Sword Cauldron Immortal Clan

I read a few chapters and found that it was written in the style of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan. It was written by the same four brothers. Golden Finger can also make immortals without spiritual roots, but the details of the writing are quite different. It is half white and not white, which looks very weird. The Xuanjian Immortal Clan has many uncommon words, but there is no such feeling. 2 Settings, except for the second child who is a cultivator and the four major families, few people can defeat him. His family actually has to borrow money to live. What does an ordinary family have to do? The character design is also a bit worse.

If it can continue at this level, I feel it is already top-notch among the family stories I have read.

Come to Intelligent Promotion, help me collect it, read it, and try to test the waters. You can't go on the shelves naked 🥺🥺

It has just been released for the third round. It should be on the shelves during the third round. Thank you fellow Taoists for your support.

It feels pretty good, why isn't it popular enough?

The writing has the feeling of a masterpiece, and the group portrait essay is a masterpiece if it is well written. Being able to persist in writing is a great thing. I will update

Not bad, not bad, better than Xuanjian, better than other family texts

Not bad, but I often make typos, and my IQ is online

The author is either an alien demon or a veteran author. His writing style doesn't feel like a newcomer's.

Author, you have a problem now. The plot is too slow. It's not that slow, it's a plot without a climax. There are more than 100 chapters. It feels like it's all small fights without any big plans. It's a bit tiring to read.

It hasn't been updated in two days. Don't be a eunuch. It's better than most of the books on the list.

The writing is very good, don't stop updating 😭

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "Cleaning the Sutra Pavilion at the beginning, I will complete the incomplete skills", mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ online will not reduce the intelligence, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

This book has stopped at this point. I really can't stand it.

I gave another monthly pass today, and it's still the same problem. The main story is too bland. I've only found two climax points so far. The first one is the first time I became an immortal and was cheated, and the second one is the beast tide. This time, the story is too bland, there is no climax point, and it's boring to watch. Moreover, it is accompanied by the fact that the plot progress is too slow, almost 200 chapters. I think the plot can be sped up. Since I am writing a group portrait, I don't have to be afraid of death, have more conflicts in the story, speed up the protagonist's family, and describe the next generation more through the plot. This is my suggestion. I was looking forward to this book at the beginning, but now it doesn't work. It doesn't have the climax of the early stage of Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but has already suffered from the problems of the later stage of Xuanjian Immortal Clan. The plot is boring for a long time, and the updates are slow. I'm still looking forward to this book. It's actually pretty good. The author should think carefully about how to write it. This is my opinion.

Come back and write quickly. Don't stop.

A good book, with smooth logic and diverse characters. One of three books to follow.

Imitate Xuanjian, the writing is okay, but the plot logic is not strong