People Are in Yitian, and Swords Come Out of Emei

The writing of Escort is actually very good! Very ancient martial arts style! It's just that the mid- and post-processing is really bad! Crazy suppress the protagonist's combat power and infinitely improve the villain's strength! Magic skills are flying all over the place, and the villains all have a few of them! And it's hard for the protagonist to reach the sky by killing a villain! Always on passive defense! Just use lime powder without thinking! There are also a lot of mindless plots, such as the supporting character antagonizing the protagonist despite knowing that he is not easy to mess with, wanting to kill him if they disagree, hating the protagonist for no reason, etc. There are too many enemies who forcefully create conflicts. There are also a lot of original characters appearing inexplicably, all of them are comparable to the five unique ones. The most important thing is that every now and then, a bunch of masters encounter each other and fight. Is China that small? Three bedrooms and one living room? All the masters in the world who can meet each other by chance gathered together... The most outrageous thing is that no villain was killed even though they were fighting life and death. The villain was injured and recovered in the blink of an eye. Then the scene was changed and the same group of people continued to fight, wireless nesting dolls. In the middle and later stages, it became a drama where the villains go around grabbing magical powers. They grab here and there, and the protagonist wanders around like a moron, but in the end, the villains still succeed. The most exaggerated thing is that these villains learned magical skills in a blink of an eye, without having to practice hard, and their combat power soared instantly... I hope the author of this new book will not repeat the same mistakes. I think it will be more promising after removing those unreasonable plots.

The poor nuns will be exterminated, and you will be given the title "Thanos"

This introduction is carefully written, and every word is filled with flaws. In order to make the contrast neat, I randomly found words and added them to the top. It's better to write the sentences in the context smoothly, and then pursue the contrast. Don't be too picky if you have nothing to do.

It's okay for the protagonist to gradually upgrade under your writing, but every time you fight against an enemy, as soon as you make progress, you will sneak attack on the enemy, and then injure the enemy so hard that you can see the intestines. Then the enemy is shocked and the enemy runs away. If you change the description, the intestines will be injured every time, and then the intestines will be green every time, and then the enemy will be able to escape every time. I am really convinced.

I hope this book will not always let Cheng Kun go. Forget Ouyang Feng. Although his character is not good, he is still a master. Cheng Kun is just disgusting. There are not enough villains. There are also twelve treasure tree kings. You can also add some masters from Mongolia. It would be great to have a fight with Zhang Sanfeng.

Villains with names and surnames or who are slightly elite and weird can't be killed even if they don't die in the hands of Miejie. They can always escape in the end. Just don't call the sword out of Emei Those who practice mercy swordsmanship, just say the sword out of Shaolin Guess why it is called extinction Everything else is fine. There is nothing wrong with it. The villain can't die. It's outrageous. They are the ones who beat them back and forth.

I have written so much, the martial arts are messy, the characters are messy, and it is too far away from the original work.

I don't understand why among many martial arts fans, one doesn't dare to kill and the other doesn't dare to kill? If you can't beat him, forget it. If you can beat him, you don't dare to kill him. Damn it.

The author is already immersed in his art. The original work is that Xiao Zhao went to Guangmingding to steal the Great Shift of the Universe and gave it to Grandma Jinhua. Now it has been changed to the Beggar Gang. He stole the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon, right? 😜

Are there any real readers?

This author likes to add settings by himself too much, and adds them very abruptly Basically the process is like this: The protagonist suspects that someone belongs to a certain force And then suspecting it is equal to Yes means there Yes means it has a particularly big impact It has always been like this from Baishang to Tangmen to Murong And it is added in large quantities and quickly Do many people like this way of writing?

There are too many original characters, which greatly affects the sense of substitution.

In order to comment, I went to subscribe to a book for 11 points. After reading the first few chapters of this book, I can basically judge that it is an article about AI. The characters are too mechanical.

When I read Chapter 11, I felt so dry. I just want to complete a few more poems and a few more idioms. Then I realized, wasn't this written by AI?

Who is Yamamoto Wuyou, and why is he still infiltrating the Japanese?

The Escort book didn't last past chapter 10, but this time it lasted through chapter 20 and it still smelled like an old thing.

It feels like the protagonist of The Escort has a different name.

Many fans who write about Yitian Slaying the Dragon like to go to Emei, but in fact, starting from the era of extinction, they only accept female disciples

Can you write less messy limericks?

I have been chasing the protagonist Dacheng intermittently, and I feel that I should be invincible. The results tell me that I am currently ranked fourth at most. If I can't write the plot of a martial arts novel, I have to suppress the combat power. It is really poisonous The current configuration of the protagonist: Dacheng Jiuyang + Jiuyin True Intention + Great Shift of the Universe + Super - Eighteen Palms of the Dragon (Fusion) Combined with the power of Baihong Palm) + Hua Gong Dafa + Jade Girl Su Xin Sword Technique + Peach Blossom Island Martial Arts + Emei Martial Arts + Bajiquan, Tai Chi and other modern fighting techniques Zhang Sanfeng is a god, let alone mentioning it, I think he ranks first, and there are actually two Taoist priests above the protagonist A hundred-damage Taoist priest, a suit of ice true energy was killed by the Nine Yang God Gong Tianke, I really can't think of adding any martial arts skills to the configuration of the protagonist There is also an old eunuch in red, needless to say, he is a Sunflower Book. He can be transformed into a mortal, and can reverse the yin and yang, and turn a man into a woman. I also recognized it Anyway, it seems that the combat power is completely broken. I understand that I want to create a master villain, but I really can't figure out what kind of villain would use this configuration of the protagonist In the end, I felt that it was better to let Baishang cut the Sunflower Book of Practice. The ice energy turned the extreme yin into the extreme yang, and then transformed into Baishang Taoist Sister, I feel that it is more reasonable than now

I followed this book and the Yitian Kongtong Zhang Sect at the same time, and the characters in my mind were all confused. Alas, is there anyone like me?

Let me ask you a question. Just say that Pig's Foot is just 15 years old. The author arranges for Pig's Foot to go mountain training every day. Do you think it's not against the rules?

This paragraph is a description of the protagonist just getting angry and walking around Zhou Tian. It is obviously that the Qi is flowing through Ren and Du's two meridians. Doesn't it mean that one has to have a certain foundation to open up Ren and Du's two meridians and then his power will be greatly increased? Why does it look like he is using the Ren and Du's two meridians to go through Little Zhou Tian to cultivate his internal strength

Take the time to pick it up, otherwise it will be too stressful.

Don't update too late. Only the great god Platinum likes to update in the middle of the night.

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Yitianli Mingjiao is also a hero who is determined to expel the Mongols. This is completely portrayed as a villain.

Rare martial arts food! Don't be sick or slow, don't be greedy or resentful, reading continuously is like drinking nectar, knowing that you are writing with your heart. It is very tiring and hard, but can you still add more?

The fighting is very exciting. No other martial arts book has such good fighting. Why doesn't the author write an original plot?

Zhang Sanfeng will definitely be able to save him, but it won't work if anyone else comes, and it won't be of any use if Yang Guo's descendants come.