Sharing Feelings and Cultivating Immortality: the Road to Immortality

Isn't it imagination? I want to see you in action. I'm not here to write about underworld cultivators and urban pretentiousness.

The subject matter is not good. It would be interesting if the cultivator of immortality was a man, but it would be too ridiculous for a man and a woman to empathize with each other. Unless you just feel that the interoperability actually has no impact, it's okay, even if you are injured, you can interoperate. That would be too fake. What to do after giving birth, and what about Geji Geji? , Ga Yi Dao ended up with no eunuch?

I feel like the immortal cultivator can be changed to be a male, and then the protagonist can be changed to an immortal cultivator. As for the person on Earth being transformed into a sidekick, when the people on Earth and the cultivators established this super sense, the people on Earth were instantly refined by the protagonist, and the protagonist got the golden finger and the Earth.

The introduction is very attractive and gives the impression that it has a lot of imagination, but the result actually looks very average. I can't say it's not good, but it feels like a lie anyway. The gap is too big and I was deceived by the introduction.

The general has come to cultivate immortality😁

The current perception - the plot arrangement of the online novel in ancient times.

If you have a complete outline, or if it is popular, there is no need to change it. After all, it will be popular, so why bother to change it. You can read about cluster heavy artillery bombing and killing immortal cultivators. There is a problem with your positioning. The introduction at the beginning made me feel that your book may be the prototype of his book, because when it comes to scientific power, the two are combined. As a result, I only saw the old novels, which are equivalent to replicas of that kind of novels Readers should hope to see you use your own power to change another world and your own world, because the Chinese system as you know is a collective worldview. Even if some people don't think so, education is systematic, do you understand what I mean? Even if many people say they don't care on the surface, at least that's the case for me. I still have to go to war when I should be a soldier. There is nothing I can do about it. Of course, it may be because my ancestors have also been on the battlefield.

{"NickName":"Zhan Yang himself","UserId":304663391} Let's write another historical novel about a female protagonist, eunuch

It's quite interesting at the beginning, but it smells like a treasure from ancient times at the end. The plot develops too fast, and there's no foreshadowing at all. I'm worried about how to write it in the future.

Isn't it funny, taking a concubine? What the hell?

It's okay to buy rocks, but the protagonist's zig-zag behavior makes it hard for me to subscribe.

I've read more than 70 chapters, why don't I have a single spell?

Is it G? I knew it was hard to write

There seems to be a book with a similar theme

The introduction made my eyes light up. The first chapter is quite satisfactory, but the rest is really eye-catching.

This is. . . . . Finally just because? 😠

So, give an ending? Cut it directly?