Starting from the Family Tree of a Poor Family to Create an Immortal Clan

Spring: Spring (beginning of spring, rain) Struggle for spring (Jingzhe, vernal equinox) Tibetan spring (Qingming, Guyu) Summer: Ming summer (beginning of summer, Xiaoman) Severe summer (awnzhong, summer solstice) Long summer (slight heat, great heat) Autumn: Chengqiu (beginning of autumn, end of heat) Golden autumn (white dew, autumnal equinox) Suqiu (cold dew, frost) Winter: Long winter (beginning of winter, light snow) Silent winter (heavy snow, winter solstice) Dead winter (slight cold, severe cold)

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This book is well written. The advantage is the setting, and the disadvantage is also the setting. If I look at it purely from a reader's perspective, using solar terms should not have anything to do with the five virtues of Xuanjian. I know that yours is a text similar to Xuanjian, and it must be related to the system of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but you have obviously created a new setting. If you have a setting you want to write, it is best not to associate it with the five virtues and five manifestations of Xuanjian. Such a setting system is too huge, and the solar terms are already complicated enough. If it is related to the five virtues and five manifestations of Xuanjian, it will be impossible to control it. Moreover, Xuanjian's systems will look better if they are combined with various heroes. Your character creation is obviously a bit bland. My suggestion is that at most it should be linked to the heavenly stems and the earthly branches, and just briefly introduce which solar terms belong to Dinghuo, Guishui and so on. And the author, if you want to write a group portrait, don't write it like 🐔. The most important problem now is that your characters are not established. I have read the last chapter before charging. If you just read it as a fresh setting article, it is still It's good, but readers have much less desire to subscribe. You'd better not write about what happened to those who returned to their hometowns. Instead, write about your solar terms. Which solar terms have pitfalls, which one is in jail, which one's founder has the kind of character that Liang Zhuang has? It's also best not to change perspectives or characters frequently. The part where Xu Xuan appears at the beginning of Da Chi Xian Sect and recalls his master taking him in is very well written, especially the plot after Da Chi Xian Sect's Purple Mansion is also very good. If you want to refer to it, I think the best way to write it is to refer to the story after Da Chi Xian Sect's Purple Mansion. I haven't watched Qingwu Immortal Clan. There is also someone who started from predicting death and became a Taoist by slaying dragons at the same time as you. Compared with yours, this book has the advantage of not being a group portrait and having a fixed perspective. Moreover, this book has a lot of problems in the early stage. It was written before chapter 30. It was very stream-of-consciousness. If you are not a person who likes to read slow books, it will be very confusing. I gave up at that time. However, the author later changed the way of writing, especially after chapter 30, his big plot unfolded, the shaping of characters and the reversal of the plot made people want to continue reading. If you want to learn from Da Chi, don't learn from his beginning. You can learn from his plot writing after the Purple Mansion. If you want to learn from Beheading Jiao to Become Dao, then learn from his characterization and writing. The characterization method of 🐔 is difficult to learn. It is better to learn from the authors of the same period. The two books I mentioned are both mystical essays. You can also look at other fairy tale writing methods. If you can write something of your own, one more suggestion is that you should not borrow the content of Xuanjian when it comes to your chapter names, especially today's water falls and thunder rises. This in Xuanjian is related to the offline of Dongfang Yu, which involves a lot of subsequent plots and foreshadowings, and raises the expectations of people who have read it too much. Your chapter title is too big, but the content is very bland. People who have read Xuanjian don't want to subscribe to this chapter. I will continue to follow you and order your subsequent chapters to see if any of them stand out. If so, I will order them all. Come on

After Xuanjian, all the works of the family cultivating immortals were compared with Xuanjian. What was copied here and what was borrowed there. I was watching "Xian Jiao" at the same time. It was not a family cultivating immortality, but the system almost copied Xuan Jian. Of course, that doesn't stop it from being a good work. Although this genealogy of a poor family is about family cultivation, the "reference" to Xuanjian in terms of the cultivation system is far less than that of "Immortal Jiao". What's even more amazing is that the author's writing style can be called "wen Congzi shun", which makes reading like a spring breeze. Perhaps in terms of overall writing ability, the author is not as good as a chicken for the time being. But in terms of writing skills, I think the author is better than a chicken!

The green rain on the mulberry trees urges the people to return, and the mysterious female crosses the lonely boat before the wind. The white gravel smoke gives birth to spring, and the faith is gone, and the golden thread locks the lotus in autumn.

I feel that level improvement is not the main thing. Since I have learned from Xuanjian and promoted the foundation building, Zifu is holding me down, and I have been promoted to Zifu with Jindan at the top, I am still struggling no matter what. The main thing is to stir up the mood every once in a while, whether it is a simple matter or a so-called refreshing one. If you are too slow, you may lose some readers. The author still has to be careful. After all, there is only one mysterious book. Scholars live and die.

Every Tuesday is for catching up on reading pk. If you want to keep reading, I hope you can come back every Tuesday to read it. This way you won't be addicted to new books. Thank you very much 😭

Who are you? The owl actually did your voiceover🙂

For new books, do not switch scenes frequently. Quantum Reading has a lot of readers, and changing the perspective frequently will dissuade many people. In addition, changing the perspective will affect the reading experience. Some readers will save books, but this is a new book that is not popular. If many people save books, it will affect the performance. Moreover, many people forget about it after saving it, and it may be left on the bookshelf for several years without touching it. In addition, it is a genealogical fairy weapon that is basically similar to the family, which is different from Xuanjian; there is really no need to create an illusory fairy palace and fabricate heavenly soldiers and generals; since you want to write your own things, you can just learn from part of the Xuanjian system. If you create a vain fairy palace, Xuanjian readers will be tired of it.

The Jiang family is obviously being watched by the Zifu. At this time, Yuhe's cultivation suddenly jumped from the early stage of Qi training to the late stage. If I were this Zifu, if I were this Zifu, I would follow suit and come to visit the Li family at night. If the Jiang family didn't 🐢🐢, then they would have to be exterminated.

It has a strong flavor of Xuanjian, but I hope you don't imitate it too much. It's very important who speaks the Taoism setting, but it's a bit inconsistent for a random character to be able to talk. If there are too many people, the plot will be confusing, and it should be a little too short. The scenes when Xizhi and Xuanfeng are in Qingchi are less important and the focus is on the family.

It's a good work. In order to reflect the Jiang family's plight, the article is a bit shabby. As for the monks, whether they are practicing Qi or building foundations, their combat prowess is real and a bit overwhelming. I even wonder if the monks in martial arts novels I read are so weak in combat? The rest is nothing poisonous, and the writing is very good.

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As of Chapter 179

In fact, we can learn more from the plots in history books, such as the chapter about Ji Dengqi, which draws on the story of Gou Jian, King of Yue, and also sews the story of the three arrows of Li Cunxu from the Five Dynasties. The novel is nothing more than the story of the past, the story of reality, and the story of the future.

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After the plot is unfolded, it will become more and more interesting. If the readers can be retained in the front, it will really have a chance to take off.

Come on, I feel like you are a fellow Taoist with empty certificates.

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I was too eager to push the plot without explaining anything clearly.

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About the setting: I have read 200 chapters so far, and I can see that I have been influenced by a lot of Xuanjian, but I also have my own ideas and innovations, and the solar terms setting is also relatively novel. Overall, it is very good About the plot: In general, the flaws are not hidden, but there are many small problems. For example, Yuhe's cultivation level, I have seen 20 0 is a 28-year-old Foundation Establishment that just broke through the Foundation Establishment. It is too fast. When refining Qi, the transition from the third level of Qi Refining to the seventh level of Qi Refining is too fast (I know that I have an acquired destiny, but these four levels of cultivation can be said to appear out of thin air. It is not difficult to check if I really want to), and there is almost no cover. Isn't it easy for a thoughtful person to find out? And about the genealogy, the current feeling is that the mystery is not created enough. For example, the old storyteller knows that it has a plot role, but the problem is that the mystery is inevitably reduced, and so on, but overall it is still very good Regarding the writing: several poems in the book The poems and lyrics are good, but other aspects are a little unsatisfactory. For example, at the beginning, because the characters lack the relationship between calling each other, the memory of the characters is not deep enough and it is not easy to sort out Overall, this is a very good new book, and it has been fully ordered.

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In fact, I have a lot of questions. I have only read Chapter 20. That is what I read in the book. It is not difficult to accept Qi. Once the protagonist comes, all the Qi are received and the whole family cultivates immortality. Before the previous generation of immortal cultivators died, no one tried to find wild Qi to receive Qi, including going to the Vernal Equinox Platform, right? There is also Qi that is found in other places, and this Qi can be found by ordinary people, but it is not impossible to find it, and it has not been cut off for such a long time. I don't understand it very well. The second protagonist didn't explain anything. He woke up in the family tree at the beginning, and then spared no effort to help others. Why? What's the relationship? When I woke up and finished helping out for a while, I felt like I was very close to this family. I don't quite understand, I'm very confused (to make a pudding, this family tree is inherently magical, and then the protagonist travels into this family tree, and because it records the affairs of this family, he is affected by this family tree, and then develops a good impression of this family) Okay, you didn't explain a word) The third reason is to accept Qi. The protagonist's family has been separated before, and no one is a cultivator. When the protagonist comes, they all have to cultivate immortality. Not only to cultivate immortality, but also to hope to build a foundation. Shouldn't it be to accept Qi first? And it's also what I said before about not accepting Qi. No matter the grade, you must first accept Qi. Only if there is an immortal cultivator in the family can you keep it. If you don't have one, then choose the grade. Then the genealogy of the fourth main character of the main genealogy appears to be magical, and no one suspects it. As long as you patch it up before going to do it, the family owner knows that there is something strange in this genealogy handed down from the ancestors, so it makes sense. You didn't explain anything, and the special ability appeared directly, huh. Then the fifth force is the first force to be merged into the protagonist's family. I have said before that there is a well that collects Qi and raises a spiritual energy. Where did that spiritual energy go? If you didn't explain that his family could accept it, then why would his family be cut off? Even if you don't want to sell or trade the well, or transfer the well during this period, you must give their family a breath, and then try to collect the breath, then you can't just throw it away in a panic, put it somewhere, and watch your family die. And I remember that the old man is over 100 years old, and I remember that no one came to the vernal equinox every four years. The fifth thing is that their main house is all built with foundations. You introduced there are several foundations at the beginning, why are you afraid of a poor family like you? To put it bluntly, didn't there be black gloves before going directly? His family has a black glove that will wipe out your family, so what's the point? What's the balance? Really, with such a huge gap in strength, there is nothing to calculate. Including I haven't seen what you mentioned before about the superior cultivator taking charge of the Zhou family. I haven't seen it. You said it's okay to have a powerful force in charge, and can your family's foundation-building power be compared with the Han households of several Qi-refining families? Even if you are destroyed, the Shangzong will not say anything. To put it bluntly, Hanhu is just a tool Also, you are a foundation-building family. You have strangled the skills to death. Their cultivation skills are slow. They have just started to practice. This is You are afraid of being too cautious at the beginning. Again, you are afraid of being exterminated directly, or if you are immortal, it is rare to see someone's rank. If you directly send out a branch or the main line to marry, then the family will be merged into the same family, and after a few generations of differentiation, it will be gone. There is a danger. If you don't write about the Foundation Building Zhou family and just say it is the Qi Refining family, then it would be completely reasonable. So far in the novel, I think the most valuable thing is the four seasons system. There is too much logic. There were mistakes and omissions, and the previous transition was also very blunt. (I had so many mistakes and omissions when I read it before. Well, maybe you told me that I didn't see it clearly. It really became more and more awkward for me as I read it, because I listened to the novel before going to bed and read it)

Looking at the introduction, the pig's trotter is a genealogy? What's the point of this?

It seems that Zhou Wang in this book will not be completely hidden like 🐢. In the song it is obvious that a family tree has been discovered.

Isn't Liu Zhaozhi a mortal? Why did the latest chapter change to 60% of Qi training? I just voted in March. Authors should be careful when writing books.

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It's quite good. I just ordered it all and voted for a monthly ticket. I have only read more than 20 chapters now. Has Yuhe Xingchuan's fate card been solved? After searching the full text of the fate card, I found that there will be no follow-up to chapter 61. Please spoiler whether their fate card will be solved later 😭