People Are in Liaozhai, and the System Is in Journey to the West

Shennong is here and sees fifty-one chapters. So far, it's pretty good. The rhythm and combat power are all under the author's control. There are no signs of collapse, and it is not considered a drag. The character and plot descriptions are also of a good standard. Although it is not a top-quality grass jelly, it is still okay to add to your favorites. For me, it counts as food and grass + distance from grass jelly depends on what happens next.

Hand rub monkey? You can't even tell it's a monkey without the hair. If you want to carve the hair, will you carve the hair?

Ok, Shennong is coming I have read more than 130 chapters, and there are still 10 or 20 chapters left. Let me tell you what I think of this book. The first point is that the main structure is very bland, and there are conflicts but it does not create any excitement. It makes people feel aggrieved, but it does not feel exciting, and the writing style is also okay. The second point is that the author wrote the plot of the first dozen chapters very compactly. It feels like the protagonist is very busy. He is busy with the other half before he is finished here, and then he is still thinking about what to do next. Then the third point is that I have read more than 130 chapters. So far, the protagonist has not systematically organized what he has learned and his skills. Others don't know. Anyway, it makes me feel uncomfortable. Finally, the fourth point is that the protagonist has never shown his own strength. Power, I have been writing about how strong the protagonist is, but it has never been shown, and the cool points of strength are not highlighted. At the same time, it gives people a feeling that the protagonist's combat power is very vain. Then it is said that the protagonist is behind the scenes and not behind the scenes. It is said that the protagonist is sometimes quite wild Then I will add a small point. The author arranged for a fox demon to pursue the monkey. It is not a gift, but only gives me a feeling. I feel a bit outrageous After talking about the shortcomings, let's talk about the advantages. The subject matter is quite interesting. Practice fakes to become real. The following content is almost the same. In order to save the world, the aura of the world has been polluted. In order to save the world, the protagonist starts filming and becomes the director of Journey to the West. Then the current demons will act as actors to recreate Journey to the West, purify the aura, and save the world. If you like this subject, you can read it.

Not bad, the setting is interesting and the updates are awesome. For now, it can be used as food. But the current main plot is mainly the retelling of the plot of Journey to the West, and there is not much plot in Liaozhai itself. Moreover, the strength of the protagonist and the monkey grows too fast, making it more difficult to unfold the plots of many Liaozhai stories. They have to play high-end games at the beginning, and it is easy to end the plot quickly or end it unfinished. If the author's layout ability is strong enough, he can consider using the three disciples of Bodhi as an important branch, mainly to contact the demons in troubled times, and then gather them together to fight Bodhi, and complete a relatively complete chapter. Then we will do Beidi's line, mainly contacting the Dharma and sects in troubled times, and then destroy Beidi and rebuild the underworld. After finishing Beidi, we will then do Lost Heaven or Disappearing Gods and Buddhas, etc., And finally clarify the world and finish. This will make the whole article richer.

The meaning of the introduction is that the protagonist creates a Taiyi Golden Immortal by himself, and then the protagonist can get 10% of its feedback. The protagonist can create such an awesome one, why can't he become that awesome one?

I remember that there was the Monkey King, the Monkey King, in Liaozhai.

The writing is good, even if the protagonist is also Erlang, let's just play Erlang Shen in full.

Why can't this stone monkey be a stone man? Is it just because there are many monkeys in Huaguo Mountain?

Write well 😠

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