Hogwarts, but 1960

Just like the title, it can be seen from the writing that this is an author with ideals and pursuits. What he writes is not dry words but his stories. At present, it seems that there is no problem with the plot outline, and the rhythm is relatively mature. If it remains worthy of quality, if there is no special highlight, I recommend it.

146，，， First of all, make sure that the author's writing skills are solid. Although it is not very outstanding, in a category like Harry Potter, it is enough to make a living as an online article, and it is adequate in daily descriptions. Then I started to criticize. Don't be offended because I pay attention to details when reading books. First: The character development is reversed. The previous one showed a certain degree of political literacy, but here he behaves like a child, with a strong sense of separation.                                                                                                   I feel that the author's outline has no logic or even no outline. The first chapter talks about the soul of a man in his thirties. In daily life, due to the secretion of stupid human cub hormones or making a series of friends with Remus Snape, it is a little childish, which is okay. But at this time (I have certain abilities, but a relative and friend are excluded by politics) I don't know what to do. Obviously, there have been confrontations with the Slytherin people and the early wisdom and maturity of "homework" in the past, but here I am as ignorant as a child, with a strong sense of separation. Thirty-year-old souls should be more mature when encountering such serious matters. They can either choose to follow the power of Goldfinger and work hard to become stronger than the Death Eaters and Voldemort, or help Dumbledore with advice (your precocious wisdom should be used here). After all, he is a boy. He originates from a country where dragon slaying is an exam content. But here he is still like a little kid being educated by a confused old man like Dumbledore. I think it is very inconsistent with common sense. Second: The character's personality is only shown when needed, and the sense of fragmentation is still too strong As a character trait specially created for the protagonist, the part about pranks is really a failure and makes people feel even more disconnected. One moment they are studying hard and doing academic research with two professors, and the next moment there are a few pranks. Let's put them into the real world. Your college classmates devote themselves to their homework and research every day, and then they have to find someone to prank them from time to time. You will definitely think that there is something wrong with this person. Third: There are too many descriptions of characters, especially some small characters When describing characters, there are always descriptions such as pupils shaking and expressions changing. It is too academic. I know it is used to strengthen the psychology of the character, but it is inappropriate to use too much. Some minor characters have so many descriptions (to make up the word count) that are useless and annoying. Try to transfer the ink to the protagonist group, Dumbledore may look better.

Generally good, but one thing is that the protagonist provokes werewolves in order to save Lupine. You are still so young, and you are really not afraid of werewolves biting you, especially when your mother is a Muggle and uses magic to cause harm to yourself. Not to mention the possible impact on your own health, you really treat your family as a human being. If you don't care about this, then this novel is very interesting and the writing logic is also very good.

The main character, the Virgin? Most people who travel through time in modern society live alone. No matter how many times they have been beaten by society, they still want to help others. The character of the protagonist is too easy to be targeted, and if it changes, it will be different from before.

What can I say after reading Chapter 40? The first part was very good, but when I saw the emotional content of Lily, Snape and James, I wanted to complain. These are a group of 11-year-old children. What are you so anxious about, author? Did you have such a delicate mind when you were 11 years old? Love is based on emotions and hormones. It's really exciting to watch you write about a group of 11-year-olds falling in love!

Either that or extreme Snape fans are pushing for the Snape Black Four. Or just black Snape to the point of being black. In the original book, Snape has small details but no major meaning. He followed the Dark Lord as a shadow of his childhood, and then followed him for his ideals. His only advantages are that he is talented and affectionate. James and Sirius have great sense of justice, and they can understand the big things right and wrong. I think this is far better than Snape This is similar to the whole story of Rusty Iron in the Republic of China under One Man. They are not good people, but they will lend a helping hand when the country is in danger of life or death.

The writing is quite good, but Goldfinger, well, is a bit too strong. It seems to be able to strengthen everything, and it somewhat reduces the protagonist's own subjective initiative. For example, the basic theory of transformation that could have been taught by oneself is now directly taught.

The plot is okay, but I have never seen an 11-year-old child. The topic he cares about every day is this, like that, and that like this. It's okay to write it once or twice, but it's a bit disgusting to apply this Xingyuan brain thinking to everyone around the protagonist.

The story is quite warm and interesting, and the writing style is ancient and humane, simple and smooth. The only problem is that I feel that the portrayal of Snape's family, especially his mother, is very flat, and the changes in mentality are abrupt and inconsistent with the character.

As a dream-realization story, it is basically qualified, and the setting can be seen to be well-tested. Although in terms of plot, I think sometimes the arrangement and connection are a bit stiff There are also small problems, but the overall impact is not big. For example, Irene's transformation is stiff and the system is like a decoration (but it is understandable. It is said that it is better to have a system setting) Daily campus writing is indeed It is not easy to explode at a certain point, because there is a lack of excitement and a slow pace. If you want to achieve good results, you have requirements for writing, writing style and word count, and the number of words is too few to see anything. Daily writing also has a fixed audience, and popular daily style fans also have such as the Necromancer, but if the early results are not good, it will dampen the enthusiasm for writing

Evaluation: For the sake of the author's so-called rationality, he gave up the elaboration of the plot's pleasantness, making it a non-traditional web article.

A small suggestion. I want the protagonist to catch up with the tide of the times, and at the same time, I want to describe campus life. How about starting from the 6th grade? The academic, emotional, and ideological depth are more in line with the depth and height I want to achieve in the article, instead of letting a first grade/11-year-old child become a great thinker and great magician.

This is a masterpiece of a fan, and it is very well written, especially the daily life in Hogwarts. I like it very much. I just caught up with the latest, I hope that the IQ of Tom, a senior who has not really appeared in the real sense, is online, and he will compete with the protagonist, so that the subsequent plot will be interesting 😁 Monthly Pass Stud

I caught up on the latest chapter in one go, and after reading it, there are still relatively few comments, so, How can I put it, I will put this book into the category worth reading. It cannot be said to be shockingly beautiful, but the logic and writing are not too flawed. At best, it is difficult to realize the grand wish of giving everyone a better ending. I can't find any major faults (if it can be completed smoothly) The only question I have now is that I haven't graduated from the second grade yet. Is the combat power a little exaggerated? The first-year guardian angel can challenge the fire in the second grade. Should the fourth grade have to catch a few dragons and come back to have a taste... It feels like among all the active NPCs at the moment, only James is like a twelve-year-old child. You can say that the others are eighteen years old and there is no problem ()

Typically, people don't drink water for fear of drowning, and don't ride in cars for fear of getting into a car accident. Have you ever thought that if you can predict the situation, you can at least foresee the danger in advance? Can you prepare in advance to deal with dangers? It's better than facing danger suddenly! And there are many kinds of prophecies in Harry Potter. Some prophecies like Tenelawi predict a paragraph, and others predict a plausible picture. Many of the predicted situations are not the inevitable form of the final result, and the room for manipulation is very large. In other words, even if you directly predict a person's death, you can still use transformation to turn an object into that person to make the predicted scene come true. In short, there are many ways to avoid adverse situations. It would be ridiculous to find such a lame excuse. Besides, you are the author now. Whether the prediction result can be changed is not a matter of how you write it. As long as the plot is reasonable, who cares?

Overall, it's pretty good-looking. I personally prefer fanfics with very long paragraphs rather than the ones that just go to the next line in one sentence. However, there are often semantic repetitions such as "the aroma of the collision of fat and oil" and "the tight package". It will be better if you think more about it.

It has nothing to do with the plot at all, and is unfamiliar to everyone. In the plot, a girl suddenly appears and has an affair with the protagonist, then suddenly disappears. I still don't know what she looks like, what her personality is like, what she likes and dislikes, let alone the character arc, which is completely hollow. Deleting this person will have zero impact on the plot of this book, so what is she here for? It's really ugly. Either write it well or stop writing it... Looking at the emotional lines of the supporting characters, it's clear that the author has written them well. To put it bluntly, he didn't design this character well and didn't think about what kind of plot she would have... Especially when a Lupine pops up every time he finishes writing and is like the spiritual companion of the protagonist. , It looks like a gay... Then again, although I feel that the author has tried hard, writing female characters is generally not as vivid as writing male characters. Even when writing about Lily, I feel that the traits and conflicts created are not as good as Snape and Lupin... I can feel that she is a good girl, but that's all. I don't know if the author beautifies the female characters in his heart, or is not willing to let them suffer... If this is the reason, the author can try not to deliberately differentiate between male and female characters. Gender is just one of the attributes of a character similar to tall, short, fat, thin, cheerful and introverted... Every time I am attracted by the plot (and I prefer happy endings), I read on with great anticipation. Then when the heroine appears, she will treat me, and then she will treat me again... I need to recuperate for a while, maybe I can't find any other good friends in a few days, so I can come back and read...

The writing is excellent and delicate, and each little character has his or her own arc. It doesn't stick to the traditional plot. The characters are either black or white, and you can see the gentle side of everyone's heart. It is a rare masterpiece

It's very well written. I finally found a book written by my parents.

I have been reading this for a long time and here are my thoughts: Apart from anything else, this one is the most stable one on the bookshelf at the moment (other HP fans I have been following at the same time have either become eunuchs or have stopped updating frequently). The quality is also very stable and it can be seen that the author is very good at writing some chapters about the turning points of major events. He also writes about the Quidditch game in detail every time (I will save it until the end of the game and read it in one sitting). In short, I will continue to read it.

​Those who have read novels should have a habit, or in other words, those who read novels frequently, and have 5 to 10 years of experience in reading online novels. At the current time period (2026), basically every novel should be changed after reading about 100 chapters. . . . . I don't know if you are all like this, but I am like this, no matter which platform I am on. 😂😂😂

Please rate this book. Is there a female protagonist? Is there a plot that subverts the main character's intelligence or tortures the main character? Are the supporting characters' IQs normal?

I haven't read Starting Point for a long time, and suddenly I saw this story for free. After reading it all night, I still didn't get enough of it. Anyway, I personally liked it, so I ordered it all. Now I am following the update every day, hoping to see the final chapter.

My favorite chapters that I am currently interested in are: Umbridge's Press War Chapter and Aiden's Summer Vacation Recapture Chapter. 1. The setting of Rita is very interesting. I am looking forward to the follow-up performance of this kind of negative but not villainous character. However, I feel that the Defense Against the Dark Arts professor line is incomplete. The role of the professor in the diary is not fully reflected. The protagonist attracts firepower for him, and then the performance of Professor Malfoy can only be said to be this. 2. The part about the Philosopher's Stone is very interesting and novel. The part I don't like very much: Quidditch. It felt tiring to read, Ravenclaw was ahead, Ravenclaw caught the snitch and won. The same old games and celebrations after the games are a bit boring.

Come on, author, you can learn from Wade's book 🙂

First of all, the female protagonist, no matter what happens, she has to go up and make her presence felt. The male protagonist has been sent love letters, given chocolates, and flirted with by vixens. Anyway, she only knows how to put pressure on the male protagonist. Is the male protagonist a turtle? He only knows how to accept anger? She still cares about this and that when she can't help with business, just because the male protagonist likes her? It's not that you can't write like this. You can write a little occasionally to adjust the rhythm. The problem is that this emotional drama has almost no role in promoting the plot. The same is true for Lily, Alice, and Mary. When writing emotional dramas, they just stamp the corresponding male characters. Can't they write about emotions except jealousy?

I feel like the picture of the protagonist using rfk should be quite similar.

Delicate writing style. The standards of hp fan authors are outrageous. Why? 😐

I have read Chapter 159 so far. Let me share my feelings. Overall, this is one of the rare good books in HP novels (not counting the dozens of chapters at the beginning). It is warm and humorous, and in some places it makes you feel like your body is warm after reading it. However, in some places, you may be halfway warmed and suddenly a basin of cold water is poured on you, which makes you feel a little aggrieved. Overall, it is really good! Come on 🤓

1. It's too far-fetched that the old Malfoy will die just because he causes trouble in a small school 2. Voldemort recruits soldiers in the school, not selects them, but attracts fans. The logic of his actions is too poor. How many laws should be changed by persecuting a few Muggle squibs? Do you really think of Voldemort as a politician? Voldemort is a careerist, not a racist. He has done so many things but few people have gained 😥 3. Lao Deng sent a student to meet Grindelwald alone for no reason, causing a lot of trouble. He also had to deal with Voldemort Speaking briefly and deeply and so on. . . Logical full pull