The Eternal Immortal Dynasty: Beginning with the Fight Against Petty Officials

With the idea of ​​cultivating immortality as its cover, is it actually a hegemony novel in the late Han Dynasty that started in the late Han Dynasty? Anyway, let's take a look, there's no big problem at the moment. If you read it as a farming novel, there is too little description of family development, and many have been forgotten, such as the family's spiritual well, two pastures, etc.

Who is this? I have finished reading this book. Do you have any other works? Worship

The worldview structure is good. The writing style is just too wordy. In the first few chapters, I read over and over again, and I don't know how many sentences are similar to Jiulang's coming, Jiulang's staying, and these kind of meaningless greetings. It is recommended that the author reduce this kind of useless dialogue and make some substantive advancement and substantive description.

Daoji can be said to be middle grade, why must it be said to be low grade? It is easy to look down upon. Middle grade can be said to have some chance or something, and it is already a foundation.

Stable writing, with a base of five million words

Okay, well written 👍

It is so well written that I can write about the Three Kingdoms. Very Han Dynasty style

The alien version is set at the end of the Qin Dynasty in Gaowu. The so-called Qianqian in the article is actually the Qin Dynasty. The author eloquently tells the story of the rise of a young boy from the countryside. The writing style is somewhat similar to The Most Romantic of the Three Kingdoms. The major sects should be benchmarking against the various princes. The customs and people's customs are vividly displayed on the page. It is estimated that the book will take the route of fighting for hegemony.

There are also insights such as the inheritance of skills, and the treasures of heaven and earth. As the protagonist, you can only get the basic talents and abilities. The slightly better ones can only grow through the ruins in the mountains and the treasures of heaven and earth that you encounter on your own. Otherwise, you can only be a real dog like those powerful ones.

I've read six chapters, and the writing and diction are okay. I'll update soon.

There are too few updates, not enough to watch

You updated too little about your book. I added it to the bookshelf and it took almost 6 months to update it to more than 200 chapters.

If you update once a day, when will you become a great master?

It's a pity that I finished reading it in less than two days. It's very good. The logic is smooth.

Let's supplement it with some fruit tree spirit beasts.

The setting is quite good, but the map is a bit too small, and the protagonist should survive in this environment. Then the family children go out to fight, and it is written like a group portrait. Then the protagonist becomes the ancestor of the family, and the timeline is lengthened. We can use this rebellion as a point to bloodbath the Rongtai Immortal Clan and become a county. The tyrant, and then lick Gao Su, use the convenience of Yunling to do business with the demon clan, and then take the dividends of this rebellion, basically there is hope for the elixir, and then use the golden finger to support the talented child to join the Yunlan Sect, and collude with the demon clan, the golden elixir will be fine, and there are those close to the protagonist's family In fact, it is normal for a few children to die, and all of them have made breakthroughs. Not to mention resources, so many breakthroughs clearly indicate that there are opportunities for the family. Those wealthy families are not holy mothers, and then everything about farming is written as war. Things in the family are not fully understood. How can there be so much talent in just a few acres of land? Those who practice foundation building are a bit out of topic. In a world where immortality and martial arts coexist, the immortality is a bit too weak, and they all lead troops to fight. Wouldn't it be nice to set up a battle formation? During a battle, civilians will transport food. I don't believe that a county can't take out hundreds of storage bags, which is only tens of thousands of spiritual stones. The author's setting is good and his writing skills are okay, but I feel that the idea is wrong and the writing is a bit crooked.

I wish you greater success