Warhammer 40K in a Box

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From a strictly Warhammer fan perspective, this online novel is rigorously considered and has a solid theoretical foundation. I think it is well done. However, from the perspective of a commercial online novel, it is a complete failure. I personally think it is a high-end, low-end development. From a commercial point of view, the early style is relaxed, interesting and well-documented, and the realistic part is also a good embellishment, but what is written in the middle and later stages? The relaxation is gone. It is obviously through the "artifact" and "game". As a result, the more you play, the more bitter you become, the atmosphere becomes more and more bitter, and you change from a chess piece to a local. Logically speaking, Warhammer 40k is indeed bitter, but you are a commercial online novel. It is wrong to have such a big difference in style between the beginning and the middle and later stages (the expectations are wrong). In addition, there are also problems with the arrangement of the entire plot line of the Reign of the Dead. From the perspective of rationalizing combat power, it is logical to do it this way. However, commercial online novels (especially those that start with easy farming) are not war games, so they should arrange a more relaxed plot under the premise of rationalization (feature of this book: reasonable), instead of the plot rhythm constantly getting out of control. These are the rhythm control problems of commercial online novels. After entering V again, I feel more and more confused. The chapter itself is not long, and there are many explanation and setting parts that have appeared many times in the previous article (for example, the explanation of Primaris organs has been repeated too many times). Finally, I still want to say that some people may say that this is Hammer's hard-core fan fiction. The 40k itself is dark and incomplete. You can watch it or not. But I want to say that I spent money on subscribing, and the early style is so inconsistent with the later stage. Of course, I have the right to express the true opinions of consumers. In a sense, it's also a pity that I wrote really well in the early stage, but couldn't grasp it in the middle and later stages.

The only thing wrong with this book is that I found it when it was still a seedling.

It's a bit similar to Cat's Hammerman's Glory Queen ~ It depends on whether the author can write a different Warhammer

Is the author Tan in love recently? I have written so many female doctor plots

This book is a good book. The Warhammer part is very interesting, and the realistic part of history. The author fills some chapters with water and can be skipped. Overall review: A very good Warhammer 40K novel, worth reading

Why did the Primarch have to be released in a transsexual form?

I am Omar Guilliman Poe, the Primarch of the Thirteenth Legion Kimi, the master of the 500 Street Cat Feeding Machine. In the dark side behind the Kimi universe, in the Hayaku space, there are four slightly evil gods. They are: Dinosaur Kang, who represents breath and mutual love, and confuses Hakimi into cannibalism; Represents disease and decay, in Hakimi The big yeast that spreads cat plague, stomatitis, and Dingdong chickens; represents change and conspiracy, and is composed of the resentment of the birds that were killed. Dingdongqi uses the corvid brain to weave conspiracies; and the youngest, the evil god who was born because another group of Hakimi stepped on his back every day: the cute evil that represents desire and indulgence. These four little hatted maggots have been ready to attack since the beginning of the mutual love between the Round-headed Saint and the old God of Wealth, and today they have become a threat that cannot be ignored. They used lies and blessings to coax and bribe the people of the empire, making them think that the empire was the real hooded maggot. From then on, war became the only theme in this starry sky. {"TopicId":"1137618995219595264","TopicName":"Warhammer Evil"}

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It can be appropriately mixed with some realistic plots. With the power, even if you don't eat beef, it won't be too bad.

They use a mobile phone worth $8,000 or a graphics card worth $10,000 or a computer to deceive you into paying attention to them three times in a row. Then they send a message saying that you have won a prize, but you have to pay for shipping. Thousands of prizes have been given to you, and there is still only a little shipping fee. They are just cheating you out of your money.

I think the author may not be able to grasp it... I hope the author will not be as I guessed. Come on, author.

It feels a bit like the Glory Queen next door

Aren't all eunuchs so useless? Usually someone else offers incense at the end,

The Warhammer part cannot be overstated, it is very good But the realistic part is really too novice and lack of writing skills. When it comes to Warhammer fan gatherings, the writing is very life-like and good, but when it comes to the chapters that change the world, it is really novice Suggest whether we can use a similar growth model to write about reality or write some secret society portraits around the Warhammer fan club, instead of being too urban and novice like now Come on

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It's because the opponents are too strong. Why do I feel that the protagonists' presence is getting lower and lower? All the trump cards are to bring in various reinforcements 🤔 Some Warhammer novels are too brainless to open up. I think this book is a bit too weak. Not to mention jumping on the army box to attack in the form of the Emperor Titan, it can't be written without almost playing chess pieces 😠

How should I put it? I think it would be better to be the mastermind at the beginning when people travel through time, because 4 or 5 people can't save Warhammer. I personally like the way Morningstar wrote this game to be too real.

Why is this book finished? (Probe)

No, you will become the father-in-law after pretending to be better 😅

By the way, will there be any new group members joining Warhammer World later? I feel like 6 people are not enough.

It feels really good to add a bit of realistic plot

The author now has several sex-transforming Primarch chess pieces

I feel that the writing is okay. Although the pace is a bit slow, the word count is not pure. Why is there no one?