Shuifu Immortal

You can farm with peace of mind in the early stage, and kill with peace of mind in the later stage. In the early stage, Gou Dao opened up spiritual fields, introduced spiritual springs, raised spiritual fish, planted elixirs, and saved his family bit by bit. The setting of the Water Mansion is also pleasing. It is not only a mobile cave, but also a place where you can hide, practice, and produce. It gives the protagonist the capital to survive for a long time. The farming part is not boring It is not the kind of fake farming that you just plant for two chapters and then throw it away, but it is really written about farming as the foundation for growth. 2. Gou Dao starts the game, but he is not a brainless coward The protagonist follows the typical Gou Dao style in the early stage: he will not stand out if he can, he will not do it himself if he can borrow a knife to kill someone, and everything counts as three steps. But what is commendable is that he is very smart. It's not about hiding when things happen or being timid when seeing people. It's about being low-key when it's time to be low-key, laying out when it's time to make plans, and being absolutely unambiguous when it's time to take action. 3. Decisive killing, without compromising combat prowess, and fast feedback. The most comfortable thing about this book is that the protagonist does not overwhelm combat prowess, nor does he forcefully hide his clumsiness. Not so with this book. The protagonist improves his cultivation, obtains treasures, and develops magical powers. He will soon demonstrate them in actual combat, and often directly crush his opponents. When encountering enemies who covet the water house and bully them, they will not talk nonsense. They will kill them if they can. Let every breakthrough have a corresponding record to realize it, and the cool points are very dense. Especially in the middle and late stages, the protagonist changes from being cautious to being aggressive.

Even though the protagonist has a middle-grade spiritual root and a golden finger, it only took three months to break through from the first level of Qi training to the second level of Qi training! He still had to hide his cultivation like this, for fear that others would discover that he had broken through too quickly! I was directly disgusted! 🥵

The system of cultivating immortals in the book gives me the feeling that it is a transitional form between the resource-rich Qi Refining Flow system and the resource-poor Qi Dao. The spiritual energy of heaven and earth seems to be sufficient, but there has been some shortage of various resources for cultivating immortals and refining Qi. Generally speaking, this can be regarded as high-quality food. The current shortcoming is that it lacks a bit of humanistic description. I hope that the protagonist will not be too tight and dry in the future when he proves the golden elixir.

There was a comment before that said this book was hard to read because of the complicated exercises and over-the-top explanations. It was normal to make some comments that were not in my taste, so I didn't care about it. After that, a buddy made a rebuttal under that comment, and some people started to argue. This is actually normal. After all, it is difficult to convince others with different opinions. But when I took a glance today, someone cursed "the author's dog" directly under the rebuttal comment! I'm not saying that, all the people arguing there are trainees, and no one subscribed to me. Even the content of the debate has nothing to do with this book. It's just a matter of disagreement with each other. Isn't it a bit outrageous that someone can be called a dog? I am used to comments that think this book is poorly written here and there, but a direct personal attack is still a bit too much! So I deleted the post directly. If you have any objections, you can pop up again, and I can continue to delete it. It's okay to express your dissatisfaction by expressing your opinions normally. Everyone has different tastes and opinions anyway, and I won't delete your comments~ But please don't use mindless insults and attacks, and at least maintain basic respect for each other. Thank you!

I don't understand this monster battle formation. Does it mean that the monster learned to move on its own, or did humans tell it how to move? If this is the case, if the protagonist doesn't go to the front line, what's the use of just sending the monsters to the front line? The people on the front line haven't learned how to fight. If the monster learned to move by itself, wouldn't its intelligence be too high?

During the war between the two factions, the Luo family fought against the Chen family. Was Runjinmen blind? There was no reason to let his subordinates attack each other and weaken their own strength.

Let me give a critical review of this book. I have been reading and writing since the beginning, and it is very intensive every day. This book is of high quality among cultivating immortal novels. The author updates it stably, with ten thousand words a day, and there is no feeling of AI. It is fun to fight, and it is fun to farm and grow, but it is not popular. 😴 The writing is okay, and it mainly tells the story of the protagonist. Relying on the resources of the internal water palace, I still have a good position in the Jindan Sect. I feel that the writing is quite good. I look forward to traveling around and expanding the map. I suggest that I can write some fulfilling emotions in the humanities. It is a bit too bland now. It is good not to stress the level, but do you think it will be difficult to balance the speed of cultivation after you rise so quickly? The combat power is also quite strong, but the combat description is a bit slow, but are the flaws not concealed? Do you have any plans to build a new sect in the future, or will you just take Runjin Sect into your own hands? It is recommended to open more dungeons like ordinary people, write more details, and then add some distinctive supporting characters. The current supporting characters are a bit stereotyped and have no memory points. Also, the relationship between the protagonists is a bit bland, some are female characters but are aloof, and some are weird. The description of female appearance, temperament, etc. Still need to be refined to attract readers' imagination. Later, when recruiting apprentices, they need to be better shaped and more likable. I really like this book. I hope the author can stick to it and the results will get better and better!

Come on, author, I will cut you off if you do it

I can only say that the author is a talented person. The battle between the four clans actually caused the following families to fight within themselves and prevented them from going to the front line to fight. What's this? Doesn't this weaken one's own strength?

Let's take a look, there is no fairy tale about water path at the beginning.

I couldn't stand it when I saw that I was going to take the battle formation assessment. Is this a mortal flow? All kinds of awesome and high-profile. For a few years, others were still raising pigs outside, and the male protagonist has become an insider. The plot is also a model drama. First, everyone is badmouthing, and then he is promoted in the face.

The author should not forget to do it

Daily settlement, start cultivating immortality from a handyman

Sometimes you don't have to insist on updating 4 times a day, just do 2 updates as a minimum. Give yourself more time to polish, and you can accumulate high quality from time to time. I think Yilong's explosive rhythm is quite good.

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Okay, okay, it's worth my while butterfly swimming in a cesspool in the middle of the night, I finally have something to watch🥳🥳🥳

A ten-year-old bookworm said it is good, good food, I hope to keep it

The development of this foundation-building competition is very weird? The protagonist has repeatedly rejected the leader's lineage, and the connections below have gathered together to form a small hill that needs to be suppressed, so there is no problem. But later on, this matter spread more and more, and it was necessary to give the protagonist a face... It started to become more and more strange. It was a joke, and it was used for one's own use... It was very weird.

It's over 400,000 words. Let's turn on the vocals. My voice is not nice.

Dear, do you know? Just because of the sentence at the beginning about hiding the second level of Qi training, I gave up twice. Today, I read this book again after reading the reading traces of a book friend. This time I endured and read dozens of chapters, only to realize that it was not what I thought. Because the protagonist's development is very smooth, there is no deliberate pressure, everything is a natural improvement. It feels very suitable for me. I really suggest that the author should not think twice about changing it. Just your sentence alone gives people a very misleading impression. Because this will make people who don't like Gou Dao think it's a pretentious article and give up 😅

Guys, please help

Recommend the book, is there any fellow Taoist who can give it a try Book title: Hanging up at the Immortal Gate, what's wrong with me having so many magical powers Portal

That's almost it. Generally, those who are late in cultivation start to practice foundation building, and the spiritual thoughts at the peak of foundation building are comparable to the golden elixir I haven't thought about the imagery yet For single imagery, I would use Bingxin Jue, Dinghai Shenzhen Heart Technique, etc. To stabilize the state of mind and increase concentration and spiritual thoughts Imagery changes, cloud changes or water phase changes, such as the secret book of Liuyun and the blue sea tide chart, which are both spiritual practice and illusion. Or you can do it in one step, such as the water guan decomposition method, the Dongyuan Sutra, etc. To cultivate the water attribute of the soul, or use the image of water to cultivate the root of the soul.

It's really good. Does the Water Path lead to the Seven Great Innate True Waters and the Three Lights Divine Waters?

The plot of the recent Jindan promotion is not very interesting, and I have no interest in reading it.

Come on, author, the writing is very good, I feel very comfortable reading it.

This choice of words and sentences is not smooth enough. Don't pile up all the words. Sometimes a few words in a sentence will be much smoother.