Gaowu Starts from Awakening His Powers

I feel like the author has a bright future in writing pornographic stories.

The setting is quite interesting, but the author needs to write it more clearly. It's hard to understand the power equation now. What does it mean when magical power evolves three times? Is it possible to evolve the superpower three times by practicing this magical skill all the time? But looking at the description later, it seems like I have to change it midway. For example, in the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, you need to practice the Dragon Claw Hand and the Dragon Capturing Skill. If the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms allow the superpower to evolve three times, and the previous martial arts allow the superpower to evolve once and twice, then the total is six times, but the author seems to mean a total of three times. The Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms only allowed the superpower to evolve for the third time, not three times. Also, does martial arts allow superpowers to evolve, or does one need to evolve superpowers to practice martial arts? Let's take the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms as an example. From the previous description of the evolutionary equation, it can be seen that cultivating the divine power allows the superpower to evolve three times. However, judging from the description of the Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms later, one can only practice magical skills after evolving three times. And the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, do they allow summoned beasts to evolve into divine dragons, or do they allow people to evolve into divine dragons? If the summoned beast evolves, is there any essential difference between evolving the summoned beast into a dragon and a roc? Why can the protagonist evolve the summoned beast into a roc but not a dragon? If people are allowed to evolve, then it would be very strange to allow summoning powers to practice this martial art.

To be honest, those settings are pretty cool. Very stunning. All aspects of the protagonist are also well written. The plot is also good. And there are no bugs. The writing is very detailed. The basic supernatural martial arts are explained very clearly. It feels like I have thought very comprehensively. It's obvious that a lot of effort has been put into the setting. The only pity is that there are too many emotional scenes. All kinds of ambiguity. Weigh endlessly. And they are all proactive. And do you really like baby-faced and big breasts so much? The author has been single for thousands of years. Still the ultimate dog licker. Don't write emotional scenes or write less single female protagonists. He really has the talent of a great god. Martial arts writing is really not suitable for writing about the harem. Especially the early stage. Now the protagonist only has level 4 or 5 abilities. You just got a girlfriend. Four ambiguous objects. When he reaches level 100, that's not a few hundred harems. Moreover, this kind of ambiguous drama takes up too many words. Not worth the money. Fifty chapters ordered. I probably won't order it after reading this.

I'm looking forward to what's coming next, but there are too many female characters written. Do you want to accept them or not? I can't quite understand whether it's pure love or multiple girls. Don't be ambiguous, otherwise it won't please both parties.

Don't write too depressingly. This world view and system are very interesting. Write well. Come on, author. But don't be too pornographic. Don't be too depressing. Xiao Huang Yiqing has always suspected that you are cheating on the word count.

Rt, there have been too many written by women recently, and they are all very ambiguous, and I can't stand them anymore. There will be only one female protagonist. If you want to write multiple female protagonists, tell me in advance. I will turn around and leave. I have to write so many ambiguous supporting female characters. Can I become a regular at any time? 😅

The female characters written by the author have a sense of déjà vu as if they are looking at the little emperor uncle.

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Practicing martial arts skills and super powers is quite innovative. But the question is, is this novel serious? When I read one of the chapters, I wondered if it was pornographic. Author, if you have such ability, why not write harem novels? You will have a much better future than you, a hard-working martial arts writer like you.

If you don't close it, it feels like the rhythm of watching is very interrupted.

The author's writing is a bit strange. As a person from the Security Department, it is natural for him to complete his work. Others can be sacrificed, but the protagonist cannot put himself in danger. Moreover, the protagonist is cared for by senior officials. Qin Ruolan is just a person who obeys orders. The protagonist is portrayed here in a way that the character image does not match the front and back.

The teacher broke his arm? It is said that medical treatment is developed

Don't be afraid of multiple heroines

Qin Ruolan's writing is so tempting, will you accept it? Don't leave out your daughter, give her away.

I'm really looking forward to the next part. The heroine shouldn't do more and more, otherwise the second part will be unfinished. Support the author and update quickly! ! !

22 Monthly passes, can I add more?

This book is okay, but the main problem is that the combat power is not clear. For example, the combat power is not clear when entering the tower. There is no clear division of combat power that I feel, and the level cannot be used as a reference to clearly define the combat power.

How many women does the protagonist have now?

It turns out it's a story about Liu Bei. I won't feel sleepy if you write this (´▽｀)ノ♪

The writing is good, but the results are not good. The reason is very simple. There are too few updates.

The author won't want eunuchs every day, right?

This kind of book loses its greatest appeal if you focus on daily life. I feel that it should focus on the sense of refreshment brought by the improvement of his martial arts realm. The unknown power of various martial arts and realms and the expectations brought about by improvement are very attractive. It can also be interspersed with foreshadowing to let the protagonist plan the plot and long-term planning, which also attracts readers.

The writing is good, but the grades are just mediocre.

Wasn't he quite innocent at first? Why is there another female lead here?

Let me ask, will you join the force again later?

How is the score of this author's book? Is there any risk of eunuchs?

Why is it that the author puts the chapter names in the next chapter before I can understand them? It feels like the title of the next chapter is placed in the previous chapter.