The Corpse Executor That Begins from the World of Uncle Jiu

Rampant is too weak in your writing. Rampant soldiers pass through the border like a plague of locusts. The funniest thing is that they are arranged in formation. When Rampant soldiers attack, all guilty and innocent people within a hundred miles will suffer. One hundred thousand soldiers and horses can be called a marshal. The outline of your protagonist from the beginning should be developed towards a marshal, instead of a bronze sword, auspicious clouds, neither fish nor fowl, why build an archway when the shadow is raised.

Not bad, 75-80 points! ! This may be the first time the author writes a book. The plot goes too fast, like an outline, and the character descriptions are too flat. I have no impression. After reading it, slow down the pace and write a few chapters about one incident. It is too fast. It's like reading an outline, which is boring.

This protagonist is useless and all depends on Goldfinger. He was originally a fellow Taoist, but later he became a generation shorter than Uncle Jiu.

It's okay, but the author seems to want to be a eunuch and doesn't have the willpower.

There are many kinds of immortals, including heavenly immortals, earthly immortals, and physical saints. A golden elixir is swallowed into my belly, and my fate is determined by God. Taoist golden elixir, etc., No matter what kind of immortality. The dead body is the most rubbish way to become an immortal. Zhijiexian, as the name suggests, even if you abandon your body, your soul will soar. To put it bluntly, he is a ghost. Why is it said to be the most rubbish? Human beings have essence, energy, spirit, and three treasures. When the three treasures are integrated into one, they are integrated into one body. The best thing is that if you give up the body as a corpse, you have given up, essence, and energy. Second treasure. If a god is left alone, even if only his soul is left, even if he becomes an immortal, it will not be complete. The fighting ability is considered to be the lowest among immortals.

Zhijie Xian is also the Yin God, and it is mainly focused on military training. I remember the scene in A Chinese Ghost Story of the Black Mountain Old Demon will be very shocking. In fact, Xiangyun is a bit nondescript, not as good as the Five Ghosts Carrying a Palanquin, that is, the Yin God should be more pure.

Since you are going to become a corpse and become an immortal, let's not talk about borrowing a corpse to bring the soul back to life. You can become an immortal even if you don't have a physical body.

The writing is fluent, the plot is reasonably embedded, and there are some minor loopholes in logic, common sense and title. More serious shortcomings: The plot is compact, monsters are defeated one after another, the spells are easy to acquire but difficult to master, it is easy to get tired of watching, and it feels too far ahead. It is recommended that after each plot, a few chapters about life or cultivation should be interspersed, and more foreshadowing should be used to lead to the plot of the subsequent story, instead of fighting monsters when something goes wrong here, reporting problems somewhere, and fighting monsters again 🙂

I would like to give you a suggestion. Since you are taking the Jiyin route, just set the Fengdu method to learn at the beginning. There is no need for a hodgepodge.

The more powerful Goldfinger is, the more imbecile the protagonist will be.

Is it the kind of ancient corpse interpretation in "Han Ghost Examination", in which the non-human immortals transform rapidly after death, or the corpse interpretation of the Southern and Northern Dynasties, or is it the style of ghosts and immortals in the Sui and Tang Dynasties who followed the Shinto way, or the style of the Song and Yuan yin and gods becoming yang and the Ming and Qing Dharma teachings and soldiers?

The new book is one chapter a day, summarizing the book that can be run away at any time

What the hell did Awei write?

I haven't even reached 100 chapters after raising it for so long. How long will it take to write this?

Why is the update discontinued? Should I stop writing? Or should I take a few days off for something else?

For now: watchable Enjoyment: average Attractiveness: average Writing: not too awkward Plot twist: slightly blunt Anyway, Uncle Jiu has too few stories, and there are a lot of bad ones at the beginning, so this one is okay for now. Only 21 chapters so far

To be honest, I don't understand it. Uncle Jiu and Four Eyes fought for a long time, and the protagonist solved it by just humming and haha. Are you talking nonsense? Does this belong to a pile of words?

Come on, please read more and follow this book to the end.

Not bad, it makes my blood boil when I see it

You have to find a place to bury yourself as a corpse::: The protagonist is alive and kicking::: You can become stronger through practice:::: The theme is corpse disintegration into an immortal:::: The strength is about the same:::: Ask Uncle Jiu to help you find a Feng Shui treasure place::: : Wouldn't it be written that he will become an immortal soon after cultivating and become an immortal?::::: That is different from everyone's understanding::::: Why is the protagonist Zhijie of Gaga Meng who does not practice Zhijie?::::: People who read the tomb robbers wrote that the Zhijie Immortal is more like:::

You are a eunuch after all. If you want to be a eunuch, I will kick you out. I still have something to stop updating, can you please reply to me?

Come on

Can it be refined?