I Married a Superstar, So Why Not Lie Flat?

You are all immortal cultivators, so what about Liu Yifei, she is just a mortal. Just don't let her chase after you. What are you licking? Cultivation to immortality is just for immortality. Immortality treats mortals and everything is just a passing cloud. It is necessary to be entangled. Since you choose the character of a cultivator, it must be in line with the cognition of a cultivator, which is ethereal and mysterious, and has a firm mind. Weidao can just help his friends at the same time, play in the world, and pursue immortality. This is the fate of cultivators

This one is really nice.

I have only read the first three chapters to be honest, it is very popular, especially after the panel came out, it reminded me of the novels about urban immortals and miracle doctors more than ten years ago. I suggest that you should write about immortals or doctors. Don't put the two together, because it is very unfriendly to old readers (just think of me as farting), and the heroine is ignored. Don't have the same pronunciation with real celebrities. There are good and bad homophones. I think the disadvantages are greater. Too many people write this way To sum up, this subject has been written badly. It's okay to make a living. Don't think about anything else unless your subsequent writing is wonderful The above is just a personal opinion

Urban life and systematic writing really don't match. The first three chapters express nothing and are a mess. I don't know what to express, business is not business, medicine is not medicine, entertainment is not entertainment. The protagonist's character was not expressed, and the heroine only appeared for a moment, and then disappeared for several chapters. Why was the fake marriage not mentioned at all? The author seems to have his own rhythm, but is too obsessed with his own rhythm. Self-pleasure is a big taboo in online writing. It's a good thing that you have a rhythm, but we can't bring it in.

If you have a single heroine, I suggest you don't write about your ex-girlfriend. If you have a harem, don't write it as affectionately.

Sissi

If you don't have enough social experience, I suggest you read other people's Chinese medicine novels.

In the male channel city, as long as there is a single female protagonist, it is a licking dog

I have written so many chapters and this is it. No wonder no one has read it. The whole article does not highlight the main line. Those who want to read about immortality, Chinese medicine, and relationships are not satisfied, and it is not pleasing to everyone. The heroine has also been mirrored by a reality star and still wants to have pure love? Either you have to completely create a role, otherwise everyone knows that it is difficult to fill in the entertainment industry.

Let's put it this way, it would be strange if someone reads what you write like this.