I Transmigrated into A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality with Ten Times the Lifespan, and Now I'm Grinding Proficiency to the Bitter End

Sigh. This disease would really kill you in the cultivation world. No background, no connections, plus you're courting death. It would be an injustice if you didn't die. I don't want to read anything that makes me stupid.

How do people with obsessive-compulsive disorder, germaphobia, and paranoia survive when these three conditions are extremely severe? Obsessive-compulsive disorder: In mild cases, it's just uncomfortable to look at things. In severe cases, it's about not being able to control oneself, being very strict about one's own affairs, and often having thoughts about others.

Is obsessive-compulsive disorder (OCD) a mental illness? After reading the description in the book, it seems like it is! I'll stay as far away from people with OCD as possible from now on!

If it's a mental illness, then it's a mental illness; why write it as obsessive-compulsive disorder? I've looked at six pages, and the more I look, the more speechless I become. Does this mean that if you can't cultivate a technique to the level of a Dao Ancestor, you just give up?

The synopsis is toxic! The protagonist's character is unlikable! Describing cultivation as a magic-based profession is truly disgusting! I'm a typical Eastern chauvinist, looking down on Western things. Mages, wizards, cyberpunk—they're all trash to me!

Your pacing is even slower than the original story. You've written so many chapters about the Seven Mysteries Sect's martial arts training, and it's all so bland and uninformative. How can anyone keep reading? I'm also writing a novel, and I'm planning to write a fanfiction of "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" for my next novel. I'm here to see how many people will actually read this. I certainly can't stand it.

Ten times the lifespan, and you're writing about starting the story alongside Han Li? Are you implying that Han Li will ascend to the Nascent Soul stage while you're still stuck in the Golden Core stage?

Extremely poisonous; the protagonist has extreme obsessive-compulsive disorder, and everyone has to indulge him. Shennong is dead. 💀

The protagonist's behavior in the Void Heaven Palace is so illogical! They just awkwardly inserted him into the plot to guide the narrative, as if he's some kind of busybody. Being forced to retrieve the Void Heaven Cauldron is understandable, but letting Han Li escape and then taking over the position himself is ridiculous. Did the fortune teller say he'd live a thousand years, so he'll jump into any trap?

The author's book has a great premise, but the protagonist's obsessive-compulsive tendencies are misdirected. In the mortal realm, the furthest and strongest path to cultivation is immortality; one should simply strive in that direction. The protagonist's insistence on mastering one martial art to its highest level before moving on to the next is acceptable, but only if he has a powerful backer…