I Grinded My Way Into Becoming a World-Shaking Earth Immortal

It's contradictory; the old doctor, who naturally aged and even died from a terminal illness, still acts like a young boy, constantly growing and maturing. It seems the author was unaware of the saying, "Old habits die hard."

I've read your comments in the comment section and also taken a look at the book. I feel you're getting too caught up in the details. Many readers have given you advice, but if you can't follow it, I can only suggest that you stick to writing realistic medical web novels. Author, what do you think is the most important thing in writing Xianxia web novels?

The beginning was good, but then a son-in-law messed things up, and the subsequent plot developments and conflicts became pretty predictable, instantly killing any anticipation.

The book itself is well-written, but do you know why few people can get into it? It's simple: you overcomplicate it, the steps are too numerous, and the main points aren't clearly distinguished. Take the Qi Refining stage, for example: sensing spiritual energy, gathering Qi, and integrating it into oneself. You add "heart fire" and "opening the dantian" to the list.

The Xianxia (fantasy/martial arts) genre has a very high ceiling; these kinds of novels can easily break into the top ten of the sales charts. But that's not why I want to write fantasy novels, because there are too many factors related to the laws of nature in them, and I know my own limitations; I'm not destined for that in this lifetime.

The book's collection data is average, but the proportion of readers following it is quite good, currently reaching nearly a quarter of the collections. This is the highest rate of following among my books, and it's also a very good rate compared to other books. This gives me, the young author, a lot of confidence! This shows that there are still readers for this type of fantasy novel by the young author! Many thanks to all the readers for your support!

Currently, there are roughly the following types of Xianxia (fantasy martial arts) genres, based on my count: 1. Pre-requisite Wuxia (Martial Arts) Stories. The protagonist in these stories typically starts in the secular world, practicing martial arts and gradually reaching the Innate level (sometimes set as Qi Refining Level 1).

"The title 'World-Suppressing Immortal'—your protagonist can't handle it; it'll kill him. It requires aloofness, unwavering Daoist nature, and indifference to worldly gains or losses. If you can't achieve that, you don't have the talent. Otherwise, why do you think traditional Daoism requires disciples to spend years, even decades, doing chores like splits, boiling water, and performing menial…

In fact, a person's mindset is deeply influenced by their physical condition. A healthy person, free from illness, displays a positive and cheerful disposition; a weak person, frequently experiencing minor ailments, tends to appear listless and lethargic. Furthermore, advanced age does not necessarily equate to greater experience or a better mindset. Currently, the protagonist exhibits a normal mindset, unlike some simplistic novels where an eighty-year-old acts like a ten-year-old.

Those who age naturally, those with a lifetime of experience, still act like greenhorns. 😥Looking at it all, your main focus is still on the Qiao family. Either cut ties completely, or you're stuck in this incongruous mess.