I Really Don't Want to Duel

I was confused after reading this book. The background of the world is incomplete, and there is no political system or economic system. The protagonist's body remains with the consciousness of the original owner after time travel, and he causes trouble from time to time, making the protagonist suffer from chuunibyou. It's so disgusting. The protagonist is also very patriotic and harms his own interests. , It's not that I don't want you to be patriotic, but you are too abrupt. Originally, in order to destroy the plot, you obtained the force and sabotaged the anti-drug gang's operation. Later, you forcibly attacked the Golden Triangle with zombies, which caused a backlash from heaven. What do you mean, did the author not write an outline? All kinds of surprises

At the beginning, I despised the original author for being a middle-class novel, but the entire novel, the entire plot, including the characters in it, are also extremely bad. Rigid, routine, patchwork, haha, this is not a world, nor is it time travel from copy to copy, this is just a bunch of little kids playing house, do you dare to call it a novel?

Support the author. Although card themes have been around for a long time, most of them are Western fantasy decks. The Eastern decks are quite new. As long as the movie world is chosen well and the deck system is determined, for example, the plot underworld deck, the zombie Taoist priest's scattered cards in the protagonist's hand can also be perfected. The settings are not inconsistent. It is worth looking forward to! ! !

I really like the author's novels, but I don't know if it's a foreshadowing or a bug. The protagonist selling the first world guide can be a legacy left by his parents, and now I'm writing about selling the second one. If I go to the movie world to guide one, sell one, but sell it as a family, I will be suspicious. Since there are so many guides, the protagonist's parents are dead. There is no malice, because I hope to see this book get better and better, so I say a few more words.

This book and The Wizard are both very creative books, but the background environment is not set well, which makes the two books look strange, as if the seeds are good but no suitable soil has been found for planting. The problem with the settings is that the author directly borrowed the environment settings that are popular in online articles. There is nothing wrong with borrowing from them. If the settings that are borrowed have many loopholes, there will be problems.                                                                                                                                                                                                                             our witch's fairy tale being all based on the system flow and the settings of the black and white witches, but this type of setting itself has been criticized. Regardless of China or the West, the earliest people who were willing to spread knowledge and inherit culture were the sages, all for selfless purposes. A group of selfish wizards with low morals are just looking for subordinates. They have various systems. How can they adopt a system like an academy? Will there be a group relationship such as friendship, family, and affection between apprentices? The teacher tricked most of the apprentices to death, and the remaining apprentices grew up to be wizards. Then some of them staged revenge. Are those wizards with low moral standards worthy of their reputation? Moreover, these wizards don't trust each other, so why should they form an academy? A group of people who don't trust each other can't even save their lives together, so why are they still doing research? Therefore, readers with this world background feel awkward when reading it. ​ ​​​​This duel combines infinite flow and cards. It is also a good idea, but the background environment is not clearly described at the beginning, and many conflicts are displayed very abruptly. What kind of political system is used to manage the island where the protagonist is located, whether the rule of law is strict, what level of science and technology is, and the past history are not clearly explained enough at the beginning. There are twenty-seven towns in total. How can the Li family be a powerful person in Longbian Town instead of just an ordinary rich person? Force? Are there no police and laws here? Control the economy of a certain industry? If the protagonist does not work in a related industry, he will be restricted. It is really influential. The protagonist has graduated. You can just change the town, set up a house and work until the college entrance examination. After all, your Li family is just a powerful person in this town. It is better to be in charge of the county magistrate after leaving the town.         ，​，，，，（，） Similarly, as they travel through more worlds, they will find that most of the worlds they travel through are stories about a planet called Earth, etc. . . Only with the past and present, culture and institutions can we build a complete social background. You can learn from Squid on this point. "Lord of Mysteries" borrows from Cthulhu and the running group. Someone has written about this in the past, but it can't be separated from the game-like setting and background, so they all jumped on it. Only Squid has completely constructed a world view - the country where the protagonist lives is an obvious constitutional monarchy. In the past, it was a monarchy, but in many remote areas it was even more backward and chaotic. The cultural atmosphere of the society written by the author can also be displayed with the help of various dialogues and descriptions. Since the current Duel book lacks these, many of the choices made by the characters in the book are not that sufficient. Why are the Li family so arrogant, and why are those classmates so ingratiating themselves with the Li family. If there is a child from a wealthy family in your school, will the classmates in the class join in trying to please him? No way! If your family has a lot of money, can you share it? Etc. These behaviors are not enough without a social environment to support them. It feels like the author still has a lot to fill in.

The book starts in middle school, with an inexplicable threat, childhood sweethearts, time travel and the consciousness of the past. Personally, I don't like sneaking away.

It's pretty cool to persuade him to quit in just three chapters! (￣ｏ￣)

Could you please stop being so blunt at the beginning? Forget about the awkward hierarchy. The opening scene is a standard school villain. The standard villain is hostile because of being a woman. This kind of brainless villain slipped away.

In fact, the first part is quite good, although it is also a cliched little villain who adds a dog-leg to attract hatred, and beats the young to get old... But the later part of the story about killing drug lords for the sake of the country is meaningless. Yes, this is a matter of upright views, but you are now in the plot world, and the most important thing is to get as many points as possible to upgrade yourself, for justice and so on... And you come from time and space, so you shouldn't have this concept. Just like when you play games, you won't blindly pay for NPCs regardless of your own gains and losses? A little suggestion, I hope the author will write better and better.

I think the author should go back and write about Uncle Nine. I don't know if the heat is over. But I am still interested in going to Uncle Jiu's comment section and scolding him a few times. None of them came back to repay Uncle Jiu after becoming immortals and proclaiming themselves ancestors. Now that we have sacrificed rationality and become brainless, it is not satisfying enough. No one in the niche audience will read it, and the public will feel uncomfortable if the writing is not good enough. If it is neither good nor bad, it is better to write about Jiu Shu.

Update this book as fast as I can, I won't even read the wizard.

The protagonist shows off every day. It's so uncomfortable to watch,

Isn't this just an infinite stream dressed up as a duel? (=_=). The duel rules are simply untenable. It's a fool's errand to draw as many cards as you want in one round. Both sides don't have LP or anything, so why call them duelists? Wouldn't it be better to just call the summoner?

Author, do you still remember what you wrote before? Your world setting, this main world, is a floating island! ! ! One! One! One! And he specifically described multiple cities and towns on one island. Now countless floating islands have popped up. . . .

You've got it all. It's still a 2,000-word chapter, which is meaningless. Not many people would pursue it at all. Naturally, there are no recommendations later. Then there are the eunuchs.

Author, you wrote about the subconscious persuasion! Anyway, I quit

It looks so awkward. That Witcher was okay. Although it had some minor flaws in the early stages, I could still read it. I don't know why but this one felt awkward.

After traveling through time, you get a body that you cannot fully control?

I feel a little bit addicted after reading the latest chapter. . These are the poisonous points. If you sell the first different world guide once, you can still say you are lucky. If you go to another world twice in total and sell the guide twice, will the real big guys not care about you? From this point of view, it seems that pig's feet and brainless villains are brainless. People in this world are like elementary school students. Then the second point is what everyone calls forced patriotism. However, this poisonous point is still acceptable. After all, the Chinese are afraid, so 404 is fine. Then the third point is that the entry point of the villain is not good. Forcibly cutting in makes the reader uncomfortable. The fourth point is the issue of plot connection. This issue can be said to be blocky in plot from beginning to present. It means that you can pick up a chapter at random and read the previous chapters without reading the previous chapter, which will not affect your reading. Each chapter can be seen as an opening chapter. It feels like a lot of beginnings are forcibly put together. I hope the author can consider the ideas and connections. After all, the subject matter is really great

Can it be updated normally? Both books are being dragged on half-deadly, what does the author want to do?

I finished reading the free version before and found out that the author was a eunuch, so I stopped subscribing. I saw it was updated again a few days ago and subscribed directly to the latest chapter, but the author got into trouble again. As a reader, I can only say that my mentality is broken.

Words to the author 1; The world can be divided into levels. After all, there must be a difference in the power of the recovery source. The recovery and expenditure alone can reach hundreds of billions, and those who care about a few points of source power are on the same level. 2; The relationship between the world and the protagonist's race is not necessarily an antagonistic relationship, but can also be a promoting relationship. For example, it can bring material rules that are not found in different worlds, which can further develop the world. For example, the conflict between the determined development of the world's destiny and the variables of the duelists who come from time to time gives the world the possibility of evolution. For a world with hundreds of billions of expenses to restore, it is very cost-effective to spend tens of thousands to get further.

It's okay. I don't want to duel. I'm invulnerable.

Don't look forward to it anymore, the book is finished, spread the flowers

There are no systematic duel cards, it's a mess

The rest of this novel is okay, but the most frustrating thing for me so far is that something as awesome as Yuanli is used to embody ordinary technological weapons. Speechless. . . . I feel that pig's feet dominate the world and all humans are mentally retarded.

I hope the author will stop being tj Except for the unpleasant plot of the Li family in the early stage of this book I think the background setting is cool It's like different decks of cards in Yu-Gi-Oh! And what's more interesting than simply playing cards like the Yu-Gi-Oh animation is the process of getting the cards, of course playing cards is also very important Come on, author

The protagonist is meddling too much and has finished the sixty-eight chapters of the duel. The protagonist should not meddle in that matter. This is better

Come back and write again😭