People in the Palace: Start by Upgrading the Bone Cotton Palm

It is suggested that the relationship between Liang Jin and Zhao Baosulian should be about staying together through thick and thin, rather than parting ways and severing ties of friendship.

The character of the palace maid is a failure. After staying in the palace for 5 years, there is still such a stupid palace maid.

To be honest, for those who have read the Taiping Sutra, if you show no signs of rebellion, the court will not do anything to you, because the basic content of the Taiping Sutra is to love the country, love the people, love yourself, equality between men and women, and be calm. Why do you feel that the protagonist of the Taiping Sutra looks a bit like the White Lotus Sect?

The princess part is so poorly written. Even if a little palace maid is favored, she is still so arrogant when her backer is about to die. It's a bit pretentious just for the sake of showing off. Her quality is lowered again and again.

Shen Nong is Here: The plot of the main body is extremely poisonous, but the plot of the clone is quite exciting. It is recommended to skip and watch

The front part is pretty good, very creative, but after it's released, it's hard to describe. It's even worse than a novice, and the supporting characters basically have no brains. Don't bring your brains with you. You can barely read it without skipping a beat.

Constantly switching the perspective of the avatar, there are climaxes one after another, and there is no dull period in the plot. It is exciting from beginning to end. The interests of the clone and the protagonist are integrated to satisfy the reader's inner selfish desires. This is one of the few books I have wanted to read in the past two years. The updates are just too slow. It would be great if 30,000 words could be updated every day.

After reading the introduction, I feel that the subject matter is really not good, and I will probably go out on a limb. Have you written an outline?

Can't we write fewer scripts about women? ? Does every clone have to have a woman by its side to advance the plot? ? ?

What are there more than five hundred chapters written about? Why do you have to fight to the death with that Elder Li? The protagonist doesn't look like a good guy, and the bad guy doesn't look like a bad guy. The ten evil men were not killed just to lure him against that Elder Li. Let's read the author's book reviews. Let's take a look at what everyone said about the clone of Hualong Island. All I can say is that if he is not the protagonist, what he does is what a small villain who was not able to do in the early stage would do.

There are more than 700 chapters, and you, a time traveler, still have so many problems, and in the end, you can't even stand firm! The head-changing pig can now transform! You are still competing with the natives in a battle of wits and courage! If you treat your parents like food and clothing like this, your parents will abandon you if they feel cold.

There are obviously 10,000 ways to deal with the relationship between Zhao Bao and Great Master, and they can even let Great Master be the master of the main body. However, the content of the clone is not revealed at all. The plot arrangement of this part is really poor.

To be honest, I'm almost done with it, but the rest of it is full of garbage time. Every time I learn to fight, I'll always give you two or three bad pictures, which especially affects the experience. When telling a story, tell it well. Don't always waste the word count.

The author has watched too many short plays. When I read Chapter 165, I don't know if it is written in the same way later. Don't watch short plays every day. I have completely learned the shortcomings of short plays, such as bets with law enforcement elders and so on. The writing is really messy and the level is not online.

It is strongly recommended to marry her. She will become your anchor and let you know where you are. The most important thing is whether you are a eunuch. There is no woman who is so powerful. It will embarrass the time traveler.

The whole chapter is really messy and the characters cannot stand upright. The pacing is slow and the combat power is suppressed. It's really a stretch.

Exemption is limited, but I still can't see it.

I don't want to subscribe anymore. You used to have three chapters a day, so I don't think it's okay if you delay subscribing. You now have a chapter every day, which is all about verbal battles. You have to beat a monk several times, and it only lasts a few chapters without taking action. It takes a few more chapters to make a move, and then a few more chapters to hit a second-level player. Just be so cool, you will be offended by reading it, let's see who subscribes.

I think the writing is very detailed and detailed. The charm of martial arts style, the coolness of fantasy power, the construction of imperial society, and the details such as the embellishment of incense culture (Dragon's Birthday, Qinan) and wood culture (red sandalwood) are all very powerful. The plot is also imaginative and rich enough. In short, I am looking forward to Liang Jin's follow-up story. , In fact, there is a little doubt. As a power system with several second-level powers gathered into one, it has surpassed the imperial power. If it is free and easy, wouldn't it be more meaningful? Why should we fight for that power? Unless his nature loves power rather than strength. In this case, it is better to write down the charm of power, so that all logic can be understood.

Should the supporting character Lu Qiannan be so smart? When a school beauty is targeted by gangsters, she knows how to tell the teacher instead of going out to negotiate. It's not a naked loan.

The logic is rigorous, and the plot is well-polished, but the writing is too slow, and the battle scenes are sometimes awkwardly written. Liu Yuan, a mentally ill passerby, should have died long ago, but he is forced to connect them in series, which seems very reluctant. Furthermore, there is no distinction between closeness and distance. The woman in her true form can be ignored, but she has to sacrifice a clone to resurrect a little palace maid. Zhao Bao hates the human master who steps on him, but he desperately wants to become a human master.

I'm speechless. Your system is so powerful, but it turns out that you can't even defeat a native. Emperor Shitian's martial arts is so buggy that he can't defeat it. That's nonsense.

The holes are dug too much and cannot be filled by oneself, and the stalls are spread too wide and cannot be closed.

The word count is really amazing. It took more than 900 chapters to overthrow a dynasty and it still hasn't been overthrown.

Too many holes have been dug, and the protagonist's level has been suppressed for too long. It feels like the holes have been dug for the sake of word count. This can be seen from the subscription data. I am afraid that the main plot will not be pulled back.

The world of mist collapsed at the end, this book needs to be resisted so that it doesn't end unfinished

In the later period, the plug-ins began to be weakened. The author has a total of five plug-ins, and the effect in the later period is basically close to zero.

Too few and not enough to watch. Let's raise them first.

Simulation is a story where each story ends and then a new story begins. In this incarnation, every time I see a good plot, there is a new beginning. It is like reading a new novel over and over again. There is not enough interaction between the clones. The more I read, the more boring I am. I gave up after seeing the fourth incarnation.

There are too few updates, although they are considered high quality,