Sir, Please Calm Down

If a male enemy is captured, he will never survive. If a female enemy's weapons are not used internally, their joints will not be removed.

Readers look down on you, but you don't live up to expectations

Author, give me some advice. Your writing is very awkward. A lady can be kicked out by the guard when she meets her. This is almost never seen in Jin Yong and Gu Long's novels. It's too cliche. And why do you say that there is something wrong with a lady who doesn't feel sad after her husband dies? If a woman, and her daughter, is not tough, she will be eaten to pieces. You can just rely on this to say that there is something wrong with the wife who you are so close to. You know her personally, and you feel you are righteous if you give her a token.

After reading a few chapters, it is completely written in the female channel style, and the dialogue between the male protagonist and the princess can be squeezed out. Moreover, everything is left to passers-by to explain. If something goes wrong, just "Have you heard?" It's still a low-quality female channel.

The rhythm and style at the beginning were okay, and it was comfortable to watch. After the plot of the Lin family, it was highlighted that one should be wary of each other, and no one told the truth, which made it very dragging to watch. More than 50 chapters have been published, and there are no comments. . . Let's stop testing the poison here. Come back to see if there will be more updates later.

I seem to have seen this plot routine somewhere. Isn't it because he came to take advantage of his perfect attendance and then ran away

Drunk, there is a kind of beauty from ten years ago 😥

Peach Blossom Eyes appeared dozens of times in the first ten chapters... Are there no other adjectives?

I haven't seen Mrs. Lin for several chapters. The pace is too slow.

It's so boring. Tiantianshui. The main plot is not moving forward at all. I don't know what I'm writing.

The plot is really too slow. There is no real progress in more than a hundred chapters.

Each scene is written in too much detail and should be divided into sections. Less important scenes are simply described and a few strokes are enough.

It's boring to use a character like Lu Xinghe to fill up the word count. It's all about skipping. The water character count routine is too old.

After reading it, it turned out to be 450,000 words? It's hard to imagine that a 450,000-word novel is still being written in Xinshou Village, with almost zero plot progress. It's no wonder that Shui is like this.

The author ID and the male protagonist's name have given you away 😜