The Myth Begins with the Lotus Lantern

How long should I keep suppressing it? I'm already impatient to watch it, and it's frustrating to watch so little.

I specially reward 100 starting coins to remind everyone that the writing is good and the plot is very sadistic. If you don't like to read sadistic stories, don't read it. Silly children, run away!

My suggestion is to run 😰 and watch Yue. The female channel will be converted into a male channel, right? Apart from falling in love, it is just falling in love. The core is still feudal, there is no fairy road, no pleasure, no grudges, and no tenderness between men and women. The whole reading experience is just petty, and the above.

The plot of Taurus is super bad. The Queen Mother claims to have a problem. What does the word "Aijia" mean? It's really funny that there are eunuchs in Yaochi Immortal Palace.

Forget it, all the abuse articles are too literary and I don't like to read them. If it were in the past, I might have liked to read them, such as The Monkey King and The Age of Darkness. I used to read them with great interest, but now I don't like them anymore. I just want to read some enjoyable articles. I wish the author good luck.

It's too wordy, too much mental description, too eager to show off skills, and too little plot advancement. The author should be female. Not that many people care about the inner drama of the male protagonist and the female protagonist. If you can't win, you will die. If you want to win, endure loneliness/tempering. Is it so long-winded that it touches the world? Heaven and earth are ruthless

When I saw the chapter where an innocent cowherd boy was killed at random, I felt that there was a big problem. One killed people at will because of his own preferences, and the other thought that after a few reincarnations, he would feel sorry for himself and kill others? This kind of thing can only be a monster in the future. He has simply given up on being a human being. He is worse than a crab (Fa Hai's previous life). He should just delete it from the bookshelf. It is not worth reading.

The author of the sand sculpture, a passerby who didn't appear in the original work, raised her combat power to such a high level, even if it was high, he also belittled the protagonist of the original work. I don't look at the monkeys in my Journey to the West fandom. Do I look at your two fishes? Just because you belittle monkeys like this, there are still a bunch of troll netizens trying to clean you up. Let these people go read the original stories you made up. You might as well create your own original stories and entertain yourself, and you can save the money and just focus on Journey to the West. . I really don't understand. If you want to write that he is great, then write that he is great. Why are you using someone else as a supporting character? The fanfic must be careful not to belittle the protagonist of the original work. The system you draw from, others have their own protagonists. Whether it is great or not is not because you, the author, said twice that this is better than this, but because you wrote it yourself. However, the male protagonist in your novel is another softie, and the heroine just writes that she relies on her own talent and hard work. You didn't give her a golden finger (dark blue one), so why did she deviate from the original and become more powerful than Monkey King Erlang Shen? Don't smash the bowl if you rely on Journey to the West to make a living. There is nothing wrong with monkeys.

It doesn't feel any better, it's all frustration, repayment, withdrawal, withdrawal

When you're drunk, you're already a fairy and a "eunuch" writes female videos. You're used to writing about them, right? Gods and eunuchs are convinced 😥

Journey to the West fanfic has become a nerd-fighting novel. Isn't the author a female?

It's outrageous. It's amazing that Princess Halloween can become a great supporting actress without being cut off. This is no longer an abuser. The protagonist is born to be a dog. Even if you abuse her a thousand times, the protagonist can still be a dog for you. You really suffered a loss if you cast yourself as a fish. You should cast yourself as a dog 🤭

The female author is awesome. The protagonist is frustrated all the way, so she doesn't get through it smoothly. She is suppressed all the way. That's awesome.

The details written by the author are still very good, but don't overestimate Erlangshen. Although he wants to protect his sister, he will not persecute the people around Yang Chan. Except for the animated version, the other Erlangshen are not simple villains. He has great love for the people of the three realms, although only the TV series version has great love that changes the rules of heaven. The only thing that wants to impress Yang Chan is sincerity and companionship. Otherwise, Erlangshen will never make it easy for the protagonist. If your protagonist is worse than Liu. The comment section will definitely be trolled by then. 4 monthly tickets are offered to hope that the author will work hard.

The last few chapters are written like a beggar wondering how and what the emperor eats every day. Immortals and gods still consider this and that when deciding a case, just like hiding their ears and stealing the bell.

I won't say anything else. What happened to these three chapters yesterday? Don't want to write anymore? Sudden poisoning? I don't even want to say how I feel about raising a child, but I can still watch it. You suddenly poisoned me? Do you want to be so disgusting? And what is a Taurus? Where does something that doesn't rank come from?

Can the plot of being a pet be over? I can understand why you started to be a pet. You just kept doing it.,,,,,,

No wonder so many people say this book is not good. Most of the known negative writings of the genre are combined. Fast food is not like fast food, Xianxia is not like Xianxia, ​​your female channel is not like female channel, and love is not like love, but these are all related.

It's hard to get results, but you do this every day

The relationship between the two fishes in the early stage didn't start well, but the subsequent plot from the Dragon Palace to the Heavenly Court was just a mess💩. Watch less Gongdou emotional dramas and more Baijia Forum.

In the Stallion 🐴 article, all the females will be on it, the Bull Demon King's wife will be on it, and the Queen Mother Nuwa Guanyin will also be on it in the future!

The part about finding the Jade-faced Princess immediately felt like the quality was off the line. I suggested that these chapters be withdrawn and rewritten to bring down the failure.

Updated once every five days, 1,000 words at a time. Author, you have made history at the starting point, did you know?

I'm tired of writing a story that ends with the ambiguity of the harem. Don't write like this in the next book.

The author went too far. Is it difficult for the author not to sleep? The author can conceive the plot and story content in his sleep, and then type it out when he has time. I don't believe that the author is so busy every day and doesn't even have time to type thousands of words for a few minutes.

It was still being updated. I thought it was too late, but accidentally opened it and found that it was updated again.

Have you also written a book called The Fire Scale King?

I hope this novel can be updated and completed. Don't abandon the first book halfway. Please update it soon.