Overlord Origin

They're even writing about the Yuan Dynasty; they really think they're Mongolians.

Isn't the protagonist being too cautious? The Qiyan tribe is just a grassland tribe, and Temujin is just one of the grassland warlords. The protagonist has invented so many things, which is already considered a cheat code. Anyone else could be given important positions, but the protagonist is left idle.

The author probably thinks he's very insightful, but in reality, he comes across as incredibly immature. Every contribution he makes is met with criticism from this person or that person—it's ridiculous. These Genghis Khans and Muqali characters are like idiots. The thing is, you transmigrated before Temujin's rise to power! You've already played so many roles, yet you're still doing these kinds of things—isn't that laughable?

Can you please stop naming a woman "team"? This isn't a K-pop/Korean entertainment section; people in the history section won't tolerate your nonsense. If you're into K-pop, then go ahead and write about the Yuan Dynasty. Go find Song Ji-hyo in Goryeo and film "A Frozen Flower," and include her two gay husbands too. 😜

Those who held royal titles referred to themselves as "" or "" during the Song, Yuan, and Ming dynasties. Before the Qing dynasty, they rarely referred to themselves as "" (this king), but starting from the Kangxi era of the Qing dynasty, they commonly referred to themselves as "". Those addressed as kings by their subordinates; Song: Your Majesty / A certain king.

The original naming was really poor, which affected the reader's immersion and sense of history, but the rest of the plot was pretty good.

Based on your writing style in the book, the later parts probably can't be a simple rebellion. There should be some kind of conference, similar to the British Commonwealth, to unify the various states and tribes; otherwise, the rule won't be effective. Unless you write that after Temujin's death he became an unconventional Kublai Khan, but that might be a bit boring, turning into a historical repetition.

With the advent of firearms, they became the main weapon used to kill enemies in the future. The more firearms there are, the fewer spearmen and swordsmen will be needed to protect them. This means that cavalry will inevitably flourish for a long period of time. And it will certainly be the traditional kind of charging cavalry.

I've been watching Reboot for several years now 🙂, but watching it now feels a bit jarring, like the historical fiction is about to break down. It's like actors switching roles.

It realistically portrays the inner journey of a time traveler and the thoughts of ordinary people, while depicting ancient emperors as flesh-and-blood individuals with complex strategies and cunning, unlike those mindless, lighthearted stories where time-traveling emperors are portrayed as easily startled, like petty thugs, their emotions easily displayed over trivial matters, making the story utterly ridiculous.