Don't Be a Prodigal Son

You can change the title of the book to whatever you want, and then you can remove the label from Invincible

The protagonist of this book is finally not the kind of rookie who has just entered the world. He is very powerful at the beginning. I really don't have the patience to read those slow-burning rookie growth stories. Moreover, this book is definitely the best book I have ever read (as of the latest chapter). The heroine disguises herself as a mask, the heroine calls 🛏️ to others, and the passerby villains have lustful eyes when they see the heroine. There are no such surprises. It can be seen that the author definitely takes the harem readers seriously.

This kind of overflowing writing style is really unbearable. Withdraw it.

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Everything else is okay, but the plot is as humorous and retarded as the previous book, and the protagonist/writing style is a bit greasy like the previous book.

Please write more in this book, don't leave any regrets like the previous one, where Jiu'er ended before you could write much, and you need to control the quantity and quality of the heroines.

The pacing of the first few pictures is not good, and it is especially not recommended to jump to the timeline; secondly, the emphasis on killing the emperor at the beginning is too high, and there are issues with the heroine's role.

Is there an English version? I just returned to China and I'm not used to it... It's very

The literary style of online writing becomes an excuse to attack, and it smells as soon as you open it, so you can have a sense of presence🤢 This is not to protect the author, but to protect the rights and interests of the subscribing readers. This is the style of Qiu Guan. If you really blindly follow the advice of someone who has not spent a penny, you will not disgust the original audience. This is fundamentally different from looking for poisonous points.

Not to mention how well the characters are created, the single-round plot is far inferior to that of the previous book. The main plot of the previous book was clearly advanced from the beginning, and the relationship with the heroines can be said to have developed naturally as the plot progressed. However, the plot of this book feels very haphazard in its progression. It is not as clear-cut as the previous book. And there are a lot of memories interspersed with it, which makes it easy to lose immersion. In addition, some modern or Internet-based terms are also more dramatic, and I feel that the male protagonist sometimes behaves greasily and awkwardly.

It's a pity that I changed it a little late, but it doesn't matter. If I change my name, my grades will definitely be much better.

I just finished writing 🐔 and Guan Guan. The previous book was originally very good, and the number of updates in the new book issue is also very good, but I don't know why the results are not very good. I feel that it is at least in the top ten on the new book list. Come on, I've been reading anyway

I hope it won't be like the last book where I only started to recommend women at a later stage. I hope I won't put it in my mouth and won't eat it.

I read the previous book online, and I have supplemented it with this one. I still say the same thing, the author is definitely the next level author, or even better

Like the title, is Qiuguan still a good boy?

Chapter 1... If your writing is not good enough, don't write so much plot description.

Can the heroine have a nicer name? Lin Bugui looks like a boy.

I'm chovy. I heard that Lao Guan is going to die soon. The automatic subscription has been opened early. This month's monthly tickets have been given to Lao Guan. Get some blood back. Don't send Lao Guan any more 😭😭😭

It's getting more and more difficult to write harem works that are so obscure and need to be reviewed.

I am a martial arts person. If I don't read it without green, the author obeys the ancestral precepts and should write green articles, and he will become a god by fire.

Don't have too many female protagonists. There is still a difference between a harem and a stallion. If there are too many heroines, the plot will not be divided enough, and it will be easy to stereotype. Three to seven is about right.

The writing is good, but the plot is not reasonable enough

The emperor wrote the original novel "Cang Hua" very well, and Guan Yunshu's haircut at the end was even more invincible. Although Little Mute doesn't have much plot, it's still well written. The emperor's master's relationship was very abrupt, and the last one, Meng Po, was even more incomprehensible. The queen was a direct failure and was not lovable at all.

Write well. Fans who support you are still on the way. Don't worry.

My grades are not good but I have a lot of monthly tickets. I would like to ask if there is any income from the monthly tickets. Anchors should not be eunuchs because of their bad grades. This is my first time chasing a book. Woohoo😭😭

Author, do you have any meaning in naming the heroines? If there is no special meaning, why don't you choose some nicer names that make them more comfortable to read?

The content of this book focuses on the interaction with the heroine. The previous book occasionally had some supporting characters with quaint stories, but this book almost didn't.

The relationship between Yun Yunzhi and Jiang Buxi still feels a bit forced. It would be better if the male protagonist swore a domineering oath after the two experienced a life and death incident alone. There is still a sudden greasy feeling. The current perception of these two is a bit different and unnatural compared to Guan Yunshu and Zhao Wumian. There is also Mo Zhenci. The past between her and Jiang Buxi was actually quite romantic, but due to the flashback (the sequence was too late), there was a sense of déjà vu as if the wife had fallen from the sky. This feeling of "falling from the sky" or "falling back" dominated the first impression and made it difficult to erase the feeling when the past was explained later. I hope Qiuguan will spend more time in the follow-up writing about the daily interactions between the two, otherwise it will appear that this relationship is "cheap".

The first book progressed too slowly, and this one is a bit too fast. I also said above that it is on the same level as Guan Guan. Is this imitation too much? Originally, Guan Guan's books were seriously homogenized. Yours is too similar.

I haven't read this one yet. I've been following up on the previous novel through Q. This is my starting point to support it. There's nothing sinister about it, right?