Exorcising Evil, Starting with Eating Corpses to Summon the Gods

Who can tell me what this is? I thought I was watching a fight between ghosts and ghosts, but it turned out that I had already reached Chapter 10. In addition to talking about ghosts at the beginning, it was all about boxing and human relationships, and now it's time to watch Young and Dangerous again! What is this novel about?

He actually changed his name and was almost deceived. You might as well continue writing your story about the Young and Dangerous boys taking over the world, why bother changing it over and over again.

Which dog-headed strategist asked you to change your name? It was a good name before, it was relevant and did not violate the rules.

The writing style is top-notch, the martial arts setting is top-notch, and the three views are also correct, but it's like a person with good facial features and face shape, but it doesn't look harmonious when they look together. The world of novels must be self-consistent in order to make people feel comfortable. But in current novels, unless people can live like goblins, they will die long ago.

Not as good as the original "Upside Down"

But the shortcomings are very big. The main line is unclear and there are too many hidden lines. The more people look at it, the more confused they become.

The first part was pretty good and exciting, weird and suspenseful, and then I started practicing boxing (the setting of a bad street), and then the style changed to a bunch of young and Dangerous guys cutting each other and talking Hong Kong slang to each other. It has been abandoned.

I must insist on finishing writing this time. Good-looking, very good-looking.

Fuck, if there is no extraordinary world, the emperor will no longer pursue immortality. In the world of immortality, a mortal would really want to be the emperor. What's the logic?

The feeling of separation in this novel is too strong. It's already so awesome. I can't wait to die every second. The old guys are even jealous. In the latest chapter, I went to find a female host who abandoned Hua Zirong to vent her anger on Hua Zirong. It's really awesome. Your writing is good. Are you writing about daily life in the city?

No, I'm really speechless. Let me ask the author again Your introduction is about magic. It turns out that the protagonist has been learning martial arts. Will he enter Tao through martial arts or continue to be a martial artist? . . And to be honest, online novels have been around for so many years, and it's enough to think that just like those people in wizard novels, you can't be a wizard without the Knight's Breathing Technique. . .

I don't know what the main character wants to do, I just lay it out and throw it away. It's a useless piece of writing.

The writing and creativity are very good, but the protagonist lacks a sense of purpose and the story has no clear main line, so the results will definitely not be good.

One word "chaos"! It also talks about the power of light, darkness, and transformation, it also talks about evil spirits, and it also involves the theory of ghosts. The theory of ghosts and monsters is both mysterious and mysterious. It can only be done through metaphysics, but the realm and level of what is written cannot be clearly understood. A big pot of stew is indeed "suspenseful". How much rice can be eaten in a big bowl! Forcibly combine them and write pig's feet as coward, it doesn't count! Say you're not a coward, you're useless!

After reading Chapter 60, my only feeling is that the plot is all over the place.

It feels like the villains in the book like to add extravagance to everything they do. If the gangster villain wants to kill the protagonist, he can just call in enough people and block the protagonist with trolls in the wild. No matter how good your skills are, you will be beaten to death in front of dozens of trolls. However, the villain first calls his younger brother to intimidate, then uses drugs to frame him, and then sends someone to assassinate him. It seems that he deliberately gives the protagonist a chance to show off...

When I read Chapter 12, I didn't understand Cantonese, and I didn't understand what I was doing by writing a bunch of curse words. There is a sense of illogical absurdity like a person in a dream

The writing is okay, but the theme is not outstanding. The introduction is basically irrelevant to the current content. The protagonist's initiative and goal are very low. He will get into trouble when he goes out, but it basically does not improve the protagonist. The protagonist has no cheats, has no idea where he wants to go, and has no discernible talent. Without plug-ins and talent, how can you rise up? You meet ghosts every day and there is no progress and no opportunity and benefit. After reading more than 30 chapters, I don't know what your theme is or what the protagonist wants to do. I just take it one step at a time and become an eunuch when I reach the end of the road In general, it is tasteless to eat and it is a pity to abandon it.

From the perspective of storytelling, traditional Taoism, Chumaxian, and Western warlocks are mixed with the background of the war in the Republic of China. The story description is very attractive, but the main line is too unclear. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do. There are too many hidden lines. Looks very tired.

I feel like I'm about to overturn the story. The main plot is unclear, the protagonist's training system is a hodgepodge, the combat power is unclear, and there is no standard for the protagonist's strength.

Does it look good from behind? I read the book reviews and said that the back part was not very good, so I didn't want to read it. Can anyone who has seen it tell me about it?

I just saw half of it and started to kill randomly.

What's the matter? It suddenly stopped updating. I didn't ask for leave and didn't explain the reason. It made me panic. The story is slow and has a lot of added elements. It requires a certain amount of patience and it can be regarded as fairy grass As for the main line that many people complain about is unclear and the goal is vague, please, the protagonist has always wanted to restore the land of China and expel the Tartars. I can't stand a group of old guys who have their own agendas and give the empire an opportunity.

I have been reading novels for almost 20 years, and there are more and more novels like this that are very tiring to read in recent years!

The old lady lives so old and doesn't understand that big fists are the truth? So it's back to the beginning of the novel

I feel that the writing is pretty good, but it seems very awkward. It rambles on and on and feels like I haven't read it yet. Isn't it a supernatural novel? How come you write about the underworld that harms people?

The first three golden chapters introduce a lot of background, which is endless, and dig a lot of holes, like an old lady's foot wrap, smelly and long.

After reading Chapter 30, I can say that I don't know what I'm talking about.

Is the blocking function of Qidian fake?

I don't know what the author's mentality is. In the early stage, he cut off Xie Zou's legs as weapons. Not that this is bad, but using it in many scenes will make the protagonist very low. A very low protagonist. Even if the plot is exciting and the writing is not bad, but the protagonist is not handsome, it will still make readers feel that the protagonist is low and has no sense of involvement, so they will abandon the book!