The Ten Kingdoms: A World of Beauty and Strife

For the fifth generation, I swallowed my anger for many chapters. Now I can't bear it anymore. Damn, what kind of emotional drama are you writing? If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. I'm not here to see the male protagonist as a bitch. Now we need soldiers without soldiers, people without connections, just personal bravery. There is no rules for how to develop. What's more, we have to write a lot of inexplicable emotional dramas. There is an emperor as the father-in-law. If you don't take advantage of it quickly, you still despise the princess? What do you mean by maturity? I haven't even decided on my own position, so I just pretend to be mature on the outside. In terms of behavior, language and life, I really don't see how stable it is. The writing is quite contradictory. The finished Luo Youdu and Zhu Xiu are not good at martial arts, but mentally they are really far behind the male protagonist.

Why would Liu Zhiyuan refuse such a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to adopt the protagonist as his adopted son? The national destiny of the Later Han Dynasty lasted for three and a half years. After three and a half years, the protagonist's power has also grown. In addition, the protagonist is a god in military skills, his adopted son has the right to inherit, and Liu Zhiyuan only has one son. He can definitely seek the throne. You can use the hind legs of Guo Wei and Chai Rong to seize the throne like Zhao Kuangyin, but that is more than ten years later. He is recognized as an adoptive father, and he will be able to wear the yellow robe in a few years.

Also, let's change the introduction. Hua Jianxian was killed in 947. Hua Jianxian was already 45 years old at that time. The male protagonist still wants to have sex with her. Her taste is really too strong.

He also said that the protagonist's character is too "upright" and not treacherous enough. Cao Cao only has three successes, and he should only have the attribute of getting married women.

The writing is terrible, disgustingly bad, the author has poor historical skills, the emotional description is disgusting, the plot progress is rubbish, too much poison was added after the founding of the country, leaving a lot of thunder.

Shennong tested poison Five chapters and died from poison Plot Long Aotian At the beginning, a small soldier went to the warlord leader for a nonsensical analysis and then was promoted The heroine's classic hero saves the beauty by smashing things on his head After that, he used national justice to persuade Fu Gao. If these two soldiers have such integrity and history, they will not surrender to the Liao Dynasty.

It sucks. Even if he pleads for the former prince, he still has the former prince under his control.

I can't stand it. Maybe I've read too many professional-level writings like this. I think there is a complete difference between having an A and not having an A.

I hope the protagonist can change his country name and not use Ming. Because I think China started to lag behind the West from the Ming Dynasty. Although the Qing Dynasty was completely left behind by the West, this trend started from the Ming Dynasty. Compared with the Han and Tang Dynasties, the Ming Dynasty was more conservative, emphasized culture over military affairs, and had rigid ideas. It only had 18 provinces in the Han region. It was at the bottom of the unified dynasties. It was stronger than the Song and Jin Dynasties, and much worse than the Han and Tang Dynasties. Even the Qing Dynasty instantly defeated the Ming Dynasty in terms of territory. After the demise of the Ming Dynasty, hundreds of millions of people were conquered by the Manchus with only a few hundred thousand people. You must know that firearms were already used on a large scale at that time. The West relied on firearms to defeat the barbarians, but the Ming Dynasty did the opposite. It is conceivable that after more than two hundred years of rule by the Ming Dynasty, the Chinese people have become weak and weak, without any courage. You must know that the population at the end of the Ming Dynasty was over 100 million. After the fall of the Han and Tang Dynasties, there were only 20 to 30 million people. If they were divided into several forces, they could hoist the surrounding barbarians and hammer them. That would be true martial virtue. Compared with the Ming Dynasty, it is too rubbish. It is even more shameful than the late Qing Dynasty. The Qing Dynasty at least changed the times. Agricultural civilization encountered industrial civilization and was hit by dimensionality reduction. It is outrageous that hundreds of millions of people in the Ming Dynasty were conquered by barbarians with a population of hundreds of thousands. There is no such weak dynasty in the history of the world. I personally hate the Ming Dynasty. I hope that the country name Ming will not be used. The protagonist directly renames the Ming army and the Ming army rushes to lick the Ming Dynasty. I think it is not necessary. We can definitely give a new country name to make it as great as the Han and Tang Dynasties.

The Khitan of Dacao Valley turned out to be an elite with armor. He arrived just in time for the start of the talisman. He was "extremely powerful after being struck by lightning."