Cultivation of Immortality Begins with the Sheepherd

It feels a bit outrageous. Xiaopa Cai, who has just started practicing Qi, has been learning spells all day long. How many spells can you cast on one level of Qi training? How much proficiency can be improved? Personal opinion, if you don't like it, delete it.

How many chapters have you written? What is the title of your novel?

🐏Guan? Put 🐏? How did I think of a lost story?

What are you writing about? Are you really cultivating immortality? ? ? One moment he learns martial arts, the next he learns spells. A little Karami who has just entered his body with spiritual energy, just learns a spell on the left and a spell on the right. What, you want to go to heaven? ? ?

Let's change the name and call it Become a Demon from Feixuesan

The main thing I don't understand is that there is no point in having so many martial arts training plots. You are a cultivator and not a martial arts person. After doing so many martial arts training, you don't have to do physical training. . .

A hammer here and a hammer here and there, it's a mess, but it's still watery. . . .

These are all problems caused by mortals cultivating immortals. The underworld cultivating immortals. In fact, if you think about it, you know that in a world of immortal cultivation, the superiors are hundreds or even thousands of years old. How much do they care about their own descendants? Let's not talk about whether it's yours or not. If it's not yours, you won't care much about it. There is no intersection, and even nephews and grandchildren have no feelings. What's more, they have been practicing in seclusion and making friends for decades or hundreds of years. How can they have the time to care about the mess below, not to mention there are some evil spells that can be cursed with blood. Isn't this a proper weakness?

It was really slow to catch on, but as soon as the protagonist successfully introduced Qi into his body, some family members immediately provoked the protagonist and wanted to treat the protagonist as a lackey. They were all Taosheng.

The most annoying thing is this kind of pretentious and slap-in-the-face text 🔨 The most annoying thing is that this kind of person will definitely win the battle with God and I will fight over the ranks 🔨🔨

I feel that if I continue writing like this, I will take jujube pills in Xianxia novels. The protagonist who wants to become an immortal and become an ancestor will always give up other tracks that can easily achieve achievements, and devote himself to the great cause of cultivating immortals. Then he will always be targeted for some strange reasons, and he will always be in trouble after entering the master. It's clumsy; no matter how big or small the immortal sects are, they are always fighting for power. What's even more ridiculous is that no matter how advanced the immortal cultivators are, they are all mindlessly protecting their shortcomings... To put it bluntly, you are already cultivating immortals in pursuit of immortality, so why do you care about your family and bloodline? When you have reached such a high level in cultivation, you don't understand the importance of character at all. An ordinary person knows that being a spoiled child is like killing a son. But a cultivator who has lived for hundreds of years doesn't understand? And the intrigues of the Immortal Cultivating Sect are even more magical. Manager of the sect, since you have no intention of cultivating immortals, why don't you just go down the mountain to the mortal world to claim immortality and ancestors, and make money while standing up? Why do you have to act like a clown on the mountain, grovel to please the superiors, and risk the elimination of the nine races and the danger of never being reincarnated to prevent people from becoming enlightened, and try to see if the descendants you have tricked can become immortals in the future to revenge yourself? The same is true for the protagonist. The purpose of becoming an immortal is to be free and comfortable, and to live forever. However, in order to become an immortal and to live forever, you enter a sect of cultivating immortals. You can't do this, you can't do that, and you are still scheming with others all day long. You can't trust anyone. , I have cultivated myself into a tortoise, always looking for opportunities and retreating to practice in order to break through the realm. As a result, after all, I have very little time to live for myself sincerely, and I really would rather die happily after enjoying myself! After reading the whole story, I have no idea why the protagonist is cultivating immortality.

This book increases the difficulty of practicing spells and reduces their power. Even spells can only be cast a few times before running out of mana (study wizard literature, wizard apprentices with low mana can only cast a few witchcraft). It makes the early combat effectiveness of the immortal cultivators so low, but they also look down on martial arts. It feels particularly inconsistent. Wouldn't those martial arts practitioners easily destroy these rookie cultivators? How dangerous is it to go out? Aren't warriors with low qualifications and those who cannot cultivate immortality watching the rookies for harvest? However, warriors are generally servants and their status is lower than that of rookie cultivators. I am not confident that I am not holding back any resentment 🤫

Alas, the more I watch it, the more boring it becomes. In fact, the plot is not bad, but Goldfinger is too useless. I watched it because of Goldfinger. When I saw the protagonist in Chapter 154, I felt uncomfortable without using the golden finger. He mainly relied on the protagonist to practice on his own, and occasionally used the golden finger to improve himself.

Spells and exercises are both called techniques, so they cannot be distinguished.

No, how come the more you write about farming and cultivating immortals, the more martial arts you write?

When I see this familiar hydrological method, my first reaction is that Mr. Hua has opened a trumpet again. Are there any book friends who feel the same way?

I don't recommend it to people who like to read about upgrading. The early stages of this book are too detailed, there are too many spells to remember, and many of the characters have unclear relationships. Less than a month has passed since Chapter 40, and then I learned a bunch of spells in less than a month, and it's really weird.

In what age are you still writing this kind of plot? The protagonist doesn't want to cause trouble, but the mentally retarded villain insists on coming to slap the protagonist in the face, and then takes out the spiritual stone to bet with the protagonist😥, I can't stand it anymore

He keeps introducing the exercises, but those who don't know them think that the author is teaching everyone to cultivate immortality, Dashu Wen. . .

The writing is very good, why don't you update it?

This long-winded and gradually getting better style is very similar to the way of writing about the fat man of the outside monk.

I've read dozens of chapters of this book, and it's OK, but there are a few flaws. The first is that I haven't entered the qi training period to do handymen for three years. I've read dozens of chapters, but it doesn't say anything about breaking through after working as a handyman. Can I become a formal disciple? And the most important thing is that it feels like it's so easy to build the foundation inside, and the Jin Dan talks about it.

I saw that the protagonist has arrived at Qingqing Grassland. The writing is good so far, except that it is a bit verbose at the beginning. I hope the author will work hard to update and expand the publicity.

I don't seem to understand (#-.-) The title of the book. I'll go check it out first.