A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Cultivating Through Proficiency

Your premise is that Han Li is inherently cold and indifferent, yet also calculating and scheming. You mentioned sharing your cultivation experience twice, then suddenly stopping, leading Han Li to believe you were deliberately holding back and that you were being overly calculating.

After reading a dozen or so chapters, I feel that the protagonist (and author) is incredibly stupid. With such an amazing cheat code, he doesn't cultivate martial arts, but only practices a cultivation technique that has absolutely no offensive power.

Why do they write about mortals lacking resources and such? Why not just go to the place where spiritual energy erupts, then cultivate near the seal underwater? You can find top-grade spirit stones there; it's like having a top-tier spiritual vein! Then just bury yourself in hard work until you finish your order, and what can't you achieve?

Once we reach the Chaotic Star Sea and take Ling Yuling as the Star Palace Master, the human realm will have no shortage of resources. 🪖

You yourself said that everyone has to look out for themselves, so just kill Han Li and the little bottle directly. Killing him now would be as easy as turning your hand.

If you go into a dungeon, at least get something out of it. You've spent so much time collecting so many useless cards and haven't gotten anything. Why write about this dungeon to annoy people?

Why do you keep focusing on Han Li when you've made the main character so awesome? Why can't you just go somewhere else and explore the map on your own? If I had that kind of cheat, I'd be grinding away instead of constantly looking down on others for being childish!

You've already written three books, how come they're still in this state? So much personal stuff, so boring, it's like a monotonous diary! If you're going to write a protagonist who's high and mighty, just write it directly; if you're going to write one who rises from humble beginnings, just develop them properly! The writing is a hodgepodge, and the protagonist's dark and disgusting personality is just like the one in Douluo Continent!

This dungeon was terribly written. I didn't get any benefits. I was suppressed at every turn. Even the Old Demon wasn't this frustrated in the Void Palace.

This is the first book to feature a three-way battle between Nangong Wan, the protagonist, and Han Li.