Late Tang: A Guide to Winning Over Your Father-in-Law

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Judging from my more than ten years of experience in historical writing, it is a medium-to-high-quality book. Unfortunately, it lacks some emotional hooks. Reading it is a bit like watching the Red Army and Shen Zhezi. The description of the historical environment is not as good as those of these people and July. Of course, I am not the author and should not judge others by myself. The fallacy is only for reference. It comes from fate. I hope the author will write better and better. Come on.

The author's writing is good and the story is attractive, but the ancients called themselves names and called people by words. Calling one's own words is either an act of arrogance and boasting, or it is a matter of words. The protagonist's words clearly do not fit into either of these two situations. It is suggested that the author can let him call himself by his own name, or use other words, such as I, me, Yu, Yu, servant, under, etc. It always feels a bit regretful when writing historical articles without paying attention to these details.

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No wonder he wants to be someone else's son-in-law and find another way. When he succeeds, the day lily will be cold, but Qian Miao will live to be eighty years old😂

The protagonist seems to have no chance of winning here in Tianyan. In the original history, he rebelled in 903. If the rebellion in 904 can be delayed for a year, the rebellion in 904 can only last for one year.

Co-author: When you were reading a novel last night and looking for inspiration, you found the inspiration of a married woman bringing up a baby, right? It's so obvious that you were trying to stop a married woman by praising her.

Is this an excuse for the author to repost it several times, pretending to be a big chapter? ? ? Several times, the author has a hard time coding, but the readers' points are also money.

Seriously, I've been posting half of it and repeating half of it every day for the past few days, so I've quit! ! ! You don't have time to write so you just play around with it, right? Your book has been taken off the shelves.

This book is good to read at first, but it doesn't work well in the later part when the protagonist starts to lead troops. When he is guarding a side for the first time, all he needs to do is to allocate fields and land directly to the officials who have been recruited... And tell me that you can help me divide the land of the rich clans. The low-level officials also praise the protagonist as a benevolent government... The Taimeng part is even more outrageous. The cavalry on the opposite side returns with their carbines and charges at your decoy infantry. The male protagonist's 700 to 800 people can ambush the cavalry on the opposite side and block the road to attack from both front and rear. That's right. When the five hundred cavalry from the opposite side came over, there was only one road here.

The writing is pretty good, but I feel like the protagonist is a puppet of the author I can't see the protagonist's emotions or anything like that. Seems like a calm NPC who only makes judgments based on profit.

Damn, this book is really well written, but the number of words is too few. I'll go read the author's previous books first.

I always feel that there is a whiff of AI in my writing.

Vote for monthly recommendation. I really like this novel. My hometown is Xuancheng and now I work in Zhenjiang. It's really interesting to see the place names in the book.

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If you do this every now and then, why not just cut it off?

The author has strong writing skills and clever ideas (he started in Huainan in the late Tang Dynasty), but it is a pity that the title of the book is not good

I like this book very much. I hope the author can portray this character well. I am very satisfied with it in all aspects. It is just a little less exciting. The Five Dynasties War lacks the legendary nature. It is also a troubled time. Compared with the Battle of Feishui, the Battle of Baixiang is a bit unsatisfactory. To save a building from falling, to hold up a raging tide before it falls is the greatest romance for a man. Compared to burning the boat and sinking the boat, there is too little that can be written about the Battle of Pengcheng. It is Xiang Yu Niu, Xiang Yu is awesome. In comparison, I prefer Han Xin, that kind of strategist In, the decisive victory thousands of miles away, although many of the Romance of the Three Kingdoms are fabricated, it is really well written and satisfies all men's fantasies about war. In turn, it makes people feel that it is boring to fight in a stronghold and fight in vain, and they prefer to secretly hide in Chencang. Crossing the Chishui River, burning the Red Cliff, and flooding the ruined hills. Today's novels often focus on night raids to destroy enemy camps without any depth. What I want is to burn the company's camp with fire, or to harass with drums. This kind of small gain can lead to great achievements. This is the trick of a soldier. Come on, author.

There should be less romance. It can be an adjustment but don't write too much.

The protagonist's father is so alive that he has to wait until he is in his forties before he can ascend the throne.

If there is a need for a supporting role, you can leave your name and mark it as supporting role/cannon fodder/villain. If it is not excessive, try to use it. 🙂🙂🙂

How many times? Send half and keep half, on purpose? If this happens again, I won't watch anymore

No wonder there are few comments, it's really not good in the future

The sea is all water ~ Author, please work hard

It's really well written. I'll keep following it. Good luck to the author.

Either design a character card, or point out in the introduction that the protagonist is Qian Yuanguan. I didn't read it before, but I accidentally clicked it on it today.

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Give me 10,000 words per day😡😡😡