Mortal: You Have the Heaven Palm Vase, and I Have the Gaode Map.

It's okay to imitate Lao Mo, and plug-ins are also okay. Your updates are good and there are no big poisonous points, just water points. But, but, but What are you updating recently? Several times I had inexplicable attempts to kill people and steal bottles. Let's not say that you are in a secret realm and a demon tribulation. You can't even figure this out. Just saying that getting the bottle will have any qualitative improvement on your strength? Are you usually short of elixirs? What you lack most is attack methods, which are various functional ancient treasures. To take a step back, if you want to make a move, just plan it, increase your own strength and weaken your opponent. You're lucky enough to get there without being crushed. It was someone else's territory that was being fought over, and it was someone else's first love. The right time, place, and people didn't exist. You got ignited inexplicably and became so angry. In the end, no benefits were gained, and the Moon-Sealing Sect lost face. Injured Young Master Wei. The old devil wrote it down in a small notebook. And Nangong Wan probably won't miss you either. What are you planning? Are you born to be funny🤡? If you update tomorrow and install one for yourself, is it all because of inner demons? Originally, the writing of this book was pretty good, and the updates were great. I have been following it. It seems unnecessary now. The author doesn't want to write well anyway. I went to read and use the free coins. I feel disadvantaged by using the reading package here. It's a pity that I spent so much on reading these days.

Han Li himself is actually okay. You can make friends with him when writing fan stories. Killing him is very depressing.

I was poisoned, and the thousand-year-old elixir was used as consumables. I was given a recipe to start refining the elixir, and whoever practiced it successfully made the foundation-building elixir. I didn't care about the type of elixir, but it was a thousand-year-old elixir. I put so many poisons in just one or two chapters. I wrote this I was kicked in the head by a dog, so I kept on watching, and then came the Chen girl who forced herself to devote herself to the protagonist. She also came with three foundation-building pill prescriptions, and she happened to be seen by Nangong Wan. She couldn't hold it in anymore and died from the poison. I specially rewarded you with two coins. I really need to spray you hard.

Licking Nangong Wan is like licking a dog sometimes Licking even second-hand Hard Clam

Later, I let myself go and mess around. Forget about all the small poisons in the front, there is also a clone poison in the back. The protagonist directly has the consciousness of the second Yuanying, but he does not destroy it immediately, but lets it go free.

The Brahma Saint's true demonic skills are not cultivated. Let Shenjun Dayan, a person who doesn't even have a god, help deduce the technique. Just outrageous. Brahma Sage's True Demonic Kung Fu is a dual-cultivation method for practicing the Dharma and body directly into the Mahayana stage. Except that you can't cultivate a true body. This skill can already be regarded as the ceiling of the spiritual world. Lord Dayan wanted to develop a technique comparable to the true demonic technique of the Brahma Saint. Not talking about Mahayana. At least one must have a cultivation level in the late stage of integration to deduce it. But he all fit together. The protagonist has already attained Mahayana. You can go find the golden seal characters on the inner pages and practice. At that time, no matter whether you are cultivating the Little Beidou Star Yuan Gong. Either the Great Five Elements Soul-Inheriting Art will do. Then there is no need to rely on a Nascent Soul cultivator to deduce the exercises. It can't be done well. 🔨

It's a pretty good novel among fans. The only shortcoming is that the modern diaosi atmosphere is too strong, and it doesn't have the temperament that a cultivator should have. Second-hand goods like Nangong Wan who have been used by Han Li are so licked, let alone hers.

There are not many mortal fan fictions about Nangong that you can read. She is just a patch heroine, and all her hair is taken away from her. Don't mention any bullshit fairy world to me. Whether there is a fairy world or not, I don't like Nangong as the heroine. Other female characters are better than her. Anyone who sees her in a fan novel will not stand it.

I just don't understand. Isn't the Holy Land of Immortal Cultivation in the Jin Dynasty better than Chaos Xinghai? They have all arrived in Jin Dynasty. If they don't practice well, they have to find the teleportation array to the Chaotic Star Sea. Some places specialize in reducing intelligence. They always say that Tiannan has no resources, but they use thousand-year-old elixirs to practice. In the mid-term and late stages of pill formation, you need to go to Jin Dynasty to find resources. If you just exchange some Geng gold, you can get pills. When I arrived in Jin Dynasty, I didn't look for resources to practice and just ran around blindly. During the foundation building period, I didn't have the strength and was still running around, but I was being manipulated. Can't I run after I have the strength?

Robbing bottles, snatching women, killing Han Li, this kind of fandom will not be watched, it is the same as eating and smashing the pot.

Fan fiction most remembers not to mention the basic laws. You are using someone else's worldview. But you took the initiative to destroy this worldview. Then I guess I would like to ask. Are you not good at writing original works? You write fan fiction and you don't respect other people's world views. What kind of fanfic do you write? . . . Hurry up and write something original, fan fiction will restrict you. _(:з∠) Go and prove yourself You have a lot to do.

I didn't dare to enter Nangong, so I deliberately wrote that I would wear it late

He hunted Han Li inexplicably, and when he formed the elixir, he stopped using the Nascent Soul and couldn't beat him, so he was really convinced. Provoking a big enemy for no reason

I can understand what these people say about their unhealthy outlook and selfishness. But it's really disgusting to accept second-hand copies of the original protagonist. This is a novel. Internet articles,

I don't know what the author thinks. Is it because I haven't read novels in the past few years and don't know what readers hate now? In the first two chapters, the protagonist is described as a clown with a Long Aotian mentality. It doesn't matter if you have a selfish personality, but you must know that you are selfish, you will rob and kill, but you don't take it for granted. The protagonist wants to steal other people's Foundation-Building Pills, but at the same time he is still shouting in his heart, "How dare you, a casual cultivator, have a Foundation-Building Pill? This pill should be mine." It's too villainous, and it's still a very low-level villain. It's really clownish to blame everyone after traveling too late, and to think that the world should revolve around you.

No, what are you writing in these two pages? I couldn't stand it anymore. I got into a fight with Han Li for no reason. I couldn't beat him in terms of strength. I kept thinking about going to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars and then I finally got to the Sea of ​​Chaos Stars and then returned to Tiannan without doing anything. In front of Nangong Wan, I started fighting with Han Li, and then Nangong Wan disappeared and left immediately? What are these chapters about? I subscribed for nothing, I'm speechless 🤔

It's really fun. How about adding a setting? The protagonist is a fugitive drug dealer and has an intellectual disability. At least with these settings, the protagonist's behavior can be traced💩💩

No, why did you blame others in the first chapter? You can either kill people and seize treasures, or follow the plot and be a nanny. Are you jealous? It's not like Han Li is sorry for you. What's your state of mind? Just write the disgusting villain in a traditional show-off and slap-in-the-face plot as the protagonist, right? Either be a good person or a bad person, don't be a villain.

After reading the first chapter, I hate this kind of protagonist the most. I was so angry when I couldn't get something from others. I thought the protagonist would commit suicide in anger in the first chapter because he didn't get the chance to get Han Li. The character of the protagonist is just like the villain in the popular short drama now. He is irrational and gets frustrated when he doesn't get what he wants. Anyone who has watched the short drama knows how wise the villain in it is.

There are so many poisonous points, I'm not belittling this book, really, forget it

If I were the master of the Reincarnation Hall, I would have slapped this ant to death a long time ago, and even made terms and threats, bean!

The rhythm is good, the grass jelly doesn't count, the licorice is more than enough

The number of words is too small. It won't die after a while, right?

The protagonist is a demon cultivator who was born on the Yin Island

This book has new ideas, is reasonable, and can control the intensity. The three golden chapters are extremely excellent, surpassing the beginning of the book on Immortal Immortality. The protagonist is decisive in killing, has a firm heart to seek the truth, and has a three-dimensional character. I have already voted for you all the monthly votes for this month after reading Chapter 7. I will definitely follow up and subscribe + vote for all the monthly votes to ensure the quality in the future. Personally, I think this is the best mortal fanfic in the past half a year. I have read the previous book and found it mediocre and did not follow it. This book has improved a lot. At present, it seems that the biggest problem is that the author's writing style is a bit like writing an expository essay, recording certain things. Sometimes it is better to write down the process of some plots.

Hahaha, you are staring at Han Laomo's confidante, right? Where can Thief Cao escape?🙂

I've finished reading it. It's really well written. I've finished reading it. It's really well written. Personally, I think there are currently a total of 3 poisonous points in the twenty-two chapters. 1. The technique obtained from the demon cultivator is not willing to be practiced (you should not write it down if you don't practice it) 2. The name of Han Li is used everywhere. Why bother to use this disguise when there are so many names? Although it is to induce conflict, other methods can be used. For example, the Fu family's special tracking method is good. 3. The old man at the fourth level of Qi training did not kill him, but instead used Han Li's name to show off. Furthermore, part of the author's own writing style is like writing an instruction manual, which leads to the lack of description of some interesting points. It always feels like it is a bit disappointing. It is enjoyable, but not fully enjoyable. Other than that, it is really a masterpiece, with no flaws, no faults. There are about ten books in this issue plus the first issue of Mortal Fans. I have read seven books so far. This is the most exciting of the seven books I have read. Without exception, none of the others can be followed. Compared with this one, there is a huge difference. The plot also has a sense of ups and downs. A main plot of building a foundation during the Qi training period leads to a plot of more than 20 chapters. So far, it is still a plot led by building a baseline. It is conceivable that the quality will not decline until this main line is completely completed, and the follow-up will not be clear.

The beginning, development, and plot are all good to watch, but the setting of the powerful little pony pulling the cart behind it ruins the plot.

Aren't you going to code this hard? Let brothers have a good time

You should not come into contact with Han Li, the Taoist Patriarch of Reincarnation, too early. The most important thing when writing about mortals is not to be exposed to the Taoist Patriarch too early. Another thing is that you must be one big realm or at least two small realms ahead of Han Li in terms of cultivation. This is very important. Looking at the whole text, it is basically wherever Han Li goes. Treasures of opportunity, the human world has limited resources in the Nascent Soul stage and the Divine Transformation stage. One step ahead and one step ahead can lead step by step. Only in this way can one always stay ahead of Han Li. Being ahead of Han Li means that one can get more advanced resources from the original work, not to mention the spiritual world. If one is not careful in a place like Guanghan World, one can easily be overtaken by Han Li's initiation.