A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Creating Body Cultivation from Scratch
凡人：从自创体修开始
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- Completed
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- 1.2M Words
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- Xianxia
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- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
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Body cultivation? You can refer to the ancient three clans in "Xian Ni" for this. The setting of the ancient three clans of Er Gen is really good.
I quite like the current style; the self-created techniques are self-consistent and not the kind that seem like mere guesswork. I hope it can be maintained.
I think chips are really not as useful as the brains of later-stage cultivators.
Seeing modern technology is hilarious. A cultivator's thoughts can number in the billions in an instant. Can your technology keep up with a cultivator's spiritual sense? It's laughable.
Why do they have to make a perfectly good cultivation novel with characters who have no spiritual roots and instead focus on physical cultivation? Can't they use AI to analyze the writing style of cultivation novels? I couldn't stand the part about Huang Feng Valley anymore. They kept talking about his so-called physical cultivation, without explaining whether he had any spiritual roots or not.
To put it bluntly, the author wrote the protagonist's path of body cultivation solely to make him a body cultivator. Furthermore, the body cultivators among mortals aren't like the author, who's a subpar product who can't even touch the basics of martial arts.
What did you write after you got to the Chaotic Star Sea?! I skipped through the whole thing, and all you wrote about was your body training technique. It made me dizzy.
There were body cultivators among mortals, weren't there?
The first few dozen chapters were essentially filler. Mortals already possessed body cultivation techniques, though they were resource-intensive and difficult to master. Why create something entirely new? You might argue that since you couldn't obtain cultivation methods early on, martial arts cultivation follows the body cultivation path, so why deny it?
I read the beginning carefully, but skipped around later on! This book feels like a relentless grind! (I don't know what other readers are looking for in Xianxia novels! I'm drawn to the mystique of the Daoist arts, the vibrant world, the exciting story, and, importantly, the rigorous logic of the setting!)