The Road Is Misty

It's too watery. From the foundation building to the present, in thirty or forty chapters, there is no sense of the existence of the main plot or the goal of the protagonist. The world of Amunro in The Witcher is already halfway through. At this progress, is the author prepared to write ten thousand chapters?

This book is quite acceptable and interesting to see the civil strife within the sect. But then the turn was too sudden. Reading the book gives me a sense of immersion. In the early stage, he returned to his hometown with flesh and blood, but now he is so cold and ruthless. After killing his friends, he went straight to fight for his true disciples. The characters were too fragmented.

After reading about 300 chapters, I can only say that there is still a gap between him and the top masters. What is the specific difference? I feel it is the plot. The usual plot is good, but when it comes to the climax, the writing is a bit unsatisfactory.

The pace of this book is too slow and there is no fighting plot. It just seems relatively bland. After cultivating the foundation, they started to appear in the novice village, and they didn't have any outstanding fighting skills. The writing technique is also the traditional cultivation of immortality with golden fingers. Advantages of not traveling through time

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The heroine is sacrificed again. Some of these junk books have been blocked.

I don't understand why the author wants to challenge other categories again and again when he can definitely make money by writing novels like The Witcher's Journey honestly. The one next door basically copied it, and the writing is not good, but it's so popular.

Egret has several characteristics in writing books. First, "internal resources are limited, and civilization must move toward external expansion for further development." Second, it is believed that collective strength is greater than individual strength. Third, the protagonist is not a stallion. Xianxian civilization is a consumer civilization that pursues individual transcendence. According to the information now, there are many sects and sects in all kinds of strange ways... The possibility of conflicts among various organizations over resources is very high. In order to achieve personal transcendence and speed up resource acquisition, the protagonist Li Mo will definitely join or establish an organization and join the fight for hegemony. Everyone, stay tuned. The grand world view and war are what Egret is best at. Look back at Egret's previous books. The heart of the first Grimm's world is about to be broken, and the wizard group is the loser. The second book, hell, has no resources. The third book, Shelter. The fourth book, Barren Land. ...... Now Egret said, I want to write about cultivating immortality. So how do you make me believe that this is a big world with abundant resources. 😭 Everyone, let me put my words here. The main contradiction between the people of this world is: the contradiction between poor resources and the overwhelming number of monks. The solution is: introduce the "big, medium and small world" proposed by Bailu, and solve internal conflicts through external aggression. (I suggest Egret to bring over some of the settings from the Wizard's Journey. It will be interesting.) If there is external combat, it will not be surprising at all to meet other civilizations. In other words, this book is about the civilization of cultivating immortals in the world of Wizard Journey🙂

Egret, after so many years of going around in circles since "The Witcher Journey" became a hit, you are either on the way to being thrown off the road, or you have already been thrown off the road. At the end of the wizard journey, I once suggested in the group: The future is a world where multiple themes are integrated with each other. You can try to walk around. Now I apologize to you, it was my suggestion that misled you. If you insist on writing a wizard-style novel, use your own worldview and literary settings... Etc. Compared with the great names on the monthly ticket list, a monthly income of 100,000 is not a big deal. Hey, what a pity. Egret, why don't we take a good look at the reasons why the Wizard's Journey became so popular? Let's stick to our basics, create within our comfort zone, and then slowly expand beyond the margins after our level improves! After all, life is so stressful that I don't shiver at all! Really, the reputation of the True Spirit Wizard cannot be separated from the egret.

Green, the wizard king of a generation, you can't write novels, please replace the egret quickly.

I still remember the shock I felt when I saw the dimensional esophagus, and I still can't let it go. Writing wizards, you really deserve to be the first, no one can surpass it.

The heroine must die, I like it like this, but I still like the way the hero of the Witcher's Journey died in the way of his first love, Lafite. The death is reasonable and promotes Green's growth. However, this book is no longer available, so there is no need to read it. There was originally a turning point in the Law of Evil God Grass, but Bailu had to write about the Law of Hunyuan Thunder Dao and rely on cultivating immortals. He really doesn't know why loyal readers Reading his books, readers prefer the crazy protagonist, the epic feeling that dares to change the sun and the moon to a new sky in the changing world, bringing a new technological system revolution to the world. The most promising thing about this book is that the protagonist masters the law of evil god grass. Even if he has to write the Hunyuan Thunder Road, he can seize this point to suppress the new demon clan, provoke wars between various races, and lead the human race He won, but Bailu later wrote too much. I originally thought he was going to pave the way for the subsequent plot, but it was not at all. I even suspected that he didn't know what he was going to write, and he didn't have the passion to write about the wizard's journey at all. This is the disadvantage of Kaishan Fengshen. Although the wizard's journey is based on the wizard world, old readers who have read both books, absolutely no one said anything. Plagiarism and the like, masterpieces are masterpieces, but Egret is too lazy now, so go away, but go away belongs to an old professional writer, he has grasped his own style, even if the writing is good, he knows that old readers like to read the characteristics of his works, although it is a bit biased, now the beginning is given a point adder that can strengthen everything, it is too messy, I still like the golden finger in Mystery Journey. Besides, I still have the book of Egret, and the book of World of Disaster, what the hell is that? The Glen Academy of Natural Sciences is not that bad. Although I didn't pay attention to the author's score of the book, the ending of that book is a bit disappointing, and there is even a feeling that Lei Luo could have finished it directly in the King of the Wasteland. It is not finished, but it is good. A very reasonable feeling. This is what Lei Luo deserves. He is crazy because of the times, and he leads the changes of the times because of his madness. Excellent scholars absolutely adhere to their own truth. They are products of idealism. They have used the heliocentric theory as the basis of life throughout their lives. When the heliocentric theory was shattered, maybe Lei Luo thought of what he once said. , Did not want to become bad money and drive out the bad money among good coins, just like Gauss Adolf and others before the wasteland era, they did not want to hinder future generations of scholars from pursuing the truth. In fact, Lei Luo had already recognized that the sun was not the center of the universe at that time, but he could not take this step himself, so he could only die quietly. At that time, Lei Luo also hoped that the sun was not the center of the universe. It is possible to stand up and be reborn, but he did not. It feels reasonable because this is Lei Luo's character, pure and paranoid. So after reading this novel two or three times, my previous evaluation changed from the previous evaluation that it was half a masterpiece and it was unfinished. In the end, my evaluation became that it was not unfinished at all, because this is the ending that best suits Lei Luo's character. Egret, I really recommend you to read the first two novels you wrote, Wizard's Journey and Academy of Natural Sciences, and take a look at Greene and Lei Luo. They will move forward when they find the truth they are fighting for. Even if they are not recognized by the world, they will change the world. Before they find it, they will work quietly and enrich themselves, waiting for the right time, and when they shine, they will show it to the world. The path I insist on, the journey of the wizard, from the early stage of the wizarding journey, Bailu obviously did not describe supporting characters, to the wizarding world war, it is obvious that Bailu has returned to describing supporting characters. The readers' eyes are sharp, and they don't have to care whether the protagonist's girlfriend dies or not, as long as the death is reasonable and promotes the subsequent changes in the protagonist's thoughts and personality, as long as the protagonist insists, pursues, and wants the new world. In your disaster world, and in this book, The Piaomiao, what is the purpose of the protagonist? Is it just to write about the protagonist to live? Reality is to live, and reading novels is to live. How do you want readers to support you? If the protagonist does not have his own ideas and beliefs, he is dead and not alive. As a long-time reader, that's it for now. I don't have any expectations anymore. I'll take a quick look at it if there is any update. That's all.

Go back and write about the wizard style. Now when you go back to the wizard style, you just kill people randomly. Don't do things that you don't have.

The originator of the wizard genre should go away, but the pinnacle of the wizard genre is you. It's a pity that since you, there has never been a wizard novel that I can read. It's either a wizard novel disguised as a wizard novel, or a fantasy novel disguised as a wizard.

Such a mediocre plot can only be supported by old wizard fans, right? No matter how confused you are in the follow-up, the protagonist's journey from contacting the cultivator to integrating into the cultivator is too boring... The previous parts of discovery, search, and patient waiting are all okay, and can be given more than 7 points. After joining, the plot and the style of painting have changed. I know you want to use the nature of men to admire women to promote and reveal this world. The structural system... But it is still not as good as the knowledge accumulation and difficulty in obtaining in the early stage of the wizard, and the strictness and cruelty of the levels. But so far, I can't understand the protagonist's efforts to climb... It seems that the protagonist has been working hard, but he can't feel the atmosphere and pressure... Rare things are more valuable, and in the same way, the skills and practice of monks , it should also be very difficult. You shouldn't have the so-called spiritual roots, and just lose the cruelty in it... In fact, you described the elimination section as because they didn't work hard enough. This is really a failure, a bit like picking up sesame seeds and losing the watermelon... In such a social environment and background, how can you think that it is unreliable? If you want to change to today's schools and exams, there is an essential difference between the two. If you fail to pass the exam, you will not have no way out, and if you pass the exam, you will not achieve a level jump... So I don't know what you think, maybe sometimes, you deliberately want to abandon those old plots to make yourself special, but you can't touch the basics and foundation...

Alas, ever since I watched the Plane Conquest and Civilization War in The Witcher Journey, I can't stand watching anything else without these two. I've searched all over the wizarding genre and can't find many that I can watch. Originally, the writing style of Knight's Journey and Lords of Ash can't compare to the Wizarding World and the like, but there are plane conquests and civilized wars. Personally, I just think it looks better than traditional wizards. After reading it, I only found that this book "The Wizard's Age" has a somewhat similar style starting from the Alchemy Wizard.

In the novel "The Witcher's Journey", what's next?

The three masterpieces of The Witcher are gone. The platinum copywriters are all well-known authors in the online literature circle. Only Bailu has read several books in a row and has been praised by book friends as The Wizard's Journey. He really takes himself seriously. The literary youth is also pretentious. Internet articles are just cool articles. Don't go into too much depth. You sacrifice the heroine at every turn and you are not a great god. You have no fan base and you deserve to be attacked. Except for readers in the wizarding circle who only read fantasy and fairy tales, who knows who you are?

What level of strength are you, a Foundation Establishment monk, to have such a lively test with a group of Qi-refining juniors? What caused such a funny plot? It's because you are not a good author, so you can write such a funny thing and still enjoy it.

Do you want to be an ordinary street writer, or the king of wizard novels?

No, buddy, you're breaking the news like this. It's chapter twenty-three.

The wizard really amazed me back then, and the pattern of the plane conquest war was also huge. I haven't finished reading the rest of the books, so my expectations have really dropped. The number of new books has come to an end. Book friends can give us a real evaluation. Is it worth it? Are there any surprises in the transformation?

Write another wizarding novel. None of these styles are your comfort zone

I lit up the light of the great god and gave all my monthly tickets to Bailu.                                                                      I want to say that I read the book "The Wizard's Journey" when I was in junior high school. I didn't expect that there would be a character like Green who used knowledge as a means to achieve his own goals. The image of the wizard left a deep impression on me and became the creed of my life. I will graduate from college next year, but the wizard has always had a profound impact on me.                     I see everyone saying that the quality of Bailu's writing after "The Wizard's Journey" is not very good. I think Bailu has his own ideas. If you feel good about writing books now and can survive and be happy, then continue. If you are tired of writing books and have doubts about yourself in the face of doubts and ridicules from book friends, then you might as well adjust yourself and be prepared. Be prepared and seek changes, your book friends will support you, just like what Green wrote in the "Book of Truth" when he failed to advance to the second level wizard in the nightmare world, "To pursue the truth, you can only keep stepping on the majestic wizard tower stairs accumulated by endless failures and loneliness, to pick the brightest point on the top of the peak."

I was dissuaded when I saw that my peers who had successfully established the Foundation were called Master Uncle. Nowadays, there are no ethics in novels. A strong junior brother becomes Senior Brother and then Senior Uncle. Why don't you become a disciple and become a master? Respecting the strong should mean that the stronger ones have improved their positions, status and resources, but seniority should not change randomly. What does that sect teach you when it accepts you? Does it teach you so that you can climb up and call yourself a brother and a father? It's terrible to be uneducated

There is a 90% chance that the new book written by Egret after changing his vest should be "Gewu Zhi"

Fairy tales are dead, don't touch this category. Mainly because those great writers have almost blocked the road behind. Let's go back to wizarding novels. They are quite popular now.

Grimm, it's better to go back and be your great Witch King.

Write about a wizard, just write about a wizard's journey. Part 2. Don't write anything else, just this, there isn't a decent wizard novel out there.

The old bookworm really likes the setting of the later period of The Witcher, but I have never found anything similar.