Hegemon of the Late Tang

The author really thought that ancient times were as good as modern times. Female family members of prisoners actually dared to visit, and their innocence was lost after being imprisoned. Before the Qing Dynasty, women who committed crimes did not need to go to prison except for capital crimes. They were executed directly at home or in the clan, just to protect women. You also want to write that your beautiful sister-in-law is in jail, but the government officials won't do anything about it. What's more, it was still the chaotic times of the late Tang Dynasty and the Five Dynasties, and there was no morality. Please revise the first three chapters! ! ! !

You must know that the end of the Tang Dynasty to the Five Dynasties is not the end of the Han Dynasty to the Three Kingdoms! Family status is of no use here, what is important is the reputation of martial arts In the late Tang Dynasty, even if you were a low-level soldier, or even a butcher or a bandit, as long as you could win over the soldiers and make money, it would not be a problem to occupy a state and serve as governor or military envoy. Even if you went to Emperor Li Tang, he would recognize him by pinching his nose! So, if you choose one, Zhu Jin, who expelled her father-in-law from the throne on the day of her wedding, as a character with the same name, will not only not attract some readers, but will actually dissuade them! The commanders of the late Tang Dynasty, or all warriors, were more or less mentally ill. Therefore, creating a low-level soldier as a time travel target was more suitable than any commander or general of the late Tang Dynasty. Also, the warriors of the late Tang Dynasty - abandoned their wives and children, sold their lives for money, had big scars on their heads, etc. The characteristics of the warriors from the late Tang Dynasty to the Five Dynasties were that they didn't care about anything. Your start is really unpleasant and does not fit well with the society of the late Tang Dynasty. This start is a bit like traveling to the late Han Dynasty and telling the Yuan, Yang, Xun and other big families that everyone is equal! 😏

The introduction is very good, but the writing and plot are very poor. There is no trace of the domineering and heroic spirit of a warrior that belongs to that era.

The beginning was good, but I got beheaded twice in the end. What kind of intelligence level did I have? Forget it.

This kind of reputation, this kind of pig's trotters in this introduction, is at best the end of Qin Zongquan. The whole world will fight against it, and only those who are worse than pigs and dogs will seek refuge.

You can compete with Chen Kaige

The background is written about the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. It was the era of martial arts. It was a visit to prison and a five-year appointment. People had already rushed it away.

According to the way you write it, I can't pass chapter 200.

This writing style also dares to write about unpopular subjects such as the Five Dynasties.

Crazy, you want to dominate the world with such a reputation. Do you think they are all NPCs?