Hogwarts: What Do the Four Giants of Tutors Do?

At first I thought it would be boring, but the result was better than expected Let me start with the conclusion: there are obvious flaws, but there are also obvious advantages I think the biggest flaw is that it is too eager to show the protagonist's "genius" label, and there is not much interaction with peers, which I personally think is a pity And some of the content is too sophisticated. I can't be so careful, so there will be a slight (at least to me, just a slight) sense of drama In terms of advantages, I think the writing style is pretty good, and the content is quite novel, especially the HP natives of the world, which prevents him from appearing too prophetic, and even the occasional thoughts are quite interesting for readers to see from the perspective Come again This is also an important point that I think is very important. The protagonist's outlook is upright and "normal". I won't go into details about the outlook. Others have posted about it. The reason why it is normal is the character. Although he lived for seven years a thousand years ago, he is still 18 years old. This makes the character mature enough, but he does not look old. In some places, Ryan's "childlike innocence" can still be seen. " In addition, I secretly hope that there can be a little bit of emotional drama. Although Wuer HP is not a romance novel, and this book has no obvious emotional drama so far, at least among the JP fanfictions I have read so far, either the harem or the emotional drama is not obvious. I always feel that it still seems to be shortcomings from the perspective of "student" life.

The book is actually quite good, but the mistake in the review greatly affects the experience. I dare say that most people who read online articles don't even care about whether they have used it incorrectly, let alone opening the comment area just to read everyone's comments. There are only a few comments in the comment area, and when I open the comment area, it means that the correction is wrong. At least I feel very alienated.

That god who gets everything day and night, I clicked on the book review to see interesting netizens making fun of the plot, sharing their opinions, and criticizing the quality, not to see a self-satisfied psychopath who mentally strengthens others.

There is a "crazy man" in this book. He is behind every sentence in every chapter. He has destroyed the atmosphere of many HP fandoms. Every time you click on a chapter review, you will not be surprised to receive his mental attack. There happened to be a book friend who posted a post earlier, and finally I couldn't stand him anymore, so I will also post next to inform the author, hoping to deal with it.

I thought it was a boring pretentious story, but I patiently read it after 10 chapters and found that it was actually okay. However, the author was too eager to let readers know how powerful and talented the protagonist was, which resulted in a somewhat poor narrative feel. Grain, has the potential to be better

Overall rating: Grain. Score (out of 100 points): 62 points, passing. Note: The book review contains spoilers, please do not read if you mind. Advantages: 1. The writing is good, at least there is not an exclamation point in every sentence. This is an excerpt from Chapter 25 of this article. From this excerpt, you can see the writing style of this article: This morning, Lavender Brown asked Parvati Patil to go to class together, but did not call her. She even heard what Lavender Brown whispered to Parvati. "Look at her, she is always keen to point out people's faults... I was clearly talking to her last night!" "Does she think she can become the best student in Gryffindor? Stop talking, everyone knows that Ryan Elias will definitely be the first, even the Sorting Hat knows..." Although Parvati later pointed out quietly that Ryan was not entirely a Gryffindor student, Hermione could no longer listen. 2. The naming of the protagonist and other original things can also be seen that a lot of effort has been put into it, and it is quite thoughtful. Example: The name of the giant squid is Shaqa'a'a, where "Shaq'a'a" comes from the Arabic word for "brave". 3. The protagonist has very upright views, so upright that he cannot even be considered a dark wizard. This is relatively rare in "Harry Potter" fan fiction. This is an excerpt from Chapter 14 of this article. From this, you can see the integrity of the protagonist: Ryan walked up to Malfoy and spoke softly. "First of all, magical animals such as the sand... Giant squid that have lived hundreds of years ago are as intelligent as any wizard - calling them 'animals' is a manifestation of extreme lack of education, just like you like to call other wizards 'mudbloods'!" At the same time as Ryan said this, Pansy Parkinson's pretty little face not far behind Malfoy became visibly pale. At the same time, Draco Malfoy's two followers, the two chubby little wizards, also reached out to draw the wand. But... "They were all petrified." With a wave of Ryan's hand, their bodies instantly stiffened and they hit the ground heavily. 4. This book does not discredit Dumbledore, it is not too brainless. This probably doesn't require an example, so I won't attach it. If you have any questions, please mention them in the comment area. Disadvantages: 1. Almost all the highlights of the original characters are given to the protagonist. This is an excerpt from Chapter 25 of this article. In the original book, Hermione Granger easily turned a match into a silver needle: She bit her lip and kept waving her wand at the match in front of her. She had already previewed the "Basic Transformation Guide", and she should have been able to do this simple transformation a long time ago. But the match in front of her just refused to obey. Sometimes it becomes like a small metal stick, sometimes it becomes smaller at the top and larger at the bottom, but it never really turns into a needle. But at this time... "Don't let your bad mood dominate your spellcasting, Granger." Hermione heard the voice from ahead. She stopped her wand, raised her head and saw Ryan's light blue eyes. "I'm sorry?" She said softly, still obviously not in a good mood. By the way, she saw the match in front of Ryan that had turned into a needle. She even saw that there were fine and elegant patterns on the needle. "Emotions." Ryan repeated his words patiently, just like he used to teach the little wizards who were admitted to the school by the four teachers at Hogwarts. "Emotions can affect your spells." He pointed to the weird-shaped needle with a large head and small body on Hermione's desk. "Good emotions are of course wonderful. They will make some spells have better effects, and even become the source of some spells." "And bad emotions... Of course they will exist, and they will also have a strengthening effect on very specific spells - but remember, don't let it dominate you." 2. The protagonist is too Mary Sue, which is no different from the ancient novels ten years ago. Example: "Then, please sort the hospital for me." Ryan said. At the same time, curiosity arose in his heart. In fact, although he is a student of the Big Four and even one of the founding participants of Hogwarts. But he himself has never been assigned to any college. As a disciple of the Big Four, his role at Hogwarts at that time was more like a dean and an outstanding graduate. So he was really curious as to which college he would be assigned to. However, the facts were obviously different from what he expected. "Oh, Sorting... Of course." There seemed to be more joy in the Sorting Hat's voice. "The four masters have already arranged your academy... Yes, there is no doubt about the result." The inner dialogue ends here. The next moment, everyone in the entire auditorium heard the sorting result finally announced by the Sorting Hat very clearly. "Hogwarts!"

Just think of the protagonist as a time-traveler who has never seen HP, because the protagonist is more like a time-traveler who doesn't know anything about the HP world than a native.

There has been no update for 5 days. It's such a waste of my 2200 points. What a rip-off.

This novel irritates me every time I read it. The beginning is very good, but the author is sloppy. It's full of riddles and no clues at all. It would be great to know that the riddles are solved in the end and the identity of the heir is announced, but what's wrong with you? Is it too late for you to solve the riddle? Before it was solved, a group of people mocked the protagonist, and the protagonist retorted, and then mocked, and then retorted again. The plot, which was obviously very enjoyable, made me feel very frustrated. Big fire. Obviously the identity of the heirs of the Big Four is a good innovation, and the beginning is really amazing, but the author just wrote it, the noble protagonist slaps everyone in Hogwarts, but it still gives people a feeling of being rejected. Everyone knows something, but the protagonist doesn't know it. If he asks, he won't tell you at the right time, and then it will be a mess and it will be delayed. Moreover, the author has a general understanding of the coolness of the identity of the descendant of the Big Four. The branch at the beginning does have a lot of big ones, but it doesn't work in the later chapters. It just gives people the feeling: Oh, this person is the descendant of the Big Four. He is so awesome. I can scheme against him and compete with him. Feeling. I feel like your identity is not as shocking as Dumbledore's son. The protagonist first apprentices to the Big Four before enrolling in school. This was supposed to be the plot of Hogwarts welcoming his master. However, in the plot, when the four deans first knew the identity of the protagonist, it was written as follows: the protagonist enters school, experiences events, obtains the treasure of the Four Giants, and becomes a successor. It just gives people the impression that the protagonist is the descendant of Xin Yun'er who obtained the treasure but was not personally recognized by the Big Four. I feel uncomfortable all of a sudden, so I've been looking forward to it for so long, so you just give me this? The summary of the 🤔 team is: the beginning is very good, and the identity of the successor raised my expectations, but it was a little watery later on, and it was not as exciting as I imagined. Summing up the food and grass, it is not poisonous, but it has not reached the grass jelly yet. (Maybe it was because the beginning surprised me, and made me have too much expectations for this novel. I thought I had found a fairy tale, but it turned out not to be as grand as I thought. The idea that fairy grass should not be like this made me a little angry. Personal opinion, normal discussion, rational discussion)

Duan Ping, that magic man, really makes me laugh every time I see him😅

What did you say when you put it on the shelves?

It's really unexpected that this book has such poor results, but I felt it was good after reading it. The characters in the book are all remarkable, and I can see the author's efforts. Although there are some small shortcomings (but considering that the author may be a newcomer), I can look forward to this book, provided that the author completes the book.

The book is actually quite good. Each non-original spell has a corresponding English annotation. It can be seen that the author has carefully thought about and searched for information. This kind of workload should be more than other fanfics, but it is a pity😔

Good product, very good Harry Potter fanfic, it makes my brain work fast

Who still remembers per aspera ad astra Follow this journey, finally reach the stars per animam ad sapientiam Follow this soul, finally realize the wisdom per virtutem ad mortis occursum Follow this high meaning, finally hear the joyful song per vitalitatem ad omnium animas Follow this life, finally give birth to all souls per magicam ad universitatem Follow this blood, and finally achieve the highest. Which chapter does it appear in? I'm also curious, was this paragraph made up by the author? I only remember that the first sentence is the school motto of Stevens Institute of Technology in the United States. How did you write the next four sentences?

The author will update soon The author's soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving a long whip and setting up six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Climbing over the mountains and singing... Returning... The soul is back... ... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe with all our glory... 𓀋 𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back.... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

In the early stage, the back and forth between the four giants was smooth and full of emotions. As a result, the more the max-level account developed, the more frustrated it became.

Please, I really like this book, please don't stop updating it.

Only ten updates a month... Not fattening at all

The perspective is weird. The protagonist always looks at the little wizards around him with a senior mentality. Faced with the Mudblood insults from Malfoy's group, the protagonist's approach was to give verbal education I don't quite understand, but the plot direction is too strange From the beginning, the character of the protagonist was fully developed, and his character was very high. In the first lesson of Transfiguration, he was filled with a role similar to that of a teaching assistant, instructing young wizards, and expressing magical opinions that McGonagall agreed with. But the plot direction is very boring

Children, the prison corner is back, and you must win the resurrection match this time!

Aboriginal protagonist. A book of fairy grass, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch

I think it looks pretty good and the writing is pretty good too 😆 Then why are there so few people?