Starting from the Deadlock, the Ultimate Derivation

I was not satisfied with the previous book of the same type. I hope this one will be richer in content. Come on 👍👍

The writing is very good, but when I think about how many derivation points the protagonist has spent, the achievement does not seem to be particularly high. It feels like the derivation points have been eaten 😅

The protagonist is really rubbish, Zhu Dachang just tolerated it when he was provoked again and again.

The setting is old-fashioned, a weak chicken with golden fingers...

Looking at the introduction, the author is seeking death in the mortal world.

Why is it that the protagonist of your book offends people all over the world? It seems that the protagonist is born to be disgusted. This type of book is the most annoying.

You know that you will get a lot of money for killing people, but you don't want to take revenge on your enemies, so you go to the mountains to kill animals?

If you beat the small ones, then when the old ones come, you will definitely not be able to beat them, and then they will run away to develop. It was okay once, but it will be like this every time. It's hard to resist.

Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying online literature and immortality system routines are incorporated into folk customs to poison people to death. And when you have the strength, you don't take revenge and let your enemies jump on their faces. This is even more poisonous. These are not popular now. If you write like this, it will be more likely to hit the street 😅

What Master Ikkyu wrote is a bit too much. Based on the plot, Monk Ikkyu is not the kind of selfish person. Because of chanting sutras in the morning, small things like affecting others will not become a demon. At most, Master Yikyu sincerely apologizes to everyone. Later, when Master Ikkyu released the zombie prince, it was also very blunt, unreasonable, and too abrupt.

As for that, you can write half a chapter on a background, which is pretty cool. If it doesn't work, just open the next book. Let's read a cool article and read the plot introduction for a long time. It's a bit disgusting.

I have watched about 50 pictures. It is very exciting, but there is a small flaw. The story is not strong, or in metaphysical terms, the protagonist is lost in the pursuit of power and has no life.

This book is decisive and decisive, but it cannot stand up to the backward version. The new one has a retro feel!

This book is still readable in the early stages, but it gets worse and worse as it gets written later!

Just leave your life and death to others if you believe they are right. Don't say you are a modern person. Modern people don't recognize the protagonist's evil deeds.

I hate novels that consume lifespan the most, because they are addictive, and after one use, you will continue to consume your lifespan. It feels like a business without capital, because the protagonist will not die no matter how much he consumes, and his life is always hanging on him. It is disgusting. It feels speechless to consume your lifespan when you can obviously do it in the deduction.

At the beginning, I was confused by the three words "original net worth, original net worth" 😅. I still like to read the way a certain author writes. Damn it, the fields were robbed, my parents died tragically, old lady, just wait for me! But the memory of the picture in his mind made him shiver. I have to think about it in the long term. After all, I'm just a time traveler, so I'd better stay out of my own business. . .

The title of this chapter is too dramatic, what? Lin Jiu was furious, Song Yihang took action. He was amused and didn't want to read the abandoned book.

Why does the protagonist waste his life when he can continue reasoning? I don't understand it at all. Do you think that if you have too much longevity, you have to consume it? It directly consumes your own life source.

Your plot is too watery. One thing is said over and over again. Your other novels are not like this.

The author feels like he is letting himself go as he writes.

I have read two books by the author, "Cultivation of Immortality in Movies" and "Wizard's Fairy Tales". They are all quite to my liking, and this novel has caught up, and it is also to my liking. However, there are too few interactions with people, and the supporting characters cannot be established. It feels not as good as the previous two books. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The system skill table, can you please stop showing it every time? The word "water" can't be so watery!

Chapter 130 is missing a section of content. You didn't write about how to build a martial arts gym?

Finished spreading flowers! ! ! ! The plot of the novel is very good, and it expands the Jiu Shu movie into a world view, which is amazing. The plot that changed after the protagonist cheated was very good, but it was a pity that the protagonist's appearance and the subsequent development of the plot were not written too much. The protagonist's failure should have a buffering time, and then let the friends watch him show off and let the enemy watch his heart attack... I hope the author's next novel will be more beautiful and exciting! ! !

Why is the latest one missing?

Newcomers and new books seeking attention, Darkness of All Heavens, early stage of Naruto, "The World of Naruto in the Eyes of the Dark Supreme"

Please recommend new books to newcomers. It's almost the critical period of 100,000 words. Zhutianliu, early stage Naruto, "The World of Naruto in the Eyes of the Dark Supreme"

How expressive is Huang Sheng, the protagonist of the ghost film world, in this novel?

Have you finished writing ✍🏻?