Kingdom Come: Deliverance: Legacy of Dreams

Good fan parts, wonderful fighting scenes, and decent growth content. Then there is Yi Tuo Xiang's original part, the so-called emotional drama, and the inexplicable literary youth disease.

It's too depressing. The protagonist is like a pressure cooker. New relatives and friends are always dying, and they are constantly dying and seeking revenge, not to mention the game part. The writing is okay, but I worked for a day, and when I came home and faced my parents' health, real money and other issues, I wanted to read a novel to relieve myself. To be honest, I wanted to die even more after reading it.

The Kingdom of Valencia, where the protagonist is located, does not look like a traditional feudal kingdom, with efficient mobilization, organization, etc., It feels more like a modern country wearing a skin.

There is nothing you can do if the parents in the dream are killed, and there is nothing you can do if the girl who has a crush on you is killed. Everyone related to the protagonist must die. If you can only continue to use the death of the protagonist's relatives to promote the plot, then the prospects of this book are gone. The pace will be slow. At first, the reader's perspective will feel ordinary, but then this kind of writing continues, which is unbearable for everyone. We are human beings, not gods. Originally, we read novels to relieve stress, not to cure ourselves of depression.

Looking back at the plot, Henry's experiences are too legendary. He has been in countless life-and-death crises, been captured, been attacked, and was besieged by more than a dozen bandits, but he can still fight back. His force level is so strong that one person can kill through a castle. His learning ability is even better. He learned Latin in less than a week, and he even learned alchemy without a teacher.

The author would like to remind you of a small problem. Chain mail armor of good quality can hardly be destroyed by a normal person's slashing with a long sword. If you occasionally do it once or twice, I will assume that the quality of this person's chain armor is not good. But too many times (the sword hit the opponent's abdomen, and the Cuman vomited blood and fell to the ground, and there were still blood stains on the sword body). This is a somewhat abstract plot. This is almost impossible to happen in actual combat. Most of the deaths of chain mail infantry are not caused by sword cuts on the armor parts. Moreover, the armor in the Kingdom of Salvation game is actually weaker than in reality. In the early stage of the game of the first generation, I used a one-handed sword and a Cuman infantry wearing chain mail to fight in the forest for more than 20 minutes before killing him when the durability of both sides' armor was basically exhausted. Even if your Henry is stronger and more stamina than my Henry at the time of the game, you can't kill the opponent with just one or two slashes on the chainmail with the Raddi sword... Even if you really kill, there shouldn't be any blood... Because this type of attack can't destroy the chainmail, and even if the opponent is killed, it will be due to blunt force internal injuries, not skin trauma...

Let's complain about the current web articles. They are all system articles. If you just fill up the attributes, it's a fool's errand. Also from the title of the book, such as: "From Recruit Egg to World Dominator", I knew that he would become the world ruler without even reading it, and there was no sense of mystery at all. And the names are the same as the old lady's foot wraps, each one smelly and long. The pure enjoyment version looks more comfortable. I have passed the age of watching Dark Blue and added some points, and it is templated. There is no difference between watching one movie and watching 100 movies. Except that the name of the protagonist has changed, the routine is still the same. I used to browse online literature websites, and I didn't know which one was good to watch. Now, when I browse the entire site, I just read the beginning and then discard it. Those who write well are all eunuchs.

If you have any comments, you can post them under this thread and I will read them.

I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is finally not a stereotypical time-traveler. I feel that most time-travelers speak quite intellectually.

The first is that the dream plot is too cumbersome. This is because many readers may have never played the game, so I have to explain it clearly. The second is for foreshadowing. I understand that everyone wants to see it more exciting, but foreshadowing is also essential. If I only If the plot of the dream is rushed through, the emotional impact of the Cuman massacre on the protagonist will be very weak. It is essential to suppress the excitement first. Only by depicting the warm daily life of this village can the impact on the protagonist after the Cumans destroy everything be highlighted. The second one is that the plot has not changed, it has no meaning and is not satisfying at all. What I want to say is that if Henry's parents had not died, Henry would not have embarked on the road of revenge, and all subsequent stories would not have happened. This is the most basic point, it cannot be circumvented, and it cannot be changed. Secondly, this is just the beginning of the dream. I cannot be like the Savior of the Kingdom of Heaven in the subsequent plots. I wrote the rescue mission like that, and I was just running errands for others every day Please have more faith in me. This is my first book, and I still have a bit of a literary problem. I want to write a good story seriously, not just a mindless and cool article. I have thought carefully about many of the opinions about dreams mentioned in the comment area. I have also revised the original manuscript of 70,000 to 80,000 words, and it has become 50,000 to 60,000 words. I have been very serious about streamlining the content of my novel. I am not just thinking about word count. In the end, I am sorry that everyone has to listen to me talk so much nonsense. Thank you again for your comments, encouragement and support.