When you make your contribution, you come to threaten the human race. Oh my god, isn't this a replica of Yan Emperor? There is no difference at all! ! ! ! I'm curious as to why you don't just write it as being reborn into the demon clan, so that readers can clear your name when you threaten the clan.

The protagonist is too incompetent and his training speed is too slow. Apart from giving five clones to Golden Finger for the first time, he only has the ability to sense treasures and has no other abilities. He was caught up by Luo Feng tens of billions of years earlier than Luo Feng.

It's like writing an encyclopedia instead of writing fan fiction

The main problem is that there is too much explanation of popular science content. If there is a new plot, strength or prop, it will be a long explanation. Sometimes most of a chapter is filled with various explanations and popular science. I can't say that these things are useless, but most of them can be skipped. In order to find some plot or data related to the protagonist, I have to read a lot of popular science content, which challenges the readers' patience 😅 It is just when it is about to enter chaos that it starts to look a little normal. I suggest that it is best not to have a large section of popular science explanation content in the future, and focus on the plot, and at most introduce plug-ins. Because there is a large amount of content that has nothing to do with the plot, it will cause the plot to be disconnected and reduce the readers' enjoyment of reading. Subscriptions will inevitably be affected.

The author is really talented. Others inject water into the plot, but your child is pure water.

There is a lot of verbosity in Luo Liba... I don't even know what to write.

Now that I have read Chapter 53, let me tell you my own opinion: Advantages, the plot is okay, there are no poisonous points, there are some good second settings, and there is no conflict with the original work, it is not the earth, which is very good; Then there are the disadvantages, it is very watery, many Chelulu words are repeated over and over again, the plot progress is very slow, and there are five light spots obtained from the original will of the original universe. Up to now, I have not said what they are, and I can only speculate that one of them is a clone. Author, I can only tell you that if your writing is not good enough, don't keep digging holes, it will easily bury yourself.

Why not just move back to the galaxy? Move in once the Earth is re-formed

Writing about family members is too weak. Devouring the Stars and Spending a lot of time writing about emotional lines and describing the daily life of family members and children is a failure, and it is not an urban daily novel.

The clones are very heaven-defying, that's okay, five clones is too much, two to three is good, but if you make ten clones, you won't have all the treasures to become the Lord of the Universe.

Division of cultivation realms 33 Lord-level Hunyuan beings 32 World-level Hunyuan beings 31 Higher Hunyuan beings 20~30 Low-level Hunyuan beings - God Emperor 19~20 The Ultimate Realm of the God King - The Ultimate Realm of the Universe God 18 The Second Level of the God King - The Second Level of the Universe God 17 The First Level of the God King - The First Level of the Universe God 16 Master of Chaos - Chaos Realm of the Void God 15 Eternal True God - Void God Unity Realm 14 Void God - Void God Birth Realm 13 The Strongest Man in the Universe - True God Lord 12 The Fourth~Sixth Level Lord of the Universe - True God Venerable 11 The first to third levels of the Lord of the Universe - the True God and the Mighty One 10 The Lord of the Universe - the fourth-level heavenly god 9 The immortal king - the third-level heavenly god 8 The immortal prince - the second-level heavenly god 7 Immortal Army Lord - First Level Heavenly Realm God 6 Realm Lord One~Ninth Level - Peak of God Level, God Level Limit, Realm God Threshold 5 Territory Lord One~Ninth Level - Early, Middle and Late God Level 4 Universe Level One~Ninth Level - Demigod Early stage, middle stage, peak (extraordinary level) 3 Astral level one to nine - early stage, middle stage, peak of saint level (extraordinary level) 2 Planet level one to nine - early stage, middle stage, peak of flying level (extraordinary level) 1 Intermediate God of War, High God of War (Apprentice Level) - Title Level (Star Level) 1 Elementary War God (Apprentice Level) 1 Senior War God (Apprentice Level) - Silver Moon Level (Star Level) 1 Intermediate War God (Apprentice Level) - Meteor Star (Star Level) 1 Elementary Warrior (Apprentice Level) 1 Advanced Warrior (Apprentice Level) - Heaven Level (Ordinary Level) 1 Intermediate Warrior (Apprentice Level) - Earth Level (Ordinary Level) 1 Elementary Level Warrior (apprentice level) - human level (ordinary level) 0 students Understand the division of realms 25 The Tao of Hunyuan level>The highest level of power 24 Shortcut 23 World-level Chaotic Source Bloodline Mystery 22 Semi-Hunyuan Level Fusion Path—Ultimate Realm Level Soul Path—High Chaotic Source Bloodline Mystery 21 God Emperor's Later Level Fusion Dao—Super-Limit Level Low Chaotic Source Bloodline Mystery 20 The ordinary path of the semi-Hunyuan level - the fusion path of the middle stage of the God Emperor - the mystery of the God Emperor's consummation of the lower Chaotic Source bloodline 19 The ordinary path of the late stage of the God Emperor - the fusion path of the early stage of the God Emperor - the soul path of the third killing move level - the low Chaotic Source of the late God Emperor Mysteries of Bloodline 18 The ordinary path of the middle stage of the God Emperor - the soul path of the first ultimate move level - the mystery of the lower Chaotic Source bloodline of the middle stage of the God Emperor 17 The ordinary path of the early stage of the God Emperor - the fusion path of the ultimate level - the mystery of the low Chaotic Source bloodline of the early stage of the God Emperor 16 The Ordinary Way of the Ultimate Realm - the Fusion Way of the Second Level of God 15 The Ordinary Way of the Second Level of God - The Fusion Way of the First Level of God - The Soul Way of the Second Level of God 14 The Ordinary Way of the First Level of God - The Soul Way of the First Level of God 13 The law of chaos - the Tao of the chaotic level 12 The source of the law - the source of the rules 11 The self-created tenth-level secret method - the rule system 10 The self-created sixth-level secret method - the eternal level of the Tao 9 Create your own strongest secret method - open your own way 8 Law of time + law of space - a lower source law that fuses with the corresponding higher source law - the rules of heaven and earth 7 Law of time - law of space - fusion of four gates and one Grade Divine Heart 6 The mysterious law of the upper-level origin - fusion of three gates and one-grade Divine Heart 5 Recognition of the upper-level origin law - the fusion of two gates and one-grade Divine Heart 4 A lower-level origin law - one gate and one-grade Divine Heart 3 Part of the laws - true meaning and divine heart 2 realm - the realm of all things 1 artistic conception - the unity of heaven and man "Snow Eagle Lord" God Emperor's strength division 20~31 33 Lord-level Hunyuan Life Level: Lord Practitioner - Born Ancestor of Hunyuan Life 32 World-level Hunyuan Life Level: Lord of the Origin World World-level Hunyuan Life - Born World-level Hunyuan Life 31 Advanced Hunyuan Life Level: Born High-level Hunyuan Life Source of life - the ultimate realm of soul Tao + the origin of the world 27 The level of the master of the old nest of the abyss sea: the master of the old nest of the abyss 26 the level of the prisoner of the old nest of Hunyuan: the prisoner of the old nest of Hunyuan - the master of the half-way abyss sea 25 beyond the gods Levels of the top powerhouses of the Emperor: Master of the Abyss Sea under the city - Prisoner of Chaotic Source nearby 24 Levels of top powerhouses of the God Emperor: Enlightenment of Semi-Chaotic Source - Bloodline Practitioner - Prisoner of Chaotic Source in the distance - Double Path Half-Chaotic Source 23 Levels of perfection of the God Emperor: Late stage of the God Emperor Enlightenment of Taoism - Semi-Chaotic Source Bloodline Practitioner - God Emperor Perfects Lower Chaotic Source Life - The Third Killing Move of Soul Path 22 God Emperor's Late Stage Levels: Mid-stage God Emperor Enlightenment - Bloodline Practitioner of Late God Emperor - Low Chaotic Source Life of God Emperor's Late Stage - The First Killing Move of Soul Path 21 The middle stage of the God Emperor: Those who have enlightened the Tao in the early stage of the God Emperor - The blood cultivators in the middle stage of the God Emperor - The lower Chaotic Source life in the middle stage of the God Emperor - The ultimate dual path realm + the highest secret transmission + the highest secret treasure 20 The early stage of the God Emperor: Those who have perfected the Dao of the God King - The bloodline practitioners in the early stage of the God Emperor - the lower Chaotic Source life in the early stage of the God Emperor - the ultimate realm + the highest secret treasure 19 levels of the ultimate realm: the enlightenment in the early stage of the God King - the enlightenment in the middle stage of the God King - the bloodline practitioner in the early stage of the God King - the bloodline practitioner in the middle stage of the God King - Yuan Shenjun A practitioner with full bloodline - the ultimate realm of body refining flow - the second level of the universe god + the peak secret treasure - the second level peak of the universe god + the supreme secret "Swallowing Starry Sky 2 Origin Continent" God Emperor's strength is divided into 20~32 33 Lord level Hunyuan life level: Lord cultivator - born ancestor of Hunyuan life 32 World level Hunyuan life level: Lord of the origin world World level Hunyuan life - bloodline practitioner World level Hunyuan life - born world level Hunyuan life - shortcut 31 Higher Chaotic Source Life Level: Bloodline Practitioner High Chaotic Source Life - Born with High Chaotic Source Life - Close Path 30 Level of Breaking the Method with Strength, First Edition: Breaking the Method with Strength, First Edition 29 Extreme Fusion Path Semi-Chaotic Source Level: Extreme Fusion Dao Half Chaotic Source 28 A trace of advanced Chaotic Source power level: A trace of high Chaotic Source power 27 Beyond the God Emperor's invincible existence level: Extreme fusion of the late Tao God Emperor 26 The God Emperor's invincible existence level: High Chaotic Source life will ——Successful in refining the world-class Hunyuan bloodline——Fusion Dao Half Hunyuan 25 God Emperor's peak existence level: Bloodline cultivator——Ultra-limit low Hunyuan life——Double Dao combined with exquisite semi-Hunyuan——Fusion Dao God Emperor late stage 24 God Emperor perfection level Times: Semi-Chaotic Source Enlightenment - Bloodline Practitioner - Divine Emperor Perfecting the Lower Chaotic Source Life - Dual Path Cooperation and Exquisite Divine Emperor Late Stage - Fusion Tao Divine Emperor Middle Stage 23 Divine Emperor Late Stage Level: Divine Emperor Late Stage Enlightenment - Half Chaotic Source Bloodline Practitioner - Lower Divine Emperor Late Stage Hunyuan Life - Dual Paths Cooperate with the Subtle God Emperor in the Middle Stage - Fusion Dao in the Early Stage of the God Emperor 22 Divine Emperor Intermediate Levels: Enlighteners in the Middle Stage of the God Emperor - Bloodline Practitioners in the Late God Emperor Stage - Lower Chaotic Source Life in the Middle Stage of the God Emperor - Dual Paths Cooperate with the Subtle God Emperor in the Early Stage 21 The early level of the God Emperor: those who have enlightened the Tao in the early stage of the God Emperor - the bloodline practitioners in the middle stage of the God Emperor - the low Chaotic Source life in the early stage of the God Emperor - the ultimate realm of fusion of the Tao 20 The early level of the God Emperor of the bloodline genre: those who have enlightened the Tao in the upper limit of the ultimate realm - the bloodline practitioners in the early stage of the God Emperor - —Dual Paths Cooperate with the Exquisite Ultimate Realm 19 Ultimate Realm Levels: Ultimate Realm Enlightenment—Hunyuan Materials Ultimate Realm Life Forms—Hunyuan Bloodline Ultimate Realm Life Forms—Ultimate Realm Hunyuan Bloodline Creatures—Fusion Tao God King Second Level—God King Second Level Peak + Special Inheritance

I don't even understand, what is Rory doing?

Is this a eunuch? 🤔

Isn't it enough for the God King to understand just one branch of the Great Way?

The Father God of the Mechanical Tribe was captured and had the opportunity to enslave the Father God of the Mechanical Tribe. Why did he still want to exterminate the Mechanical Tribe? Want a site? As long as Father God is enslaved, the masters and overlords of these mechanical universes will surrender to the human race at the command of Father God, and there will be no problem in giving their territory directly to the human race. Want revenge? Isn't slavery a better solution to hatred than extermination? What's more, you can also use the mechanical tribe as cannon fodder!

I would like to recommend my own book, "Swallowing the Starry Sky, Starting from the Weakest Special Life", starting with the Prison Clan. If you can, please save it and read it. ".,

This is the chicken novel. Also write a chicken handle. I can get along, can I pay for food?

You are not suitable for writing novels. Go move the bricks.

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