Sixteen Kingdoms of Iron Horses and Frozen Rivers

To traverse the 16 kingdoms, one must stop the cycle of killing. Kill both barbarians and Han Chinese; rape, plunder, and looting are the main themes. As long as you don't push too far, you're a wise ruler. All surrendered monarchs and their direct descendants must be killed.

The writing style is fine, but the writing method is a bit superfluous. Take the resurrection trope, for example. You could have simply made it a case of being knocked unconscious on the battlefield, instead of making it a confirmed death. Resurrection is fine, but don't let others witness it. Time travel is just a background element; it doesn't give you the right to write whatever you want.

Class contradictions are greater than ethnic contradictions; how to use class contradictions to overcome ethnic contradictions depends on the protagonist's political ability.

If you're going to rebel, do it now. What use is an official position? Having troops is what truly matters. Who wants to see you idly loafing around in Chang'an? Sooner or later you'll turn against us. What good are a few members of the Murong clan? There are too many rebels, not to mention the Qiang Yao clan. Are you going to start a rebellion under the pretext of avenging Fu Jian? You might as well bring in someone from the Liu family to restore the Han dynasty.

Taking advantage of the decline of the Later Yan, the Tuoba clan gradually encroached upon Bing and Ji, waging bloody wars for over thirty years before finally pacifying China. In the beginning, the high officials and regional governors were all former tribal chiefs, and although they employed members of the Zhao and Wei clans, they often exterminated them due to suspicion.

What can someone who is 175cm tall and weighs 65kg do? They're so frail.

If the story continues like this, with the protagonist going to rescue Fu Jian, are you planning to prolong the life of the Former Qin dynasty? Then, find a master to coerce the emperor and command the feudal lords, and finally usurp the throne when the time is right. The Former Qin wasn't legitimate; if the story continues like this, the novel will lose its appeal.

The time span was too short; so much was accomplished in just two days.

Just shut it down already. No results, no one's watching. What's the point of single-player?

Shennong arrived, bringing grain supplies to the Sixteen Kingdoms – a sight to behold.