A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Cultivating Through Proficiency

Your starting point is that Han Li has a cold nature and is indifferent to emotions, and then Han Li is serious-minded. You said that you shared your cultivation experience twice, and then suddenly stopped talking. Han Li felt that you were deliberately hiding your secrets, saying that he was too thoughtful. He also said that Han Li in the original novel was not too sad about Zhang Tie's matter, but was emotionally indifferent. To be honest, you are carrying a lot of private goods. This kind of beginning really persuades you to quit. My impression of Han Li was that he was a foolish boy with no eyesight in the early stage. In the middle and later stages, although he became more thoughtful and acted mainly to protect himself, he was not cold-natured and thoughtful. Compared with most immortal cultivators, his moral level is still above the horizontal line. Han Li didn't take the initiative to backstab his companions for profit. At most, he took a few steps back to observe that something was wrong. The best thing to do was to run away first. When writing fan fiction, don't include too much personal stuff.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the protagonist (the author) is really stupid. He is such an awesome plug-in, but instead of practicing martial arts, he only practices the Immortal Cultivation Technique without any offensive power. This Immortal Cultivation Technique does not practice spells and magic weapons. It is so useless that he is not as good as a mortal who only practices martial arts. Has the author forgotten that Mo Juren is just a mortal who knows martial arts? As for Mo Juren's martial arts, the protagonist stayed in Qixuanmen for five or six years. During these five or six years, he could easily kill Mo Juren by using plug-ins to practice martial arts, right? As a result, the protagonist has reached the fourth level of Qi Refining, and is still being manipulated by Mo Juren, so he can only make plans on his own. There is nothing that can be done against Mo Juren, and he is always afraid of being killed by Mo Juren. Don't tell me that there is a soul of an immortal cultivator in Mo Juren's mind. This soul is useless and cannot run out to kill people. So whether the protagonist of a novel has an online IQ depends on the author's IQ.

Why do they write that mortals are short of resources, etc. Then why not just go to the back where the spiritual energy breaks out, and then go to practice under the sea near the seal. There are several top-quality spiritual stones everywhere, and aren't they the same as top-level spiritual veins? Then work hard until the statement comes out. Is there anything else that can't be accomplished?

When Luan Xinghai takes Ling Yuling as the Lord of the Star Palace, the human world will basically have no shortage of resources 🪖

You said it yourself, if you don't care for yourself, you will be punished by heaven and earth. Just kill Han Li and kill him with a gun. Now it's easy to kill him.

If you download the dungeon, you will gain something. After doing so much bullshit for a long time and getting nothing, why are you writing this dungeon so disgustingly?

You wrote the protagonist so awesomely, why do you always stick to Han Li to write it? Why don't you just go further and open the map yourself? How can I be so careless and despise others for being childish every day?

You've already written three books, why do you still write like this? There are so many private articles and they're boring, just like a running account! The character design of the protagonist also needs to be described as high and mighty, so just write it directly; if he wants to be a lowly person, he should develop it honestly! The four characters written are not as disgusting as the Douluo protagonist who has a dark heart!

This copy is terribly written. No benefit was gained. Suppressed everywhere. The old devil was not so aggrieved even in Xutian Palace.

This is the first book about the protagonist Nangong Wanhe playing a three-player battle with Han Li