Hogwarts: My Grandmother Was the Queen

After reading the latest chapters, I can't stand it anymore. I feel like I'm reading a fairy tale. The protagonist Guang Wei is a genius and a heartthrob. The supporting characters are blindly worshiped with facial makeup. The plot is boring but the word count is too low.

The latest chapter of Professor McGonagall is OOC. It is true that the older cat girl likes Quidditch, but she cares more about the safety of the students. Under such preconditions, she cannot rush over and ask for the game to continue. This is completely disregarding Harry's life and death. I hope the author will pay attention to this. This is a very serious OOC and directly violates the underlying logic of Dean McGonagall.

The efficiency of your writing is too low. You have to issue two or three tickets every day... Do you still need a monthly ticket? Look at your monthly score of more than 1 million words but only 100 votes. Just kidding, I don't know if you are full-time or part-time. After a long time, you got good grades, but you gave up again. You can't do this...

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How should I put it? There is something wrong with the logic. The British royal family does not know the existence of magic. If you say that only the Queen knows about it, then it is reasonable. But if it was disclosed directly to the royal family members later, did you have to hide it before?

Remember, Weasley is a cesspit, don't touch it. Many HP fans seem to be in this place now.

It's a bit ironic that the male protagonist entered the Snake House with his status. Salazar didn't like Muggles back then because he was afraid that they would betray him. However, a wizard from the Muggle royal family entered the Snake House instead, and the child of the leader of the biggest enemy entered his own college.

One thing to say is that the author's Western cultural background is well written, and it is not like some half-Chinese novels where idioms pop up from time to time to make me laugh. But the problem is that the author's values ​​of aristocracy, class, and politics are too separate from Harry Potter, the magical fairy tale of love and courage😥. Are you talking about politics among seven or eight-year-old first-grade children? And then he bows to you, a Muggle noble, when he sees you? Come on, in the original work, even the pure-blood nobles didn't look down upon it... What's even more fatal is that the most attractive "magic" setting in the original work accounts for too little in this book, and it's almost all about aristocracy and politics. I sincerely recommend the author to try A Song of Ice and Fire fanfiction. That novel is more suitable for you than Harry Potter

The biggest problem is that the protagonist has no improvement in strength. It is mostly about parenting from beginning to end. The highlights of hp are either old-fashioned or clever. These two really don't account for much.

The first part is okay, but the later I read it, it gets weirder. The system says it is gone, so I might as well not write it, and then write about politics. The overall pace is slow and very draggy. Let's write about magic. It just mentions classes and exams. We don't know anything about the protagonist's strength, and the protagonist's ring. The writing is also very vague In short, the more I read, the less interesting it is.

Very low magic content 😅

I feel like the title of this book is a bit confusing. In the eyes of those wizards, you are a noble in the Muggle world, and you are also a Muggle to them. So you want to express the protagonist's status? But in the wizarding world, it's equivalent to nothing! And there is a very serious sense of separation. Purebloods in the wizarding world originally looked down on Muggles, and then the article praised Muggle nobles in various ways. Author, what exactly did you want to write? It feels like when European and American countries were carrying out the slave trade, they accidentally broke into an African prince. Then this African prince showed his elegance as a prince in various ways, and then convinced all European and American countries! Whether it is novels or movies, they are full of discrimination against Muggles. Moreover, many Muggles were killed and injured in various wars, but they did not take it seriously. As soon as this novel came out, pure-blood families immediately fell in love with Muggles. It feels really disgusting. The logic of this novel or movie has been completely changed. I feel that those who really like the Harry Potter IP will not like this novel.

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It's boring, no one from Slytherin House bullies the protagonist, a mudblood.

The magic world is not a political show. You have strayed from the theme. Magic should look like magic. However, the details of your magic are very few. You are a fan. There are very few original characters.

Playing politics in the wizarding world is boring

Too much pretense, only skin and no bones

The logic is somewhat problematic. The royal family that rules a country, and only the king knows the magical world. This is a typical information asymmetry! You are not even qualified to take Joe! Then, he chatted with the country bumpkin holding a gun in an aristocratic manner. . . Dangerous! I have no such awareness at all. Although it is expected that the plot of the process of verbally evading and subduing a group of subordinates will be quite exciting, but facing the wizard who forgets everything at every turn, even the protagonist with royal skin is just running around naked. . . Finally, why bother dressing up as a prince? What's the point of being a prince who has no foundation and runs into the magic world naked? It's better to dress like an ordinary person, at least you don't have to use your prince's skin to provoke a bunch of outlaws who resist rocket launchers. . . No need to refute. . . No matter what you say! Unified reply: forget everything!

I have finished subscribing to the latest chapter, and I will not order any more in the future. It is really good-looking, but it lacks features. It appeared twice in total after the system was turned on. There is no improvement in the protagonist's strength at all. The only time it was a battle was with the magic items left by the royal family. In fact, in the final analysis, the magic world The essence of the world is that strength is respected. Dumbledore is strong so he has a big voice, and Greenwater is strong so there are many people who follow him. It is not privilege that determines strength, but strength that determines privilege. Social interaction is indeed very interesting, but the personal ability of the protagonist cannot be seen. Maybe the author is more suitable to write pure history?

The system is really useless and meaningless. The history of the British royal family has lasted for nearly 1,200 years. Such good materials are not used but this is used! !

Voldemort: Why do you call me the Dark Lord after I killed thousands of people? Why isn't the Queen called the Black Queen when she kills so many people? Queen: Isn't that enough in one day? It's not enough to kill. You see, I personally ordered hundreds of thousands of people to be killed, so you call me Queen 🤓

Go write about Game of Thrones! Weak magic, heavy on strategy and politics, isn't this an inappropriate game of thrones?

There is a question in Chapter 18, "It is said that Merlin graduated from this academy." The legend of Merlin and King Arthur dates back to the fifth century AD, while Hogwarts was founded in the tenth century AD. Merlin was more than five hundred years earlier than Hogwarts.

Hogwarts: Game of Thrones😁😁😁😁

I want to laugh when I think of the 70-year-old prince above him, who finally survived the death of the queen and then found out that he had cancer after only a few years of recovery.

So what, does anyone remember that the protagonist has a system? 🙂

Where's the promised golden finger? Apart from appearing briefly at the beginning, did it play any role later on?

Prince Henry

Do cars in the Wizarding World really need to be refueled? And almost no one uses cars. Where can I fill up this gas? A gas station in the Muggle world? And Ron, they probably don't know what a Rolls-Royce is.

Please find a Hogwarts novel. When the protagonist was sorted, he almost ate the little spider on the sorting hat with a toad or something else. The little spider was still a stunted eight-eyed spider.