Qi Practitioner, but Relies on Merit to Practice

With your writing style and spirit, why should you write about the entertainment industry? Does it deserve it?

There are more than 60 chapters. It doesn't matter if you can't see the slightest trace of the entertainment industry. There is also a massage club. With the author's procrastination, there are not 50-60 chapters. This crappy club will definitely not be opened.

Brother, I suggest you change the title of your book. Readers attracted by entertainment articles are basically impetuous. They come here for the flowers and flowers of the entertainment industry. They really don't have the patience to read Qi Qi theory bit by bit, especially since you have written so much without seeing any trace of the entertainment industry. I think your data should also give you real feedback. It's not that your book is not good, but that you gave it the wrong name. No matter how good your writing is, half of it must be scrapped first.

Chapter 84, and I haven't entered the entertainment industry yet. .

It's really borderline. Chapter 18 has not yet touched the edge of the entertainment industry.

Let's change the name, [The Rebirth of a Qi Practitioner: I Massage an Old Man in the Park]

It's not charged, so why is it so stupid? You can get two chapters out of a green onion, but I skipped ten chapters of the main plot and it still didn't move! It's all water!

The writing is good, and it has the leisurely feel of an old man. But the pace is very slow, and many people may not be used to this. I won't have the patience to read on, like someone who's been writing about my feelings about the environment for a long time but not about events. To put it bluntly, pick people

This kind of writing technique is rare, the form is scattered, the spirit is not scattered, it is specious, and it is even rarer to write well. In addition, I feel that the title of the book is very appropriate. He is really a marginal person in entertainment. The eighty-odd chapters have nothing to do with the entertainment industry. Haha🙂

The writing is so good, it is comparable to Lu Xun. You, the author, were born in the wrong era, otherwise you would definitely be a great writer. Your literary talents are not used for writing online articles. The Nobel Prize in Literature is just a pheasant award without your participation.

I read Chapter 10 at the beginning and probably didn't see any information about the protagonist.

The idea is good, but the plot is too dragging. There shouldn't be many people who can pull it in and watch it patiently! When going to plant vegetables, if you want to be alive, shouldn't you consider transforming deserts or saline-alkali lands? That is a great merit!

It's a bit supernatural. When an old man becomes young, it will definitely cause trouble. How can life be so peaceful?

However, are practicing insights and talking to oneself too detailed?

At present, it is all water, just like in the ocean. After these thousands of kilometers or hundreds of chapters, we have to wait to get to the point.

Read. On top of food and grass. It was discovered too early.

The writing style is quite fresh, but in some places it is easy to see that the author lacks knowledge. First, most modern people have some problems with their spinal joints. People with a little more expertise can tell that there is a problem just by looking at their body posture. From the beginning, it is a bit depressing to think that the protagonist is a liar from an outsider's perspective; second, the plot of more than 220 chapters where the official observes the protagonist throwing dice is really stupid, with too many flaws to mention. It can be seen that the author has no knowledge of probability in high school mathematics, let alone understanding what a chaotic system is.

As the top brother on the list, I just want to say that you should be more more . I steal some monthly tickets from other places to give them to you. It is not easy. If you don't do more, are you worthy of me?

It is very detailed, but too detailed. The author may be a girl. I don't know many male authors who can write in such detail.

Evaluation, suppose a book has three climaxes. This book spreads the three climaxes evenly in each chapter. The content of excitement in each chapter is very low, but you can't say that it doesn't have it.

Is this right? This book is absolutely magical, but why is it ranked so low?

The writing is very good and has a sense of life. But I would also like to give the author a piece of advice. Some of the supporting characters have too much psychological activity and are a bit watery.

After this little girl's spinal problem is cured, the senior leaders will offer the protagonist to her.

Is there any useful information in the latest update? Is it still so watery?

Squeeze out half of the water. Maybe my grades will be better

How many chapters have there been no protagonists 🙂

Ahhhhhhh, the plot is too slow

As a monthly ticket sponsor, I request the author to follow quickly and more to advance the progress and speed up! ! !

As a monthly ticket financier, I ask you to pay moremore. Is it enough for me to pay so little?

If you speed up the pace a little bit and write 20,000 words a day, I guarantee you will be in the top 10 of the monthly vote list.