If You Are in High Martial Arts, You Will Receive the Gift of the God of Martial Arts at the Beginning.

The plot is pretty good and you can basically guess the direction. As for the characters, except for the fat guy who is pretty good, everything else is okay.

This saint-level talent is so fake...

Global High Martial Arts➕The Catastrophe of Ten Thousand Races, you are invincible, did you feed these two articles to the AI?

Super powerful, it's like it's out of gas

The protagonist is only at the second level, and his Saint-level talents are starting to wear off. Who cares if you overwhelm the protagonist like this?

Doesn't anyone think the setting is weird? You said that martial arts requires physical strength to measure strength. I understand. Why do Dante cultivators and magicians also need to measure strength? Moreover, there are a lot of professions that are actually homogeneous. There is no big difference between sword cultivator and sword cultivator in the novel about cultivating immortals. If you ask what is the difference between sword cultivator and sword cultivator, my answer is no difference, because there is no difference in the setting of this book.

It's so boring to write. It's only been three months since I passed 200,000 words, and I just started the college entrance examination. Things are happening one after another, overwhelming, and they are all big events, like Lithuania insisting on getting involved in the war between Israel and the United States. Your small body can't resist it.

The most annoying thing is that this kind of low level is very bad, and it is easy to cause many problems. 1. Improvement of realm. You are improving so fast and the whole world is looking for you. Why do you move so fast when you have nothing? Improvement is slow. I have been working from a low level to a high level. Then the author did not write the outline in detail, which caused the combat power to collapse. The author did not dare to write too many levels. The more levels, some people will scold you, and the less, some people will scold you. 2. The outline is not well written. This is when I read Chapter 48. The data is completely copied and pasted. The author has no idea how many days have passed in each chapter, whether it is a day or a period of time. 3. Want too much. Everything must be explained in the front. Don't write too much about the following things in the early stage, otherwise you will have to fill in endless holes later. 4. The career is too complicated. This does not mean that there are too many professions, but that there are too many professions. Magicians, immortal cultivators, warriors and others are almost completely irrelevant. The author may want to write that this world may be a game world created by some great power? The emergence and decline of each world must have a main line, because the branch lines serve the main line. You have so many main lines, and it is difficult to write it well. I read 50 chapters and I think this book is almost impossible. 5. Too water. Later, the protagonist will have to go through each profession. Writing about other professions is too long and too short, and some people will definitely criticize him. But if the protagonist only pursues martial arts, what's the point of other professions? Are immortal cultivators and magicians all serving the martial arts? The early descriptions certainly weren't. 6. Write but not completely. You introduced so many professions, but in fact, the first 50 chapters almost only wrote about martial arts battles. You didn't write about the rest. It was said to be a magic city, but you didn't see a few magicians fighting. Including the test, you only wrote in detail what the martial arts aspect would be tested. Do magicians and immortal cultivators also want to test your strength? Almost all are shortcomings, but many people just like to do it. Not every book can write about Huangtian Emperor or Mysterious. I can see the innovation, but I feel bad that the author didn't write it well. Come on, author, I hope you can be popular. Personal opinion, don't blame me if it's not well written.

Most of the important characters, plot, training system, and world framework are borrowed from Tribulation of Ten Thousand Races. The world framework and settings are also stitched together from Global Gaowu and other novels. I don't have much of my own, but I can read it, but I haven't learned the essence of the tentacle monster of the eagle. The number of updates is almost meaningless.

What kind of rubbish is your saint-level talent? It's so fun to suppress your combat power.

In the entrance competition surrounded by experts, the protagonist directly uses the identity card of the demon tribe without knowing that there is a special identity card, and uses every ability directly. It can only be said that he behaves like a newcomer who has just emerged from society. I don't know how dangerous the world is. In the real world, the protagonist directly used the Demon Clan identity card and was immediately arrested.

At first, I thought it was pretty good. The further you go, the more confused you become. It feels like you were originally a primary school student, but you are about to take the college entrance examination. The teacher directly poured into you all the knowledge from elementary school to the third year of high school. It is all about various kinds of knowledge and the main line is hardly advanced, and the branch lines are always developed.

Meeting the Evil God in Chapter 33 is too outrageous, and the protagonist needs to be injected with knowledge from the Evil God. What kind of garbage plot is this?

Disgusting, it doesn't matter if the first talent is a liver type, the second talent is also a liver type

I feel that professional discrimination is deliberately expressed everywhere in the book. The writer must have a deep understanding of it and express his feelings, right?

Forcibly pretending to be cool, slap in the face, I wrote it well before, but here in Deng Shen, you have to pretend to be cool.

This novel is really too fluid. Typical routine article. You can read 10 chapters in 1 minute. I feel a lot of psychological and profile descriptions are unnecessary.

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It was all cheated, and at the end it was restricted, and I felt like I had no choice. I was smart enough to add the sentence "Only for gods and below", but I feel like I can't substitute it.

Applying the same trick to a dog can reach the top!

Alas, the setting of this book is indeed interesting and eye-catching, but the plot development still falls into the cliche

The speed of cultivation is so unbelievable, everyone is so fast. An ordinary genius can reach the seventh realm at the age of 50, and become a god at the 10th realm. This place is countless times faster than the world of immortal cultivation.

Is he the author of Electromagnetic Tyrant?

I was put off by the title of the book as soon as I saw it, it is extremely poisonous.

I never thought of this angle before, it's too strong.

There is no other plot to write about the martial arts competition all day long? The game is played there from beginning to end, who wants to watch it? And it looked very powerful at the first level, but at the second level, any epiphany or gift becomes rubbish? Don't mess around with the next level 6789

It's really boring. There's nothing new. A lot of Gao Wu novels give protagonists the trap of "God rewards those who work hard." These novels are pure plagiarism.

Your initial talents have been upgraded to extraordinary, but you have forgotten your saint talents? There are a lot of typos and bad sentences. It's a pity that I lost my coins 🙄

There are so many dialogues between various supporting characters that I can't even watch them.