Condor Shooting: Start with the Escort

Huo Gong Tou Tuo learned the Vajra Indestructible Magic Technique. If Zhou Yan took it away and learned it, it would be even more powerful. After all, I can easily forge bones and build the base of Jiuyang, plus the medicinal snake and Bodhisattva snake have strong blood energy.

A very good martial arts novel, great! It's just that I didn't have a good title for the book. If I didn't open it and take a closer look, the name alone would put me off. 😅 I suggest you rename it after the Jin Yong series 😁

This book suppresses the protagonist's combat power and makes the villain cheat. Including, but not limited to, the protagonist obtained Nine Suns in Shaolin but only took three volumes and deliberately did not take the last volume. Huo Gong Tutuo instead practiced the indestructible power of the Vajra. Get Ouyang Feng the Double Ninth Festival Inscription. When Li Mochou is the heroine, let Ouyang Feng lead people into the ancient tomb to steal the ancient tomb sect's martial arts. If Blood Pressure can stand these plots, then watch it.

In the original work, Ouyang Feng, who could not swim, mechanically found the pond at the back door of the ancient tomb without any information, dived and held his breath and entered the ancient tomb to find the Nine Yin Manual.

It is not easy to find a good martial arts novel, and I have seen a lot of complaints. Considering the title of the work, Escort, I think of that comic. Daoma is actually a bounty hunter, which is somewhat different from the escort in martial arts novels. Let's take Jin Yong's martial arts novels as an example. After all, they are about gold. Jin Yong's early works have not yet found their own path. Influenced by traditional martial arts, the escort system is okay. Wang Weiyang in "Book and Sword Enmity" is the founder of the Zhenyuan Escort Bureau. But this can be regarded as the pinnacle of the Escort Department in Jin Yong's martial arts. Once Jin Yong walked out of his own way, the status of the Escort Department plummeted to the bottom, which was despised by both black and white. The reason Jin Yong has already said through the mouths of Lu Feiqing and Lin Zhennan: [Lu Feiqing said: "That's what the escorts in the escort agency call out. Each escort agency has different journeys. The shoutout is to inform Lulin Road and fellow friends. In the escort agency, 70% depends on friendship and 30% depends on skill. It's someone's escort. I wanted to pick it up, but I had to let him go because of the face. This is called "fist is not as good as the head". If you go to escort, hey, you will offend many people in less than half a day. No matter how powerful you are, it will be impossible."] [In the world of martial arts, fame accounts for 20%, kung fu accounts for 20%, and the remaining 60% depends on the honor of friends in black and white. Think about it, Fuwei Escort Agency's escort cars travel across ten provinces. If they have to fight with others every time they go, how can there be so many lives to fight for? Even if we win every battle, as the saying goes: 'Kill an enemy a thousand, injure yourself eight hundred'. If there are casualties among the bodyguards, the money collected from the bodyguards alone will not be enough just to provide pensions to their families. What else will we have left? So, for those of us who work in the escort industry, we must first be familiar with people and have broad hands. The word "friendship" is more important than the skill of real swords and guns] The escort agency in Jin Yong's novels is positioned as a security guard and express delivery service company. Except for special plots, it is basically businessmen, landowners, and officials who make money from them in daily life. Once Bai Dao's identity is revealed, you have to give it to me if I don't tell you. The underworld is easier, kill, kill, and you will have the money. As for the escort agency, you have to provide services. Well done. Only with money, another point is, what is the level of real bandits in Jin Yong's novels (some plots have scenes of pretending to be bandits)? For example, in the Shooting Condor, there are the Taihu Bandits, the Yellow River Gang, etc., But the leader of the former (definitely the best in martial arts) Lu Guanying, beats Huang in martial arts. The four ghosts in the river, but they can't defeat Hou Tonghai. As for the Yellow River Gang, the leader Sha Tongtian is very good in martial arts. Oh, and Peng Lianhu. He said that he has many minions in Shanxi and Hebei. Like Sha, he is doing "business without money". But will these leaders go to rob the road, or in daily work? Self-destruction, no, it was his subordinates who did it, and it was okay to do "no business" for so long, which means that the victim was unable to take revenge. Therefore, based on this reasoning, if the Shooting Condor had an escort agency, then the escort agency would have the highest combat power, and it would be the level of the Four Ghosts of the Yellow River. I don't know if the author originally wanted to position the protagonist as a "dart man" like Daoma, who has his own beliefs and ideas, takes on tasks in life, and enjoys grudges. But he is said to be a bodyguard, but he is actually a bounty hunter, and the head bodyguard in Jin Yong's novels Escort masters can only be regarded as security guards and courier boys. They are businessmen and landowners who take things from the black and white. They are the food and clothing parents of the escort department. The white ones practice martial arts to become famous, the underworld practices martial arts to have no taboos, and the escort masters... In order to make money...

Or don't write about getting Jiuyang. You obviously have the chance to get them all, but you just pretend to be cool and don't take the fourth volume. You insist on talking about bullshit "fate". Oh, what a special code. You want to show off and get all Jiuyang. Hey~, I won't practice. Wouldn't it be more pretentious 🤫

The built-in plug-in Jade Guanyin (equivalent to an enhanced version of the Cold Jade Bed), Nine Yins and Nine Yangs, Dragon Subduing, Whirlwind Sweeping Leaves Legs, Finger Finger Magical Powers, Quanzhen Full Set of Martial Arts, Yin and Yang Reverse Blade Techniques, Liang Ziwen's Great Treasure Snake, Shaolin's Great Returning Pill, Bodhisattva Snake, Baicao Wine, Guo Jing and Yang Guo's adventures together are not as many as yours. As a result, after all these adventures, a protagonist who was beaten by Ouyang Feng was beaten by Ouyang Feng.

If this book had a perfect score of 100, I would only give it a passing score of 60 points. The maximum score would be 87 (the Hokkien dialect for "idiot" means "Northern Seven"). The score couldn't be higher! The protagonist is an incompetent clown who jumps around without killing a strong person. He retreats from battles many times. He is calm and easy before the battle, but after the battle he is in a hurry and rolling around! I didn't kill the enemy escorts, I only disabled a few, but they were still a source of trouble, so I let them live until now. There are a lot of processes to become stronger, but the actual battle is to grab the boy quickly, not to take the time to practice, and still touring the mountains and rivers. There are too many unnecessary conflict scenes, the characters will even be forcibly reduced by the author, and the small characters cannot be killed. In the first chapter of the 300th chapter, only a few capable monsters were killed. It is completely unnecessary and meaningless to involve the original characters and fabricate their life experiences, that is, Xiao Longnu. I can only say that I read the latest chapter in one breath, and I regret wasting the chapter cards reading this book that insults my eyes and my intelligence!

Originally, I saw that I first came to the ancient tomb to learn the Nine Yin Manual, and then I clicked on the comments because I deliberately refused to learn them. They were all negative comments, and then I ran out to read the posts. Sure enough, they were all negative. There was nothing to say. They all crossed my red line. I just hate watching the strength and improvement of villains. I was disgusted.

I couldn't bear it after reading it. The author would do anything to slow down the word count. If you wanted to write a longer story, it would be readable if you wrote about daily life, but the author used the simplest, crudest and most mindless method, which was to tease the villain in various ways. There will be more and more inexplicable characters as time goes on, and there will be one more villain every day. This doesn't matter. It's acceptable to be able to link up with Tianlong, but is it serious to try every means to make the villain more serious? Did the protagonist have some foresight when he traveled through time? Is it more difficult than the villain to obtain magical powers? Is he a villain who has nine yin and nine yang, the sunflowers are fighting, and the north and the dark have no phase? A master will never die, but after being injured for two days, guess what? Got Jiuyin upgraded! Jiuyang has been upgraded! Grab the Dou Zhuan Xing Shi upgrade! Cut the cultivation sunflower and it will be done instantly! Brother, just write one or two like that, Ouyang Feng, Ouyang Ke, Gongsun Zhi, Yang Kang, Huo Gong Toutuo, the self-written Ding Xiaosheng, I heard that there are also Mongolian villains in the future, all of them follow this routine? Then I can only say that the author is completely unable to control the rhythm, and can only endlessly strengthen the villain and drag out the plot. According to the way you write it, will the subsequent plot wait until the protagonist has upgraded to a certain level, all the villains will work together, communicate with each other, and everyone will be able to practice Nine Yin, Nine Yang, Beiming, Wuxiang, and then besiege the protagonist?

Can I get a refund? I died of poison and abandoned the book.

I vomited when I saw Xiduhuishui take away the Nine Yin Manual and show it to me. Xidu has never known water, and the secret passage in the ancient tomb is not a small ditch. There are dozens of people who go to the back mountain of Quanzhen Sect. Do they really think that all Quanzhen Sect members are blind? Don't be so reckless if you want to stumble the protagonist.

I have learned everything from swords, guns, swords, halberds, axes, knives and forks to software, and the result is that I can control everything. I still want to use guns and swords at the same time. Has the author ever seen a gun? How can I use it with one hand? And if you use all eighteen kinds of weapons, you will be powerful? It's good to be able to practice both guns and swords. I want to try a little of everything. Do you think I'm eating vegetables? It's really a waste of my time and money to drive high and low.

The most hateful thing is that the author has shielded the male protagonist's psychology and feelings. He clearly knows that both Huang and Li are interesting. In the early stage, the author forced the male protagonist not to know, and in the later period, the author forced the male protagonist not to express his opinion. The psychological description is also completely blocked. Do you want to be alone? Choose one of the two, or both? No! It's like the author has carved a curse mark on the male protagonist's mind, forcing him not to think about these things. It's so disgusting.

Suppressing the protagonist's combat power, crazily giving opportunities and plug-ins to the villain, a supporting character Hou Tonghai can live for hundreds of chapters, is he your father? Wherever the protagonist goes, the villain goes wherever they want, and they always attack passively. A pot of hodgepodge, Bei Ming Shen Gong, and Dou Zhuan Xing Shi have all come out, but they are still given to others. The ancient tomb is like a toilet. A group of villains can enter and leave whenever they want. If you want to write with depth, do you have the strength? Eating like a fan, I fall into the trap of being a literary youth. I can't understand the story of rivers and lakes, or the struggle for hegemony. I want to write a group portrait, but when I gather it's like shit, when I'm scattered, it's like shit. What age are you still using this routine?

I originally read the comment section only if it was said to be well written, but I was persuaded to quit after the first chapter. Let's leave aside the writing style, but the plot says that the escort does not cause trouble when he is an escort, but as soon as he meets Li Mochou, his small head dominates the big head. Oh, that's not right. It would be logical to say that it's because of sexual desire, but the author writes that the protagonist is not used to the Four Ghosts of the Yellow River bullying women, so he insists on standing up for himself. Acting bravely without any purpose directly destroyed the character of the protagonist, the bodyguard.

1. The author loves to use some idioms and sentences that are incomprehensible and do not convey the meaning, such as: grass snake gray line, memory bluebird, etc., Just use it once when there is nothing wrong. The key is completely unrelated to the plot and the text, especially the memory bluebird is back. Everyone will use such a sentence in their memories, either illiterate or AI polished. 2. Character stereotypes, no character arc, the villain is bad. If he meets the protagonist, he will target him without any basis and purpose. He will not stop for no reason. Even if he spends all his wealth to collude with gold and people will be killed in the next second, he will target the protagonist first. The protagonist is also a pure 🐢. Whether it is a crisis or being targeted, as long as it is dealt with at the time, it will be treated as if nothing happened. Without a sense of crisis, the danger will not be eliminated in advance, and the life will continue to be mindless. 3. The handkerchief is comparable to Superman's black-framed glasses. As long as the protagonist wants to, he can tie the handkerchief on his face at any time. Whether it is killing, spying at night, or protecting, the villain will instantly become 100 points smarter, and no one will recognize him no matter what he does. 4. The protagonist's image has no depth. He is clearly a time traveler but is no different from the natives. In order to cater to the theme of escorts, he stays in the escort agency for no reason. The Nine Yin Scriptures, Nine Yang Divine Skills, and Innate Skills are not as important as sending escorts 🙂. There is no inner activity, no character arc, and he feels like an NPC protagonist, fighting for justice. Justice, in order to do things for the country and the people, he practices the Xixi Kung Fu. He is a real plot character who will teach him every move and a half when he meets the protagonist. He obviously lacks top-level Kung Fu. However, after entering the ancient tomb and seeing the Nine Yin Sutra, he especially praised it and said "I don't recite all the Nine Yin Sutras, only take what you need." You asked me, what aspect do you not need? He's so bad that no one can beat him. He just pretends to be unbeatable. When it comes to being beaten by anyone, the combat power of this book is a mystery. The protagonist is as good as 50-50. No matter what stage he encounters the enemy, he is on the same level. After eating snake gall and drinking precious snake blood, his internal strength has greatly increased for ten years. As a result, the villain's combat power has also increased for some reason. He still fights back and forth with the protagonist. After reading it, I just feel that the wrinkles in my brain have been smoothed and I gave up thinking instantly.

It's a novel that starts high and goes low. The escort agency seems to be written to advance the main plot, but the main plot is very boring. The protagonist's image is flat. I don't know why he keeps muddling through. It's always a cycle of being framed and solving challenges. There is no specific definition of the hierarchical concept of Kung Fu. He is in a state where he cannot beat the strong but can easily beat the weak. He is addicted to collecting Kung Fu and has not become stronger after practicing. The plot has been in a state where the protagonist can do whatever he wants for a long time, but the readers are not interested in the plot, and the emotional side lines have ups and downs similar to that of a stock trading article. The protagonist has no concept of brothers, friends and guests. He is a brother to everyone. The relationship diagram is divided into two types: enemies and brothers. From the logic of the character, I don't know why he is always in the escort agency. I don't know whether he is making money as an escort or something else. He only thinks about being a escort agency and the boss, but the readers do not have any sense of resonance.

It was pretty good in the early stages, but later on I really lost my temper just to suppress my fighting power. From the Eight Tribes of the Heavenly Dragon to the Divine Eagle, all the six-meridian divine swords that have been passed down have only one yang finger, the Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms have all been lost and were made up by Hong Qigong himself, and in the book, all the small phaseless skills have appeared in the book. Also, martial arts is not additive. Learning one skill will make you stronger. Nine Yin and Nine Yang innate skills do not take into account the problem of conflict and fusion. The protagonist learns one more skill and the villain learns one more. If the protagonist strengthens, the villain will either strengthen a little or drop a stronger one. The four skills of the Condor are about to become more than a dozen. Why don't so many people come to the Huashan sword debate? Is it because I don't have long legs?

The author is a bit ideal. Of course, how can a gun and a sword be used at the same time? A gun must be used with both hands to be powerful. Does a pig's foot have three hands?

There are more and more poison spots, and the pig's feet keep suppressing the fighting power, and he is about to die from the poison.

I really like you to write more about Yellow River Ghost, Baicao Weng, Master Lingzhi, Little Box, and Nemo Star, not to mention your favorite Taizu Changquan, Yue Family Sanshou, Yang Family Big Spear, Quanzhen Big Sword, please write more, so that I don't have to subscribe to a chapter. 😁😁😄😄

In the later stage, it completely collapsed. It was just a nest of dolls🤢

I thought it was food before, but I didn't expect it was just food to lure you into a trap. If you can unsubscribe, complain and report, I will give you a one-click three-way link.

What I wrote at the beginning was not bad, but I started to lose track of what I was writing in the middle period. As I wrote over and over again, it was just a group of people beating each other up, and the people basically didn't change. In the end, no one could be beaten to death. The villain always used the same words, hit and run, and then changed places and repeated endlessly...

What, your martial arts world also has the law of aggregation of extraordinary characteristics, right? The world is so big, why can the protagonist encounter villains wherever he goes? The story line can be summarized as follows: the protagonist encounters the villain, the protagonist fights with the villain, the protagonist is injured, the protagonist heals, the protagonist gains enlightenment and upgrades, the villain finds an opportunity and upgrades together, and then the protagonist encounters the villain again, and then this process repeats NNNNNNNNNNN times

Mainly focusing on the description of the newly revised version. After all, there are three combinations - revision - new revision. There will definitely be more patches as time goes by, but there are still bugs. [Huang Rong] Chapter 21: But Huang Rong is still only fifteen. [Yang Kang] Chapter 15 Guo Jing and Yang Kang married Jinlan: The two talked about their age, Guo Jing was born a month earlier. [Mu Nianci] In the eighth chapter, Yang Tiexin lived in Hetang Village after being injured. Mu Nianci was not born long ago. At this time, Li Ping fled to Mobei and Guo Jing was not yet born. [Tuo Lei, Hua Zheng] Chapter 3: Tuo Lei was only nine years old at this time. Chapter 5: The little girl Hua Zheng is only four years old. Guo Jing was six years old at this time. [Lu Guanying] Chapter 13: A young man of eighteen or nineteen years old came to greet him. [Cheng Yaojia] Chapter 15: A beautiful woman of eighteen or nineteen years old is reading under the lamp. [Yin Zhiping] Chapter 5: Although the disciple is one year older, Senior Brother Yang entered the profession two years earlier than the disciple. [Silly Girl] The first chapter: The girl was five or six years old; his little daughter who was five or six years old (Guo Jing was born the following year). Chapter 23: A girl of seventeen or eighteen years old walked out of the inner hall. [Feng Heng, Mei Chaofeng] Chapter 19 Huang Rong thought to herself: Just because my mother is extremely smart, can she only live to be twenty? Chapter 10 Mei Chaofeng's Memoirs: My wife is very young, the same age as me, and both of us are monkeys; my wife is a few months younger than me, and her birthday is in October. [Qu Lingfeng, Chen Xuanfeng, Lu Chengfeng, Feng Mofeng] Chapter 10 Mei Chaofeng's Memoir: I am almost fifteen years old this year... Senior Brother is thirty years old, twice as big as me; Second Senior Brother has thick eyebrows and big eyes, and his whole body is sinewy, two years older than me; Senior Brother Qu is more than ten years older than me, Junior Brother Lu is two years younger than me, Junior Brother Wu and Junior Brother Feng are even younger. In my heart, they are all children. "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" Chapter 15: Especially Brother Feng Mofeng, whose surname is Feng, is the youngest; in fact, he is not very old, only about fifty years old. [Ouyang Ke] Chapter 8: It seems that he is in his mid-thirties. Chapter 21: However, Huang Rong is still only fifteen years old, while Ouyang Ke is already over thirty years old. There is almost twenty years difference in the time when they studied art. [Yinggu] Chapter 29: She is only about forty years old. In Chapter 31, when Qiu Qianren injured Gu Ying's young son, Yideng recalled: She was only eighteen or nineteen years old at that time. Chapter 30 Zhu Ziliu recalled: During the sword debate at Mount Huashan, everyone showed off their unique abilities. Master Chongyang admired my master's Yiyang finger very much. The next year, he and his junior brother came to Dali to visit my master and learn from each other. Chapter 31 Yideng recalled that he did not summon Concubine Liu Guifei for more than half a year. One night when he went to visit her, he heard a cry coming from the palace, the roof was covered with frost and wind, and he fell seriously ill. Yideng suffered from this illness for more than half a year. After he recovered, he tried his best to deal with it and no longer thought about it. More than two years later, Yinggu's son was injured by Qiu Qianren. [Seven Eccentrics of Jiangnan] The second time when Guo Jing was born: He (Ke Zhen'e) was in his thirties, with a sharp mouth and sharp cheeks, a gray face, and his eyes were white. He was blind; the man who picked up firewood (Nancy Yan) was in his twenties; the woman (Han Xiaoying) was about seventeen or eighteen years old. [Qiu Chuji] Chapter 1: When Yang and Guo took a closer look at the Taoist, they saw that he was in his thirties (Guo Jing was born the following year). "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" Chapter 24: Uncle Qiu is also nearly seventy years old (Yang Guo is nineteen years old at this time). So when Guo Jing was eighteen, Qiu Chuji was about fifty. [Huang Yaoshi] In the tenth chapter, Mei Chaofeng recalled that Huang Yaoshi was only about ten years older than Qu Lingfeng; Qu Lingfeng said that Huang Yaoshi was the youngest among the five talents. "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" Chapter 15: Yang Guo was under twenty years old at that time, but Huang Yaoshi was nearly eighty years old. [Zhou Botong, Hong Qigong, Ouyang Feng, Yideng] In the twelfth chapter, Huang Rong thought that Hong Qigong was not much older than Bhikkhu Chuji, and thought: My father is not too old, so he is just like Hong Qigong and others. Chapter 16 Zhou Botong said: Mr. Hong Beggar is about the same age as me, and I don't know who is older and who is younger. He also said that he is not much older than Ma Yu and Qiu Chuji. Chapter 10 Zhou Botong in Mei Chaofeng's Eyes: The person talking to the master was a middle-aged man with a long beard, older than the master. Chapter 34 of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes": Although Zhou Botong is not a Taoist, he has learned the Taoist teachings of healing and maintaining health, so he is still in good spirits even when he is over ninety years old. Yang Guo thought to himself that although I only have one arm, I am still in my prime, and I can't beat this nearly centenarian old man even though he has taken more than a hundred moves... (Yang Guo was thirty-five years old at this time.) Chapter 16 Zhou Botong recalled Ouyang Feng's sutra grab: The enemy is about the same age as me. In Chapter 33, Hong Qigong said about Yideng: He is already fifty or sixty years old. [Qiu Qianren, Qiu Qianzhang] In the thirteenth chapter, Qiu Qianzhang appeared as an "old man with a gray beard." Lu Guanying thought that he was only slightly older than his father. Huang Rong even said bluntly: "This white beard pretends to be old-fashioned, but in fact, I don't think he is really old." Chapter 28: Qiu Qianren practiced Kung Fu diligently. When he was twenty-four years old, he found a talent that was better than his master. The following year, Shangguan Clan leader passed away, and the title of leader of the Iron Palm Clan was passed on to him on his deathbed... Qiu Qianren, however, devoted himself wholeheartedly to martial arts. The more he practiced martial arts, he traveled around the world, and his reputation as Iron Palm was powerful in the martial arts world. At that time, Wang Chongyang and others invited him to participate in the Huashan sword debate. Qiu Qianren had not yet mastered the magical skill of Iron Palm and knew that he was no match for Wang Chongyang, so he refused to attend the meeting. "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" Chapter 30: The girl Ci En remembers in her heart was her daughter before she married Gongsun Zhi. She was twenty at the time. Although she knew that her brother was a monk, the brother she remembered in her heart was a brave and brave young man. Qiu Qianchi said in Chapter 19 of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes": "That happened more than 20 years ago. My two brothers had an argument and started arguing... I left Tiezhang Peak in anger and never went back." [Others] Among the four brothers of Yu, Qiao, Geng and Du, "Yu" is about forty years old, and "Du" is about forty years old; the masters of the Zhao Palace only mention that Hou Tonghai is about forty years old; the ages of the other main characters are not mentioned. Using the data in the order of factual calculation > narration > acquaintance's narration > stranger's estimation, combined with the divine eagle, and a few modifications to increase self-consistency, then the ages of the others when Guo Jing went south to compete at the age of 18 were roughly: Huang Rong: 15 years old Hua Zheng: 16 years old Lu Guanying: 18 years old? (I really don't know how to modify this. I can only forcefully understand that Lao Lu got married and gave birth to him as soon as his legs were broken and thrown out of Peach Blossom Island...) Yang Kang: 18 years old (＜Guo Jing) Mu Nianci: 18 years old (＞Guo Jing) Cheng Yaojia: 18-19 years old Yin Zhiping : 19 years old Too Lei: 21 years old Silly Gu: 24 years old Feng Mofeng: 30 years old Lu Chengfeng: 33 years old Ouyang Ke: 35 years old Mei Chaofeng: 35 years old (Qu Lingfeng is fifteen years older than Mei Chaofeng, Chen Xuanfeng is two years older than Mei Chaofeng, Feng Heng is a few months younger than Mei Chaofeng, and Wu Gangfeng is four years younger than Mei Chaofeng, both deceased) Han Xiaoying: 35-36 years old Yinggu: 38 years old Qiu Qianren: 48-49 years old (Qiu Qianzhang is the same) Qiu Chuji: 49-50 years old Ke Zhene: 49 -51 years old Huang Yaoshi: 60 years old Zhou Botong, Hong Qigong, Ouyang Feng: 61-63 years old (Wang Chongyang was nearly twenty years older than Zhou Botong, deceased) Yideng: 62-64 years old (>Zhou Botong) If you have questions and different opinions, you are naturally right. ____________________________________________PS: Add some divine figures Let's take the newly revised version as the benchmark, and move forward, when Guo Jing went south at the age of 18 Hong Ling Bo: 1-2 years old Xiao Longnu: 3 years old Yeluqi: 4 years old Huo Dou: 15 years old Li Mochou: 15 years old Gongsun Zhi: 25-26 years old Qiu Qianchi: 28-29 years old Jinlun Imperial Master: 38 years old

I'm curious if the author doesn't read the comments. The fighting power is suppressed, and the villains are upgraded accordingly. Huang Yaoshi and Hong Qigong were seriously injured by Ouyang Feng in a sneak attack, and they still fight one against one later. The minions never kill, and they don't learn all the skills. Tianlong martial arts appears one after another. Before the protagonist, there were only five masters at the five-level level, and more than a dozen protagonists came. No matter how serious the injuries are, the protagonist and the villain will be healed within a month. From then on, the protagonist and the villain both suffered losses. The protagonist and the villain both met by chance, and then both sides suffered losses.

It is suggested that it would be more interesting for the protagonist to learn similar martial arts from other novels. The martial arts of the Five Ultimate Skills are too monotonous and repetitive. You can refer to the martial arts of other martial arts, such as Huang Yi's, which is more interesting and has a higher purpose, such as the prairie fire spear technique, the Nine Shao Fixed Sound Sword combined with sound skills, the Rain Covering Sword learned from water, etc. There are also theoretical aspects of swordplay, the seal of immortality, and the moon in the well.

It's a good idea to have a new fanfic that doesn't completely follow the existing story line. Also, there are too few pure martial arts that can be read now (excluding Zhutian). I really want to read it and cherish it. The author insists on it. I will subscribe after it is released.