From Murong Fu's Journey Through Song Qingshu to the Beginning of the Heavens

It feels like it has touched the ceiling of martial arts fandom. The protagonist's character changes very smoothly, and the various plots are well designed. The characteristics of the plot characters are described in such a way that there is no sense of detachment at all. When getting along with various plot characters, they are not irritating or belittling. They have their own standards for how to behave. If it is not dark or funny, it will be a misfortune. It doesn't matter to me if there is no heroine, or if I return to Tianlong and take one or more. Although I really like the princess and the girl in yellow shirt described by the author, I still feel that it would be better to have a friendship between gentlemen. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. There are still few chapters at present, food and grass, continue to maintain the absolute fairy grass.

A pretty good martial arts novel. I thought that the author arranged for the protagonist to interact with so many female characters, and it was the kind of stallion novel that was devoid of nutrition and resembled a collection of addictions. However, this book is really brilliant in the creation of female characters, each with its own characteristics, and I was very impressed after reading it. The martial arts fighting scenes are also okay, and some of the witty remarks during the interaction with Zhao Min are also good. What I don't like very much is that the protagonist is like a collector of martial arts. He practices all kinds of kung fu, and he may have practiced more than ten top-notch techniques. Since the protagonist is extremely gifted, he can quickly master the Pure Yang Kung Fu in one year, master the Dragon Subduing Palm in ten days, and master the Yang Finger in half a day. This kind of talent combined with his martial arts accumulation has already made him the second best in the world after Zhang Sanfeng. However, the actual combat performance does not match the description of the unique skills added to the body, and it feels a bit overwhelming.

Taking a comprehensive look at it, it seems that it is obviously suppressing the protagonist's combat power. The protagonist's current configuration is not much inferior to Zhang Wuji's at the peak. In addition, Murong Fu's actual combat skills should not be just as shown in the book; and the recent chapters are too embarrassing to boast about the Great Shift. It is a bit outrageous to say that the Star Shift is not as good as the Great Shift. You are completely using Zhang Wuji's top-level Great Shift to compare with the original Murong Fu's Star Shift. The opponents Zhang Wuji encountered in Yitianli were basically less than half as skilled as him, and they were all in a brutal game, but even so, he could only resolve quick attacks that could not be returned to Sandu; the most important thing is that the Great Shift of the Universe is a mental method that focuses on stimulating the potential of the human body, while the Dou Zhuanxing Shift is a technique that focuses on leveraging strength. The emphasis of the two is different. You don't have to use the shortcomings of your own skills to compare with others' advantages, right? Murong Longcheng, who was the same generation as Xiaoyaozi Zhao Kuangyin and other monsters, was still invincible with the battle of the stars. It was more because Murong Fu himself was not as good as Zhang Wuji in the original work, rather than that the battle of the stars was not as good as the world.

The author's way of handling the overwhelming plot is really uncomfortable to watch. Is this recent way of writing trying to make people jump? Qiao Feng mentioned the problem in the chapter before. After the modification, it looked okay, but now it happens again? If you don't understand, why can't you write that the protagonist's martial arts skills are almost incapable of defeating Xiao Yuanshan? If you have to write that the protagonist is not the opponent, just write it if you want. In front of it, you should also add that Duan Murong Fu learned Xiao Wuxiang Kung Fu and Pure Yang Wu Ji Kung Fu and quickly returned to the state before the loss, so you are equivalent to telling the reader that the protagonist went to Yitian and got a The results of stacking top martial arts are still not as good as the Four Heavenly Dragons. Although Xiao Yuanshan and Murong Bo are still better than Qiao Feng before killing A'Zhu and Jiumozhi who has practiced Xiaowuxiang Gong, but does your portrait like this really make the protagonist look like he is stretching his crotch? I see that many readers have asked why the problem of suppressing combat power has not been changed? Murong Fu in your novel was the first person under Zhang Sanfeng during the Yitian period, but he behaved like this when he returned to Tianlong? I have followed your book from the beginning to now, but if you insist on keeping this writing style, I don't know how long I can keep reading.

To be honest, even if your skills have not recovered, with the skills of Fighting the Stars, the Great Shift, the Nine-Yin Manual, and the Jade Girl's Heart Sutra, fighting left and right, Tai Chi, and swords, no one except the sweeping monk should be able to do anything to you; during the battle in the Chongyang Palace of the Little Dragon Girl, let alone the Golden Wheel Master, even the Bhikkhu Ji Nimoxing and others are even far behind, but their Jade Girl Su Xin swordsmanship can single-handedly resist the three Mongolian masters of Jinlun Kingdom and the five masters of Quanzhen. Compared with the Pure Yang Wuji Kung Fu of Murong Fu Dacheng in your novel, after mastering this set of kung fu, you are still afraid of not being able to defeat the two elders Xuan Ming, which makes you look like the protagonist. Like a waste; and if you give these skills to the original Murong Fu, even if the skills are still at the level of the original work, it is impossible for you to be at a disadvantage in the fight against Xiao Yuanshan like you did yesterday before you changed. Not to mention that you have almost recovered your skills. According to the position you gave to the protagonist in Yitian, in addition to sweeping Except for the Earth Monk, only Tong Lao, who was in his heyday, might have some trouble, and the others are not to be feared. Your writing method is not only suppressing combat power, you are suppressing combat performance. This way of handling gives readers a really bad impression, and you are going to become a cultivator later, so what else are you suppressing? Isn't it true that fan fiction that belittles the protagonist is simply disgusting to the readers? Now that you have written about the recovery of your skills, don't make so many distracting plots later, otherwise your blood pressure will really rise.

I personally hope to have a harem. It's such a pity that Song Qingshu can open a harem.

Wei Yixiao should give up the book if this plot happens again. You have already repeated it twice. This is an Internet article. Don't be stupid. No one will pay for your literary youth.

I chased Wei Yixiao twice but couldn't catch him, and I couldn't kill Chen Youliang either.

The skin of martial arts, the mouth of romance, this is a very typical way of writing modern TV dramas, there is not much flavor of martial arts, but the author's writing skills are sophisticated and the plot is also great, which can be regarded as bread and butter.

I've read Chapter 120 of the full subscription. It's shit. Don't read it. Abandon it.

Is the famous villain really the immortal Xiao Qiang? With his rubbish martial arts skills, Chen Youliang could make his opponent run away? Isn't it too old to be plotted by others later, and then slapped in the face to give away resources and reputation? Besides, this God of Heaven is really rubbish. He can defeat the weaklings without killing them all at once? The combined finger and the one yang finger are not the same as the physical energy. I am confident that I can kill people, but people run away? Why do you put so much poison into such a rhythm?

At least from the perspective of the Yitian chapter written so far, it is a standard old white novel without any poisonous points or subversion. It is worth reading. I feel that the author wants to write Xiaoao, Tianlong, and Yitian. It should not be a big problem.

Suppressing combat power😰

I feel that the writing is quite good. Murong Fu and Song Qingshu are both super handsome guys who play their good cards to pieces. It is quite interesting that the two worlds intersect with each other. However, the amount is still too small. The author should hurry up and write more.

It's pretty unfinished, right? Why not travel through various martial arts worlds? In order to restore the country, Xiaoyaozi, Murong Longcheng and others were resurrected. But what's written in Shaoshishan is pretty good. I voted for it monthly, and I feel like I'm looking for something after reading it.

I want to see Shura Field, where blood flows like a river 🙂

If one Poujie crosses over to another Poujie, wouldn't that be more complete?

The worlds of the worlds are poorly chosen. Each world is weaker than the previous one. As a result, all the worlds in the book went to martial arts, and each world is weaker than the last 🙂

In the past, I was extremely disgusted with time-travel novels with characters like Song Qingshu and Murong Fu, and I despised them from the bottom of my heart. But who would have thought that an inadvertent click would lead me to this book. Hey, after looking at it, I found that it suits my taste quite well. The article is fast-paced, not sloppy, and doesn't have to make up for the word count. Just because of this, it immediately hit my liking.

Occupying a floor, I think the writing is really good. Murong Fu in the original work was overwhelmed by the "restoration of the country" throughout his life, and his character was transformed into Song Qingshu's character in this environment. This kind of "Murong Fu" is really lovable 🙂🙂!

Also, everyone should not have the same speaking habits (probably the author's own oral habits). For example, many people in the book said "That's it!" It was really funny to watch. . .

In Tian Long Ba Bu, each person's martial arts has its own characteristics. Among them, Murong Fu's moves are Guang He Bo. He can basically master swords, swords, fists and palms, and most of them are unique skills belonging to the first and second-rate forces in the world. However, due to positioning reasons, he is loose in everything, but in this book, he makes up for this shortcoming. , From Wudang, from the ancient tombs, from the Beggar Clan, and from the Jiuyin Manual. You should also be able to see the Tantric Sect of the Ming Sect later on. Even after finally unifying Tianya, you can visit various sects. If you add Xiaoao later, there are more, so we will come back later. When it came to Tianlong, it really became "repay the other with his own way." I can even imagine that if there is a battle at Juxianzhuang or a Shaolin conference, Murong Fu will face the heroes of the world and say, "Fists, palms, hooks, claws, swords, guns, swords, halberds, you can use it, I will destroy it myself."

The personalities of the characters are constantly changing, progressing layer by layer, each with its own personality, lifelike and without the feeling of being in a drama! I have read Chapter 29 so far.

Author, I know you like those women in Tianlong, but can you stop going around them all the time and say that you want to marry them every other chapter. In the next chapter, the mother-in-law and mother-in-law start to show up. With such characters in Tianlong, you are in conflict with women, right? I beg you, can you write some martial arts? Save your ink on women and push them away from the main line.

I have only read Chapter 10 for now, so I can't help but say a few words. I feel that the author's writing style is good, the sentences are smooth, and the narrative is clear. The idea was not bad, it gave Murong Fu a chance to see the world beyond his original background.

It was well written before it was put on the shelf. Later, it is about anointing women, anointing women. Just do it around women

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I always feel that the psychological description is a bit toxic.

So can I read this book?

There is also too much written about psychological activities (not that writing about psychology is bad, it's just that there are too many)

Alas, it tastes a bit off after all. . .