Cultivation of Immortality Begins with One Qi Transforming into Three Pure Beings

AI novel, right? After reading Chapter 22, the protagonist never had any emotional fluctuations in the entire article 👍

Don't call it One Qi Transforms Three Purities. Let's change the title of the book. It's 60 pages and has made zero progress.

The author should just stop committing evil if he has nothing to do. You, the protagonist, can step on all kinds of shit and it's nothing. You can't retain readers in the early stage, how can you expect to achieve results?

Proficiency panel? In addition, the belongings of the descendants of the martyrs were directly taken away... A bit...

The system panel is just like the system panel. It's nothing new. It's still written in the same way as the data panel.

Ninety-five percent of the time-travel stories at the starting point have the biggest poisonous point, that is, almost all authors write the protagonist who is fifty or sixty years old in two lifetimes as a student in his twenties. Which person in his fifties or sixties has the author seen who is still so clear and stupid?

According to the current plot arrangement, it will take half a year to develop the introduction skills? When you meet a woman, do you have to arrange a brainless villain? No plot except this? You just keep writing that the dog's liver skills are also good. The skill has a great reputation, so don't write it as Lagao.

Suffering is suffering, and it is not worthy of praise. Adding more suffering to yourself every day, as the great man said, there is no such thing as hard work. If practicing and succeeding is to increase your own suffering, then why should you practice? You could just commit suicide.

😒 There is a very ancient feeling, that is, no matter where you go, there will be trouble, and no matter who you are, you will provoke them. Except for the protagonist group, they are enemies, and they are enemies on all sides, and there is a steady stream of people like this.

What the author wrote is the most traditional protagonist with a sarcastic face and a broom star. Wherever he goes, something goes wrong and everyone wants to step on the protagonist.

Pig's trotters are like that pig's trotters rice. Everyone comes and eats a few bites. After eating, they leave feeling comfortable and not resisting at all.

This is that the protagonist has been fucked so many times, been punished so many times, and then, the protagonist said nothing, showed nothing, and then I said that the protagonist has a good personality, but you act like a brat like this, it is really speechless, just like you smile inexplicably, and then you feel something, plus the non-existent Things, Li Ming didn't do anything at that time, and then, you talked a lot about it, and then arranged a lot of things, and then later, this book is also quite wrong, because in the end, the protagonist becomes stronger, and then he takes revenge, so I said that I just swallowed my anger at the time, but I didn't feel like I could swallow my anger at all.

The beginning of the book is okay, but the plot is a bit silly. What will happen if the protagonist knows that something will happen between him and Fang Miaomiao? And then he was really funny on the opposite side, but quite incomprehensible. The main character's idea at the time of this book was not to fall in love, or in other words, it was just that idea, and then I kept thinking about it. This kind of plot is too old, I can't say it is too old, it is too devoid of new ideas. The beginning is really good, and it's okay, but it really doesn't work in the end. Later, the protagonist is tortured and locked up for several hours. He just doesn't reflect on his soul. He's just like a three-year-old child. Don't he know? Just him and the monsters outside, or to practice, or the author can make the originator bigger and more awesome. If you have to do it like this, it is really ugly. What is really outrageous is the protagonist. Knowing that this thing will happen to him, and then having to face it with Convenience, practice your sparring, these things of yours are really outrageous, you know? But this kind of plot is really ugly and too old. You have a good start, your name is also very good, and it is easy to attract people, but you can't retain people. You are a superstar. When the protagonist and Fang Fang face to face, it is convenient and takes advantage of the protagonist, because the protagonist is in him. I can't learn it, that is to say, it's too big and the protagonist can provide a lot of progress for this school beauty. It's quite unbelievable. I can only say that some people like this book. It's indeed quite unbelievable. The beginning is well written, but the subsequent plot is really awkward. It feels like it was not written by one person.

It is not the best university in the country but in all mankind. This kind of thing happens where tutors harm students. The school has no compensation measures. No one cares? And he is also a gifted student. The most important thing is that the power of this world belongs to individuals. The principal must be the most amazing. Others and the principal cannot exert pressure at all. It is equivalent to saying that the school is not afraid of external pressure. This kind of thing happens inside the school. Offending a talented student for a meaningless student. And the external environment is not good. I think the method of entrapment is too low-level.

There are so many typos in this article. I can't figure out where the typo came from. Isn't it spelling wrong? Could it be handwriting? Wrong identification? But it feels more like a scan recognition error

It's too late. Please proofread the text before posting.

Brother, there are a lot of typos 🙂🙂🙂

Just that Tai Chi diagram is enough for you to reach the ranks of Pangu and Yang Mei! There are so many things that I can't afford to play with, nor can I afford to keep them.

There's nothing wrong with it. You can eat it to satisfy your hunger when you're hungry, and the writing is smooth, but there's something missing, it has no taste, it's just that I'm not hungry anymore.

The book is cut, the logic is straightened out, everyone can practice, and technology is introduced, everyone must be able to live, and resources must be sufficient. It will definitely not work without farming. Weapons, elixirs, talismans, formations, beasts, etc. Must be divided very finely. Without a population of tens of billions, this world cannot be sustained. If you look at the modern earth, it is almost tens of billions. If you want to invade the country, the population is a resource. You must ensure a good promotion channel, otherwise you will not be able to establish a country. At least Gong Ji and Jiedan must have levels. Only the Nascent Soul can ensure that the country does not fall. This is quite a nuclear weapon. It must be available, and there must be a support system to support it.

Why are there so many typos? Can the author correct them?